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Reviews For Youthful Love

Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/13 - 02:14 pm · For: Chapter 11
Been awhile since this was updated and now I'm hooked!


Name: Dag (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 - 10:58 am · For: Chapter 3
Well, I've finally got round to reading this story, and its great! You stay very true to Lee's character. The things he says in this story I can imagine him saying in the manga/anime, so great job! Lol he's such a gentleman. I feel sorry for Kuri though, she has a sad past. Sweet story, keep it up :D

Author's Response: thank you very much! I really have to try when it comes to Lee, he's a very hard character to replicate. And yea, he is a gentleman, but i figured that would just be his style. As far as Kuri goes, well, that past sorta popped up in my mind cuz my dad's a cop.


Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 29/03/08 - 09:12 pm · For: Chapter 1
It fills me with remorse to see a lack of updates on your story. 25 i say 25 out of ten. I'm so messed up right now but fics rule!!!!!!!!
magic white jelly beans are crawling out of my head wound where the flies landed. fuckin doughnut

Author's Response: ok, that was a strange review. Oh well.


Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 19/03/08 - 05:08 pm · For: Chapter 10
I'm not new anymore!!!(kind of) I have read tons of fics now and I wanted to let you know your's is still kick ass. r u really only 13? that's amazing. I feel kind of bad at life now because i can't write worth shit

Author's Response: haha, I know what you mean, being 13 sucks. Don't feel bad about being bad a writing, I used to be bad too.


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 11/03/08 - 09:03 pm · For: Chapter 10
i wouldn't mind the cliff hangers so much if you updated more ...so please update more

Author's Response: I would update more, but school is suffocating me at the moment.


Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 - 01:03 pm · For: Chapter 10
Hehe i bet he is abit freak out. lol

Author's Response: yeah, the next chapter will have him really freakin out.


Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 06/03/08 - 04:56 pm · For: Chapter 9
I like your story allot. I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, it will be difficult though, my mom decided to take away my computer because she thought it was affecting my cleaning skills.


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 - 02:31 pm · For: Chapter 8
You're not sick minded! deep down everybody thinks about something sick. Everyone in my class laughs whenever my teacher mentions nuts, sticks or go down. It's just nature. I think yur a talented writer who's ahead of your maturity level. People think thirteen year olds are in the dark about life like little kid. Please! you guys know just as much as us! Yur just not as exposed to it as we are.^_^

Author's Response: That is so true, I have a select amount of friends and they are mostly at my level of maturity, although some either choose not to show it or have been taught to ignore the jokes and comments we make.


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 - 07:01 pm · For: Chapter 1
ok then. Hey i didnt know u were thirteen? I'm sixteen hahahahahaha. I'm older ^_^

Author's Response: yeah, it sucks that i'm so young and people seem to think that I'm sick minded because I write stuff like Youthful Love


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 - 04:41 pm · For: Chapter 2
I'm sorry u may have answered this question already but, What does Kuri look like?(hair and eye color) And I want permission to place her and Lee's offspring in my story ^_^

Author's Response: Sorry about that. I forgot to put her appearance in. She's about 5'6'' and has waist length brown,thick, wavy hair. Her features are very soft and she has eyes darker than Sakura's but just as green. If you're going to put their kids in one of you're stories I would like you to send it to me before posting it so I can read it.


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 - 04:19 pm · For: Chapter 5
awwwwww! I totally cried! poor Kuri! I hope Sasuke gets the Asian kicked out of his emo ass! Way to go Lee! Comfort her right to bed...LOL

Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean, the comforting thing isn't exactly the point though.


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 - 04:11 pm · For: Chapter 4
Hehheh, she brushed her teeth

Author's Response: Yeah, I had to add that in.


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 - 04:03 pm · For: Chapter 3
lol! Lee is like a myspace stalker but in real life. ^_^ By the way, i know how u feel wit the reviews. its annoying when the read count sky rockets and u get no reviews.

Author's Response: Yes, it's really annoying.


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 - 03:49 pm · For: Chapter 1
lol, Lee didn't want to touch her goodies ^_^

Author's Response: I guess that's one way to look at it.


Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 07/02/08 - 02:32 pm · For: Chapter 8
I've always wanted lee to have a girlfriend. I like your story very much. I don't know how often people comment on sites like this as I have never written a fanfic, so i wanted to assure you that you have at least one very appreciative reader.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I really appreciate someone new once in a while. I hope you read it my next chapters too.


Name: KankuroHidanGirl724 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 05:19 pm · For: Chapter 7
Awesome story! Can't wait for more!!! *hint hint* ---Kyashi

Author's Response: I totally agree... that's an odd thing to say considering that I write the story and have to use a ton of my time on it. :)


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 02:26 pm · For: Chapter 7
Lee is definitely sensitive, but I think you need to make him more random. He should yell more or something when he was crying for hapiness.

Author's Response: I agree, but at that monent he wasn't overly happy, it was more of a relieved thing... he wants her to join them... I just didn't say anything about it.


Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 01:02 pm · For: Chapter 7
Wow!

Author's Response: I'm not quite sure how to take your comment, I hope it's a good thing.


Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 - 11:54 am · For: Chapter 6
Haha lol. Ne-kun. Haaaa great story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I thought that the Ne-kun thing was pretty funny too.


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 - 06:38 pm · For: Chapter 6
looks like lee's gonna have a little competition hehe. It'd be funny if he was "ne-chan" because "nee-chan" is like sister but I guess that'd be confusing 6_6

Author's Response: I'm afraid you're wrong there's no competition for Lee in Neji, he's stuck on Tenten. The competition comes later in the story, in the form of a sand ninja.


Name: KankuroHidanGirl724 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 - 05:50 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hey, great story! I can't for it to continue...! lol, *Kyashi waits patietly in Suna w/ Kankuro...* Love the story anyways -->WILL LOVE IT MORE LATER THOUGH...heehee

Author's Response: yep.


Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 - 02:20 pm · For: Chapter 5
Aw poor Kuri. Good story.

Author's Response: yes, poor Kuri.


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 - 06:49 pm · For: Chapter 5
(whipps out machine gun of vengece)*AAAAAHHHH* You destroyed Sasu-kun's honor! :RAMBONE!!!!:

jks jks. So you made Sasuke a rapist. He rapes people all the time! If all the fanfiction universes were true, Sasuke would surpass Itachi for rape counts.

anyway that's why I"m assuming you're looking for a bullet proof vest. But this is a good chappie so throw away your vest and be proud of your work k?

Author's Response: my dad's vest won't exactly fit me, I'd better go get one.


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 - 08:06 pm · For: Chapter 4
well since I did read and enjoy I guess I'll review to boost your morale :D

It's looking good so far, I wasn't expecting Naruto and Hinata to actually be married and having a second child. Anyway, good job, Lee doesn't get enough action ;) keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks. The whole Naruto and Hinata thing will come more into play much later in the story. Untl then they aren't importatnt. And you are absolutely right, Lee doesn't get enough action what so ever.


Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 31/12/07 - 06:21 am · For: Chapter 3
Aw cool story so far. Please continue.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've been working on this story for a while and I pretty much know where I'm going with it (although you can probably guess). Still, any thoughts, criticism, or ideas would be welcome.


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