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Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 - 11:11 pm · For: Chapter 6: Past Connections
lmao....
..This makes me want to go to the mall and inspect some male ass!.

Author's Response: I wouldn't do that too openly X3 Some guys might take offense to it! XDrnrn- Yumi


Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 - 10:40 pm · For: Chapter 2: The Family Heir
Ahh.. I thought "little brother" was spelled
"otoutou..."

Author's Response: . . . -____- Please refer to my fic "Japanese Lessons" for the information on that. T__Trnrn- Yumi


Name: electrictoaster (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/08 - 05:20 pm · For: Chapter 7: Hyuuga Dinner
And so the flickering flame of attraction ignites...
hopefully soon.

:]

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: hehehe, it's already begun. . . XD You might want to take a look at one small part in the chapter during the dinner. . . It's discreet, but definately there! ^__^ Thanks for the review!!!rnrn- Yumi ^^


Name: suzieuchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 - 11:41 am · For: Chapter 7: Hyuuga Dinner
aw i love it! hehe when naruto called Sasuke 'dude!' he sounded a bit like me! ^^;; loved the 'intensive power-play' and cant wait for this promised dinner! ja ne! xx

Author's Response: I love the power-play too! ^___^ It's my favorite part of writing stories! ^^ Thanks!rnrn- Yumi


Name: Dragon (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/08 - 11:27 am · For: Chapter 7: Hyuuga Dinner
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Wow, if I keep getting reviews like these, of COURSE I'll update. . . as soon as the sickness from the plane-ride home goes away ^^;; Thanks!!rnrn- Yumi


Name: Sakuranzu (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/08 - 10:11 pm · For: Chapter 7: Hyuuga Dinner
I swear I was thinking of this story today. So happy for an update n_n
Poor Hina-chan u_u But Naruto totally just asked Sasuke out hehe. Good job. Minor typos like "t hen" but it's legible....well thats the only one that stood out at me. And you do know the rule of:
"This is a sentence of dialogue(comma)" he said.
as opposed to
"This is dialogue(period)" This is a completely new thought like illustrating an action after the dialogue.

Neji's prolly just protective,,,but I think NejiHina would be awesome too ;D

Author's Response: lol, that's funny!rnrnI've been typing up this story on a laptop (which I'm SOO not used to), so I'm not surprised that there are errors in there. Right now I'm just too sick to correct them (I got the sniffles and the runs and everything else on the plane back from my vacation), but I'll try to get that soon! . . . and I'm not sure how people would react to a NejiHinata pairing, seeing as that "Ghost Writer" all but fell through in comparison to this story. TT___TT Thanks!!rnrn- Yumi


Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 - 08:23 pm · For: Chapter 7: Hyuuga Dinner
Hehe Naruto is a persistent little thing, now isn't he? Great chapter ^_^

Author's Response: lol, yup!! ^__^ Naruto is awesomeness! rnrn- Yumi ^^


Name: Vixkill (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/08 - 05:30 pm · For: Chapter 7: Hyuuga Dinner
interesting twists and power-plays. is there perhaps a reason why you know so much about handling polotics?

Author's Response: Nah, not really. I come from a mostly Japanese household, so I know a lot about that side of the family and how "stationed" you are by birth, whether by sex or by birth order. I just really really really REALLY like to work with the richer end of the Japanese culture as it is today because there's still a lot of old-style thinking involved. . . They are friggin' awesome! XD Thanks for the review!!rnrn- Yumi


Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 - 05:25 pm · For: Chapter 7: Hyuuga Dinner
haha i love your story. The chracters are all so permiscues (spell check that one...) it makes me laugh. plus i love the plot ^^ keep updating for sure

Author's Response: Thanks! I will as soon as I'm over this head-cold! ^__^rnrn- Yumi


Name: Vixkill (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/08 - 02:22 am · For: Chapter 6: Past Connections
funny stuff man! i'm off to inspect your other fics

Author's Response: yay! I have a new constant reviewer!! XD Thanks!!rnrn- Yumi


Name: AshNight1214 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 - 08:37 pm · For: Chapter 6: Past Connections
ahahahaha!! This is great! I'm sorry I didn't read it sooner!!

Author's Response: lol yay!! ^___^rnrn- Yumi


Name: AshNight1214 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 - 08:00 pm · For: Chapter 2: The Family Heir
Lolita? Nani?

Author's Response: Lolita is Sasuke's maid. The name just came to me and stuck in my head. . . -_____-;;;rnrn- Yumi


Name: suzieuchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 07:52 am · For: Chapter 6: Past Connections
yay another chapter! i loved the friendly banter in this one, really great!

Author's Response: ^__^ Thanks!!rnrn- Yumi


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 05:38 am · For: Chapter 6: Past Connections
Lol yay I got special thanks! xD
Omg that was a really funny chapter! Literally laughing at my monitor xD Sasuke chasing Naruto with a newspaper was random, but funny. That gay butt thing is priceless xD I've never heard that before, but it just might be true..
Nice development! I can't wait to read more about Gaara, and hopefully soon :D

Author's Response: lol, I couldn't think of anything else that would be appropriate without being too violent. ^^;; Thanks for reading!!rnrn- Yu-chan ^___^


Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 - 07:48 pm · For: Chapter 6: Past Connections
-Giggles- Oh wow, the 'butt' thing was a great touch. I can't believe how funny this is, really good writing too. I love reading stories with proper grammar and spelling ect. Great job ^_^

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! ^__^rnrn- Yumi


Name: Tanya (Anonymous) · Date: 04/02/08 - 04:37 am · For: Chapter 5: Wound Up
That's a promising beginning. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next. Just, please, take your time and create a wonderful story.
Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: lol, thanks! Don't worry. I will! ^^rnrn- Yumi


Name: ievutec (Anonymous) · Date: 31/01/08 - 10:57 pm · For: Chapter 1: A Change in Schedules
That is a wonderfull story *sniff*, where do you people get ideas like this? I loved it XD

Author's Response: lol, inspiration (even for the most crappy stories) come from everywhere and anywhere. . . It's really a phenomenon!rnrn- Yumi


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 - 05:46 pm · For: Chapter 5: Wound Up
lol but this IS a good story! but I'll go check out some others mmkay? xD nice chappie, your character contrast was effective and very cute xD

Author's Response: lol, thanks! You don't know how much I appreciate that! ^____^rnrn- Yumi ^^


Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 30/01/08 - 11:16 pm · For: Chapter 4: An Eventful Dinner
I love your fic !!! I really can't wait to see the next !!!!! xD

Author's Response: lol, thanks! ^___^ I'll be updating presently! ^^rnrn- Yumi


Name: Sero (Anonymous) · Date: 28/01/08 - 06:29 am · For: Chapter 4: An Eventful Dinner
- i really like this story, please continue. I love the way Sasuke is slowly getting pulled into truble by his own cleverness. Cant wait for them to start living together. I hope Sasuke starts finding Naruto atractive before Naruto starts liking Sasuke.

Author's Response: lol, Sasuke does seem to be in over his head, huh? I actually haven't decided who will fall for who first! XD I'll see if I can accomidate to your wish. ^^rnrn- Yumi ^__^


Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 07:21 pm · For: Chapter 4: An Eventful Dinner
I like this story a lot, it's very funny and has great potential. I also admire the use of the Japanese language, however a few of the words have been 'misspelled' (I know it's hard to do when they are not written in their mother language, but bare with me.) such as 'otouto' and 'dobe' means dead last whereas 'Usurotonkachi' means something along the lines of moron. I hate sounding like an arrogant prick, so don't take this as me being an ass. I really like this story, it's one of the best I've read. Please keep it going! XD

Author's Response: @___@;; okay, I'm gonna have to make a HUGE note about Japanese spellings to people, because I've explained "otooto" twice already in other fics. Anyway, according to my text book, there are two ways of spelling 'otooto'. The way you write it (and the way I write it by hand) is technically the correct way that it is spelled in Japanese, since the middle letters are "toh" and "u" and you don't pronouce the "u" as it is. It simply elongates the "o" sound in "toh". And that's where my typed spelling comes in. Since the "u" is not really pronouced, there is a school of thought that says that it should not be an "u" rather another "o" to emphasize that it is an elongated "toh". For some reason I can't seem to type it "otouto" without my fingers telling to to backspace and spell it "otooto" (even now it's hard for me to leave it there -___-;;). On another note, thanks for the clarification about "dobe" and "usurakontachi", but I'm not so sure. I seriously don't know where "dobe" comes it, and every time I've seen "usurakontachi" translated into English subs it's been "dead-last". *shrug* I wish I could just look it up in a dictionary!! Thanks for the review!!!rnrn- Yumi ^^


Name: suzieuchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 05:18 pm · For: Chapter 4: An Eventful Dinner
haha sucks to be sakura! great update as usual cant wait for the next chapter! ^^

Author's Response: lol, thanks!! The support from anti-Sakura people is making me think of more and more evil things to do!!! XDrnrn- Yumi ^^


Name: evildarklore (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 05:06 pm · For: Chapter 4: An Eventful Dinner
YES!!! I HATE SAKURA!!!! I LOVE SEEING HER IN PAIN!!!!!!!

Author's Response: YAY!!!! MORE ANTI-SAKURA PEOPLE!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD awesomeness. . . ^__^rnrn- Yumi ^^


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 04:51 pm · For: Chapter 4: An Eventful Dinner
Yayz! an update! this story's looking really good :D
About the testtube babies, I THINK it was possible to splice sperm or something to get both fathers material...but that may have not been real xD. Other than that, it's a simple matter of having some sperm from one father injected into a surrogate mother who carries the baby to term. I think you pay her or something.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's about as much information that I've gotten from that. . . it's weird, huh? X3 Thanks for leaving a review!! You're awesome!!! ^___^rnrn- Yumi ^^


Name: amisa (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/08 - 11:28 pm · For: Chapter 3: Friday Morning
haha that was funny.... poor sakurachan.. emm wonder what sort of trouble the both of them will face

Author's Response: Well, a lot of the "troubles" will likely just be in their heads. I haven't quite worked out all the kinks yet. ^^;;; Thanks for the review!!rnrn- Yumi ^__^


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