Reviews For Motherhood
Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 - 09:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
This would have been a good story if it was written better...There weren't any real details or character depth it was just statements...it was more like a thought or draft of a story rather then a story...
You really should space the dialog from the paragraph more so it wouldn't be so confusing...its really kinda sad.
If you learn to actually write and redo this into a story rather then random babbling then it would make for a good story that I would read...just try to actually write next time ok and get some actually emotions into the story? If you need help I'll be glad to lend a hand...
Well good luck...Later
Author's Response: I know it was a random thought and I shoulda elaborated on it but I just wanted to post somethin quick and simple. thanks for the review and my next story will be worth your time.
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 - 10:45 am · For: Chapter 1
Haha. Chill. I'll read ur next story u make! Promise.
Author's Response: Sorry I'm a spaz and my next story will be worth your time to read promise.
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 - 10:33 am · For: Chapter 1
Wow pretty cool.
Author's Response: Really??!! You have no idea how happy that makes me!! I thought it was incredibly stupid and pathetic! You're awesome!! Thanks soooooo much!! And I'm not normally this hyper and excited!