Reviews For A Game of Chance
Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 06/03/08 - 05:09 pm · For: Chapter 1
You are one of my favorite people just based on the entertainment quality of your stories. The only thing that is ever dissapointing about them is the fact that they end.
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 - 09:19 am · For: Chapter 1
This is a pretty good romance fic. You've made it believable (not many people go this extra mile), and you've made a realistic relationship. People in relationships fight, and you've captured that well.
If you could include just a little more back story, particularly the events that led up to the characters being in this situation, I think this could be a truly great fic.
If you have the time, I think that this would be worthy fic to continue writing on. (^_^)
Author's Response: Thanks! When I started this I was really focused on having that snapshot of the relationship because it does make it more believable. I have to admit, I get really tired (figuratively and literally) when the two main characters are always in constant peril. I thought that Ino and Sakura could use a vacation from angst;-) I am thinking of expanding this story some, maybe into a series of one shots that get linked together somehow. I guess I'll just see how it goes.