Reviews For HitsuxKarin
Name: flipomatic (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 06:28 am · For: School and Andy
You have got to be kidding. Andy Evans. (Rolls eyes) You know what I mean
Name: flipomatic (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 - 02:46 pm · For: Hollows, Hollows everywhere but not a soul reaper in sight
How did Sarah fool people? I do think that Isshin is a little bit out of character.
Author's Response: Karin was fighting hollows while Sarah was in her body during the scene where Toushiro said good night to her. Sarah was tricking Toushiro into thinking she was Karin.
Name: flipomatic (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 - 08:32 am · For: Moving in
Nice job with the comic relief. It is good.
Name: Flipomatic (Anonymous) · Date: 20/10/07 - 11:19 am · For: Seeing each other again
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Well, it is going well. A sugestion is for Hitsugaya to be sitting on the roof a lot. His character seems to like doing that. You might also might want to mention Hinamori as an old childhood memory for Hitsugaya.
Author's Response: k I might just do that
Name: flipomatic (Anonymous) · Date: 17/10/07 - 06:31 pm · For: another one?
it is developing well. I do hope you know that in the second section, comon is actually two words. come on. LOL.
Author's Response: ... I have no comment
Name: flipomatic (Anonymous) · Date: 14/10/07 - 05:44 pm · For: Charachters and description
ok. I guess thats good.
Author's Response: lol k
Name: flipomatic (Anonymous) · Date: 14/10/07 - 05:16 pm · For: Karin the Shinigami and the discovery.
it is nice. but, it would be nicer for the people who do not watch that show to have a more detailed description of the characters. Other than that, you forgot to indent your paragraphs.
Author's Response: ty for the advice I will add info on the charachters