Reviews For A Formal Rival. A Secret Crush.
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 - 01:26 pm · For: Chapter 5
I hope you update again soon. I came across you story a while back and waited for an update, but it never came, so I figured you had dropped the story. I'm glad your muses have spoken, up this really is interesting, I love it.
Name: Star Princess (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 - 10:37 am · For: Chapter 5
Oh my God! I could KILL Sakura. Thanks for another update.
Name: Star Princess (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 - 03:28 pm · For: Chapter 4
This is great. Please update soon!
Name: ainarielanarion (Signed) · Date: 24/05/08 - 04:32 pm · For: Chapter 4
This is a beautiful story with Kyubii as a female wanting to protect her kin..... I love this idea.... GREAT STORY!!!!
Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 18/05/08 - 03:57 am · For: Chapter 4
Hmm. It was grate, but you should have make paragraphs in Kyuubi's speak. It 's hard to read. But go on. I'd like to get Kyuubi into the "real" life.
Name: Hinagirl326 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 - 05:39 pm · For: Chapter 3
OMG! this is soooooo cute! heh. sasuke in a pink apron. lol. hope you continue soon. =^-^= ja ne.
Name: Bunny_no_Jutsu (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 - 05:49 pm · For: Chapter 3
Cheers for pink aprons and burnt omletes! Thanks for the fanfic. I loved it.
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 - 10:16 pm · For: Chapter 1
hey this is good keep it up plz thanks =]
Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 - 08:54 am · For: Chapter 3
It'll be a really good story. Hurry. Give us the next chapter. ^^. It's so cute.
Name: asakura321 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 - 07:30 am · For: Chapter 1
great story but it was the 4th hokage who sealed the fox and died not the 3rd
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 - 02:51 pm · For: Chapter 3
I liked it and not only this chapter but the whole story so far. The way you describe everything through Kyuubi makes me actually feel Naruto's emotions. Simply said but touching and expressive. Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for all your comments. I was hoping to give everyone a view of Naruto's life through a different person's eyes. I'll try to update within the next few days so keep a lookout. Thanks again, your comments are greatly appreciated.
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 - 02:43 pm · For: Chapter 2
It wasn't bad, I liked it.
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 - 02:38 pm · For: Chapter 1
This is really interesting. I think I'll read more.
Name: Hinata914 (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 - 12:55 pm · For: Chapter 3
I love this story! Its great!
Name: Hinata914 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 - 12:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
wow, thats a wonderful story! you can write so well! Please continue!
Name: Green (Anonymous) · Date: 22/11/07 - 12:52 am · For: Chapter 2
Oooh! I like it! Continue!
Name: inukit31 (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/07 - 02:24 pm · For: Chapter 2
oooooo this story litterly drags u in/. so plz type more.
Name: yaoimyantidrug (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/07 - 11:42 am · For: Chapter 2
Awsome Please Continue.
Name: yaoimyantidrug (Anonymous) · Date: 18/11/07 - 10:07 am · For: Chapter 1
Awsome Beginning Please Contiue!:)
Name: inukit31 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/11/07 - 07:27 am · For: Chapter 1
holy crud that is so sad man i almost cryed
Name: inukit31 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/11/07 - 07:27 am · For: Chapter 1
holy crud that is so sad man i almost cryed
Name: Shabuki (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 - 04:27 pm · For: Chapter 1
OMG!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!! So awesome. Great concept and very well written.