Reviews For Salvation
Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 01/12/07 - 07:35 pm · For: Close Yet So Far
I like how Sakura-Chan and Naruto-Kun are so close it reminds me of the old days*Sob,sob,sniffle,sniff*I just loved those old times it makes me cry when I think of the good and bad times that they shared.It just means so much to me that the Sasuke-Kun cared for them that's why he protected them from danger. LOVES AND KISSES, GrayFOX77
Author's Response: yeah, I miss those days too. But, I have full confidence they will return once again, as long as Kishimoto doesn't have Sasuke returning the end, that would really suck because I want to see how much stronger they can be now that their older. Thanks for the review!
Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 01/12/07 - 07:17 pm · For: Full Moon Tonight
Cool I love reading the chappie and also its like I can connect to what's happening,keep up the good work. LOVES AND KISSES, GrayFOX77
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Name: Analaysia (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 - 04:36 pm · For: Expectations
Excellent! I am desiring more. I can't wait for the next Chapter. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: thanks so very much for the review! And I'll try and hurry and get the new chapter out!
Name: sasuke_luvs_me (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 - 09:18 am · For: Expectations
awsome chapter! I loved how sakura used the potion, even though it wasn't the best idea, but still, it rocked! when will the next chapter come out?
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! And I'm hoping to get the next chapter out on Sunday or Monday!
Name: Persy321 (Anonymous) · Date: 27/11/07 - 06:54 pm · For: It Begins
O_O dude i love this story! kudos kudos ^-^
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Name: Persy321 (Anonymous) · Date: 27/11/07 - 06:40 pm · For: Close Yet So Far
O_O dude! freakin awsomeness! ^-^ i love it! keep going!
Author's Response: thanks again!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 - 06:31 pm · For: Full Moon Tonight
O_O omg! i love this! more ^-^ plz...
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Name: LIBBY (Anonymous) · Date: 27/11/07 - 03:26 pm · For: Expectations
WOW! That was amazing! A little grusome, for me but absolutley amazing! You describe everything so well. And the grammer is probably perfect! Please write again soon!! Thank-you for your time,
Libby
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry about the gruesomeness, but I had to include it. I just feel like that's what goes on there.
Name: FaithfulReviewer (Anonymous) · Date: 14/11/07 - 02:02 pm · For: Close Yet So Far
A little confusion in the beinging. "It is both their strongest yet weakest asset" should be "It WAS both their strongest yet weakest asset". I love your story; the pacing is quite nice and steady. I've read fics that are too fast or too slow, but your's is quite nicely paced. I also love your style. Your charaters are also quite in character. I will try to give you constructive critism as well as compliments. Good luck!
Author's Response: thanks for the review and I always appreciate constructive criticism. I do have to say though, that the line "it is both their strongest yet weakest asset." I purposely put the IS rather than the WAS. It's significant to the fact that both Sakura and Naruto still have these weakness and it's especially strong with Sasuke. It's suppose to be there as a double meaning. Also, this story is on fanfiction.net if it's easier for you to read there. I don't really like reading stories on this site because it sometimes screws up the paragraphs and stuff. Thanks again!
Name: FaithfulReviewer (Anonymous) · Date: 14/11/07 - 01:52 pm · For: Full Moon Tonight
Ok, so far I've only read the first chapter and I'm not to used to this site yet. I usually read on Fanfiction.net. Anyways, I think it is good but you use to many "he's" and "him's". I know it's to create a good ending point but it gets a little annoying. All in all, this is quite good.
Author's Response: thanks
Name: akane uchiha (Anonymous) · Date: 12/11/07 - 10:11 am · For: Conviction
when is the next chappie coming out? I can't wait!
Author's Response: I'm going to try my hardest and get the next chapter out by Friday of this week. Thanks for the review!
Name: ?¿? (Anonymous) · Date: 11/11/07 - 11:28 am · For: Conviction
great!!!! Please keep writing!!! i love this story!!!! i give you 100 as a rating if i could!
Author's Response: haha, thanks so much for the support!
Name: :D :P :) (Anonymous) · Date: 10/11/07 - 03:33 pm · For: Consequences
GREAT PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! DONT LEAVE US HANGING! :-D
Author's Response: thanks so much, and I should be posting the new chapter tonight!
Name: sasuke_luvs_me (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 - 09:07 am · For: Consequences
I love your story, when are you gonna wirte more chappies?
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much. I wanted to have a chapter out last night, but I just started a new job this week, so I've been really busy. I'm hoping to write one tonight or tomorrow, so keep a look out! Thanks again!
Name: Jess (Anonymous) · Date: 05/11/07 - 06:43 pm · For: Consequences
Very nice, I love it. (: Hope to see more chapters soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: gunslingerninja (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 - 02:14 am · For: Close Yet So Far
Oh that was good, I like the last 4 paragraphs, Sakura made a good point. I'm starting to ease up a bit on her....but I still hate her.
Author's Response: Hopefully my story will help change your mind about that. Thanks for the review!
Name: gunslingerninja (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 - 11:54 am · For: Full Moon Tonight
Cool story even though Sakura's a bitch sometimes, but nice. I liked it. ^_^
Author's Response: I don't know if I agree with this unless you're talking about a few instances she had when she was twelve, I guess I just love Sakura, so she doesn't bother me. Anyway, thanks for the review!
Name: Akane Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 - 11:53 am · For: Consequences
Once again, your story rocks! That was probably the first big thing for Sasuke and Sakura. Very nice job.:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much and there will be much more coming up soon. This is only the beginning!
Name: Akane Uchiha (Anonymous) · Date: 01/11/07 - 10:17 am · For: Full Moon Tonight
Dude! You rock! I love your story, I'm very 'smitten' with it. :) I hope you get the joke:)
You rock,
Akane Uchiha Oh,, a story i'm writing is called The Final Ultimatum, if you could read it, and give me some advice on how to improve it, that would be much appreciated:)
Author's Response: Thank so much for the review and when I get a chance I'll check out your story!
Name: gaara_nara_sasuke (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 - 03:19 pm · For: Choices
That... was... so... awesome! In other words, EXCELLENT!!! (lights start flashing)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy to see you're enjoying it!
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 - 11:35 am · For: Choices
Ooh, those dumbasses are 'bout to get pwned!
I like your character development, can't wait to see how those sound nin get theirs handed to them.
Author's Response: glad to see you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Name: Jagan (Anonymous) · Date: 24/10/07 - 08:58 am · For: Full Moon Tonight
write more
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review!
Name: gaara_nara_sasuke (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 - 08:21 am · For: The Path Opens
WOOT!! AWESOME!! *punches air* YOU ROCK, CHA!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: gaara_nara_sasuke (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 - 06:11 pm · For: With Love And Regret
Ooh! I love ur story! When's the next chappy coming out? I'm also about to read your other story. Oh, and if you have time; Ask the Akatsuki. That's my story. LOVE UR STORY!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm not too sure right now. Sometimes i get them out in a couple of days and other times it takes me a week. At least by next Friday, I can give you that! Thanks, and when I get a chance I'll definitely read your story!
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 - 11:34 pm · For: With Love And Regret
Hmm, the plot thickens. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!