Reviews For Last Chance
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 - 03:12 pm · For: One Week
*Happy dances* YES! YES, I'M STILL READING DANG IT! How could I not read such a beautifully written story?! and another cliffhanger...dang...evil little miscreant. I love this story so much! *glomps* my eyes just about popped out of my head when I seen that you updated! I loved the council part! They were being all decisive and stuff and then they see what Naruto's implying and then..."OK! Never mind then! Go ahead and get married!" the charade thing had me laughing up a storm! I could totally see Naruto doing that! I feel so sorry for Naruto and Sasu though...but happy times will come again! They will right...? ANYWAY! I absolutely LOVE your style! It just seems so different than others...but in a good way! This was the sunshine on my rainy day! I've felt so horrible all day, but then I get back to read this, and it made it all better! Thanks so much for brightening my mood! *yawn* I think I'll go take a nap now...too tired. But keep writing just hard enough so that you don't die! I'll be rootin' for ya the whole way! I can't wait to see whats going to happen when Sasuke and Sakura actually meet! XD I'm so hyped up for that! Thanks again for making this awesome fic! I loves it!
~lemon
Name: mikejonesagain (Anonymous) · Date: 03/03/08 - 12:35 pm · For: One Week
great chapter. Can't wait to see sasukes reaction. i hope sasuke and sakura have a confrontation
Author's Response: It's coming ;P
Both have proved a bit possesive at this point, wouldn't you say?
Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 - 08:54 am · For: One Week
Arhhhh! I hate sakura!
Please tell me she isnt really pregnant???
She mustnt be, then Narut would never get away from her! Nooooo he needs to be with sasuke.
I seriously cannot wait for an upload now! I'm already bubbling up with anticipation! xx
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 - 04:29 am · For: One Week
I wasn't sure if you made up this "matsuri" person...but then I remembered. I always forget her name xD I was expecting Gaara to tell Sasuke he's pregnant or drop some sort of clue to that end. But oh well. Their dialogue was cool/cute in a way? lol Naruto was very smooth about signalling Tsunade lmbo That's definitely in character and I loved that bit! Even if you ended before the lemony part, I think it is the best spot to put a break. Can't wait to hear from you again :D :D :D
Author's Response: It's still in the cards, but not till the second part. I was just setting things up so the characters would work in the second part, I can't have Gaara hating Sasuke there.
I liked writing Nartuto's charade game, I could just see it like a cartoon in my head. (I couldn't stop giggling)
Lemon on the way, see you then!
Name: darkxratha (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 - 05:42 pm · For: The Plan
i hate sakura. end of discussion. shesucks! why did it have to be her that naruto fell in love with?!?! i feel so bad for sasuke...
Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 - 09:53 am · For: The Plan
AAAAAAAAAAH NO!!!!
You cant do this =| SASUKEEEEEE!
save Naruto from the evil lying witch before he realy does make her pregnant ='[
I feel so bad for sasuke =[ what a place to leave me =P I'll be gagging for the next chapter untill you upload.
I just read the whole story and love it but i dnt like Naruto loving sakura... why... why cnt he see shes nothing compared to sasuke! Im not even a sakura hater but in this story shes getting in the way big time. I know its for the plot and everything but...i want sasuke to be happy!
Omg cnt wait till you update! xx
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 - 03:12 pm · For: The Plan
Ahahahaha! Don't hide! Come back out! *pulls out* You need to finish this before you crawl into a hole! *grabs baseball bat* BACK SAKURA HATERS! BACK! this chapter was definitely a shocker! and it still amazes me to no end how well you keep them in character! and....this is a very big change for me...I usually hate Narusasu! but...but this! I love it to death! This is the only Narusasu fic I have ever read that hasn't made me want to punch my screen! it's actually the opposite...It makes me want to hug my screen every time I see that you updated! ....Sakura's pregnant....O.O and what will Sasuke do?! I MUST KNOW! >.< the suspense is killing me! and usually I'm the most patient person ever! See what this fic has done to me..? but I love it all the same! and it kinda puts an extra twist to the story too! just something else to look forward to! ^^ Can't wait 'till the next update! ♥
~lemon
Name: mike jones (Anonymous) · Date: 19/02/08 - 01:14 pm · For: The Plan
fuckin right! that chapter was beast! good job!
Author's Response: Yay!!!!! Review number 100, and it wasn't a flame!
Thank you, and I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
-Tereshi
Name: mAddY (Anonymous) · Date: 19/02/08 - 01:01 pm · For: The Plan
OMG! I CAN NOT BELIEVE THIS, I MEAN WTH!? NO WAY ! NOOOOO (excuse my profanitie) NO F'N WAY IN THE WORLD! I have to say I am soo depressed now! I absolutly HATE sakura and ...now THIS!? This is horrible! How could you! >O =( I have mixed amotions now...
Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 - 11:31 pm · For: The Plan
I hate Sakura.......And the language would be Hungarian. X).
Author's Response: Go for it. As long as it is translated and not changed. And give me some credit please.
Tereshi
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 18/02/08 - 07:52 pm · For: The Plan
grrrrrrrrr if i ever get the chance i WILL KILL sakura she better be lying about being pregnant the only one that can have naruto's babies is sasuke and no one else and he has to figure out that he is in love with sasuke and the thing with sakura is just to do with wats in his pants
Author's Response: Sorry! It's all part of the plot, keep reading. Thanks for reviewing, even if it is to rant.
-Tereshi
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 - 07:40 pm · For: The Plan
Hehe I'm happy to be one of your fav reviewers! Admitedly, Lemon's are longer than mine...but I try xD I'm guessing that when she thought it was just the right time, meant that she would be pregnant if they do it just then? It sounds like she was lying to me, anyway it all works. I actually love this xD dual pregnancy hehe. assuming you haven't changed your mind about the Mpreg :O I thought it was a good chapter. A lemon would have been nice too (yes I am a lemon obsessed pervert), but I guess the lime is because you're already fearful of the Sakura-haters xD The rope tied to the bedpost is a nice touch. Let's see I *really wants to make a long review* :P ...*thinks*...*gives up* oh well so much for that idea xD I can't wait for the next installment! This is going to be a bumpeh ride!
Did you know about this tinyMCE editor thing? And I spend so much time on that HTML formatting fic xD
Author's Response: You are exactly right, the Sakura-haters scare me! They are being even worse on the other site right now, I think I'm going to have to beg for my life. *Shugs* At least someone is enjoying this. I had a 2.5 rating by someone on this chapter but I don't know if it was because the writing was bad or they just didn't like that Sakura was going to get some. Imagine the flames I'd get if I had put another het lemon in this story!
Thanks as always for the support. And no I haven't used the tinyMCE editor thing yet.
-Tereshi
Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 18/02/08 - 04:28 pm · For: The Plan
i knew it
ahhhhhhhh i wonder how sasuke will react with the marriage and pregnacy ~fan ^/_^
Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like that chapter but keep reading.
It's all important to my plot but I am expecting a lot of negative feedback with this chapter. :(
Name: Alexis (Anonymous) · Date: 17/02/08 - 11:01 pm · For: Cheating
I love this story! Keep writing! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaassssssssseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay!!!!!!!!!!! I love begging!
Don't worry, I will finish.
But I still love begging xP
Name: ayooo (Anonymous) · Date: 17/02/08 - 07:36 pm · For: Intro
I am a viewer of both this site and fanfiction.net and this is my favorite fic on both. It is well written has an interesting plot that dosent get boring...ever, and last but not least it is hot (both sex scenes even though im straight)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you like it. I hope it continues to live up to your expectations.
-Tereshi
Name: Zafirya (Anonymous) · Date: 17/02/08 - 01:11 pm · For: Cheating
Oh. I've just started your story. It's amazing. I love it. And Sasuke 4ever. ( after Itachi, but he isn't in the story so, goo Sasu). By the way, would you allow me to translate it into my language? Thx. Zafirya
Author's Response: Thank you, I love new readers!
About translating- that depends, into what language. If I can do it myself then no. -Spanish, German, Japanese.
Name: darklove (Anonymous) · Date: 12/02/08 - 05:36 pm · For: Cheating
good storie hope to read more of it till then keep it up
Name: darklove (Anonymous) · Date: 12/02/08 - 05:36 pm · For: Cheating
good storie hope to read more of it till then keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you-
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 - 06:15 am · For: Cheating
Whatwhatwhat? I thought I left a review here :/ Sorry Tereshi-chan! Must have been when my internet died.
The plot bunnies are attacking, Sakura RUN! lol It's good she's taking it like a sane person instead of psychobitch. Well I can see how the Mpreg's going to happen (just for me yayz! :D) Good foreshadowing! Naruto and his threesome fantasies xD Thanks for throwing that in!
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back and reposting then. You know I look for you and lemon because you seem to be the only two still reading on this site. And yes, plot bunnies have me in their teeth and they are not letting go! Some of this is your fault you know. ;P
Name: kayona-chan (Anonymous) · Date: 11/02/08 - 06:19 pm · For: Intro
another great chapter from you! all of ur chapters are great! who does sakura think she is?? she wont get naruto! im glad u made her cry 2! she deserve it! so that mean i give u a 10!
Author's Response: Oh so very happy to please. If the readers are not happy then what am I doing this for?
Of course it's for all of you, I love you!
-Tereshi
Name: krazymomo (Anonymous) · Date: 10/02/08 - 02:16 pm · For: Cheating
Cn I hv a request that sakura get hurt and naruto just like NOT come to save hr and like send some1 eles to cuz he's having sex w/ sasuke? I no its mean but, I REALLY hate her. >/ x]
Author's Response: Some of you are so mean ;P
rnSorry but the story is already plotted to the end, no requests are being taken :(rnThanks for reviewing!
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 - 06:52 am · For: Cheating
bwaaahahahahahaha!!! i laughed so hard during this chapter! sakura...and her...bitch comment...that was kinda an inside joke to me ^__^ everyone refers to sasuke as a bitch dont they? hahaha yeah this chapter was definitely one of the funniest! but then again...all your chapters have humor in them! (except for the lemons of course) i just love all of sasuke's and naruto's little scenes! i was in such a bad mood! but now I'm grinning ear to ear! thank you for picking such a great time to update!! love it and cant wait for the next update!!
~lemon
Author's Response: Well Sasuke is such a moody little thing. If he was a girl, I think he would be getting called a bitch on a regular basis. So I thought it a fitting title for the testy little Uchiha. And yes, I did mean it as an inside joke. Glad I brightened your day a bit. See you on the next update.rnrn-Tereshi
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 - 12:43 pm · For: Reports
KYAAA!! another wonderful chapter! and it has me wondering whats gonna happen when sakura finds out! *sniff* what will happen! will the council make him marry her?! nope. naruto wouldn't let that happen! and..and...you keep them so well in character! how do you do that?! most every time i read a sasunaru story they're so out of character that you dont even know them! but here i get the whole 'naruto' vibe! i love it!! ^^ sad that some people have stopped reading just for one little scene! they should have kept up hope! and *le gasp* theres a part TWO!!? and sasuke gets pregnant?! WOOT! well i hope you do make him pregnant! because it would be so funny! and adorable! you dont see many sasu pregs out there! and im sure that you would write it beautifully! so i shall await ur next update then! *salutes* Ja!
~lemon
Author's Response: Thank you for another wonderful review. You and Sakuranzu are keeping me going right now as no one else even reviewed this chapter. And yes this story is coming to an end but I promised Sakuranzu a part two. Hope a continue to please you guys as I wrap this one up. And remember your own words, Keep up hope, and don't get too tramatized over the het. ;Prn-Tereshi
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 - 10:24 pm · For: Reports
*kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~!*
I've been waiting practically all day for this Tereshi-chan! xD
bathtime fun so haaaawtt *foams at mouth*
Thnx for the update and lemony goodness!
PS. I've said before I'm all for Mpreggy Sasuke!
Author's Response: Okay Sakuranzu, I promise just for you, the next part will be MPreg. I have about 3 or so chapter to finish the first part and the second part will begin immediately after.
As always, glad to make you happy,
Tereshi
Name: v (Anonymous) · Date: 31/01/08 - 05:59 pm · For: Keeper
Awesome! I like how this is kinda a double dose of couples and its not really bias
Author's Response: That's the goal, but I hope I can keep it up.