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Reviews For For The Blue Sky

Name: kiki (Anonymous) · Date: 10/09/11 - 04:23 am · For: A Winter's Wool
More Please!!!XD


Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 - 12:06 am · For: A Winter's Wool
First of all I want to say a big thank you that you updated. Thank you! xD

I'm very amazed by this great style of yours in writing the story. So sad, so wonderful, so great, everything is just so neat!

I read the manga too and I can say that it's one of my favorites(right now I'm stuck since August with a chapter because it takes too much time for them to update *sigh* )

Anyway, I love how you put everyone in those roles, each role suits them all too well. I'm really excited to know and to find out if you'll keep the story line like in the manga and add the other characters too (which have their great part in the story). Since this point, you kept it and I hope that you'll still keep it. ^^

Very good I enjoyed very much reading it and I hope that you'll update soon. I want to read other chapters too, not only the first 10 ones! xD Good luck with your writing and may much inspiration come to you!*hugs*

Author's Response: Aaaw, thank you very much for the support and compliment. Actually, I had no confidence when I started this story, but because many people including you gave me so much support, I can continue in spirit. Thank you so much for it. And I will do my best not to ruin the plot in this story and the roles. Once again, thanks! Please read and review the next chapter as well!


Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 04/01/08 - 09:38 am · For: Prologue
OMG ! I really have to read this fic too ! xD Cause I'm carzy about your style !
I've read your other fic , LMMB , about ... Aheeeem ... Well , let's say 6 times ! xD
*scratch my head*
I hope you didn't let this story down , ne ?!

anyway , thanks for sharing such marvelous fics with us !!! I'll put another review as soon as I read your story !!! ^^
Ganbatte ne !!!! xD

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Of course I will not let this story down ^__^; And I am really glad if you like my other story as well. I am surprised when you said you've read LMMB for 6 times ^__^; Well, I haven't made the new chapter for that story because I am still collecting the idea and plot, so it will not get boring. And yeah, please do review this story mooore. I'll wait for it ^__^


Name: AMISA (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/08 - 12:57 am · For: A Thousand Angels
what???? is that all??? u made me cried and just finish this story like this?? no way!!! what happened??? plesseeeeeeeeeeeee write more!!! onegai!!!!!

Author's Response: Aww, sorry for the sad flash back T__T, but it's the part of Sasuke's past Naruto must know, so he can be nicer to him later.... Anyway, thank you for the review. Hope I can make it better in next chap. Otanoshimi, ne! ^__^


Name: ásrún (Anonymous) · Date: 31/12/07 - 05:13 pm · For: A Thousand Angels
omigod.. you made me cry...

Author's Response: I am sorry for making you cry.... Anyway, thanks for the review. I hope I can do it better in next chapter.... Well, i want to make it less miserable than this chapter though. Please wait for it, ok? ^__^


Name: Sky_blue (Signed) · Date: 31/12/07 - 01:20 pm · For: A Thousand Angels
::snifs:: So sad...
Lin

Author's Response: Let's start from thank you for the review.... Yeah, it's sad, I know. Well, Naruto is there by his side now, is that a relief? Heheh, for knowing Sasuke's past, he should be gentler to him later. Maa, let's see what I can do in next chapter...^__^


Name: cubuu love 99 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 05:33 pm · For: The Day When You Call Me "Brother"
i love this story you rock!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review!! Hope you like the next chapter as well, though I don't know when I will update...heheh ^__^;


Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 21/12/07 - 10:31 pm · For: Prologue
please finish this story for everyone that read and is reading this story pwease.

Author's Response: Of course I will finish this story for sure! Don't worry!! I'll try my best to make next chapter better, though I have made it...heheh ^__^rnThanks for the review!! XD


Name: Yourbabykitsune (Anonymous) · Date: 20/12/07 - 06:43 pm · For: The Day When You Call Me "Brother"
this is my favorite chapter its so sweet

Author's Response: Waaai!! Thank you very much!! I am glad if you like it!!


Name: vivian xD (Anonymous) · Date: 19/11/07 - 05:32 pm · For: Prologue
well, actually i didn't read the fic yet, but.....i think that the plot of this fic is a lot like the other one you made/are making
"Love me, My brother" something like this, ne?

Author's Response: No, it's completely different from that one. You can try to read the first chapter first, and then you will find that it's completely different. If in Love Me My Brother I make Sasuke who falls for Naruto, it's not for this fic. I concentrate the plot on making them "family" rather than making them "lovers". There's no kissy-kissy stuffs here, well...some a bit, but it's not fluffy or something like in the LMMB. It just contains shounen ai for the spices, but the main theme here is family matters. Maybe I should change the synopsis a bit to make it clearly....rnAnyway, give a try, and you will decide if this story is worth reading or not.


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 - 11:03 am · For: The Torn Best Friends
OMG! This whole chapter is a surprise! Like really! >_< Sai loves Naruto! Sasuke helped Naruto! Sakura is still a bitch! (Thats not surprising...)

Author's Response: You think so? Yeah, Sai loves Naruto, that's why he stole Sakura away from him. That makes sense right. And now Naruto is hurt because Sai's feeling can't reach him sooner. Wah...I wonder what will happen next to them!rnThanks for your lovely reviews! Hope you will like the next chapter mooore!!


Name: black_majick (Anonymous) · Date: 05/11/07 - 07:21 am · For: The Torn Best Friends
cool story!
and watta twist.

keep on writting

hope to see the next chapter real soon!

Author's Response: Ahahaha, yeah, what a twist! XD Thank you so much for the review! Hope you will like the next chapter as well!!


Name: sinister_black (Anonymous) · Date: 22/10/07 - 05:19 am · For: A Dream inside A Dream
nice story.

i just found this site
i must say this story is well written
keep writting and continue this
and also put the next chapter faster

good luck

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and support! Hope I can update faster. Please wait, ne!


Name: sinister_black (Anonymous) · Date: 22/10/07 - 05:19 am · For: A Dream inside A Dream
nice story.

i just found this site
i must say this story is well written
keep writting and continue this
and also put the next chapter faster

good luck


Name: sinister_black (Anonymous) · Date: 22/10/07 - 05:19 am · For: A Dream inside A Dream
nice story.

i just found this site
i must say this story is well written
keep writting and continue this
and also put the next chapter faster

good luck


Name: angelica (Anonymous) · Date: 21/10/07 - 09:58 am · For: A Dream inside A Dream
loved it!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I am really glad if you like it^__^rnHope you like the next chapter as wellrnAnd hope I can update faster!!!


Name: dark aura (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 10:16 am · For: Prologue
please type faster

and finish it

goodluck

Author's Response: Ok, if you like it so much then. Wow...you give me lots of reviews. Thank you very much! I love you!! XDrnWell, sorry for the late review, but here it is, new chapter, ENJOY!!


Name: dark aura (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 10:15 am · For: Forbidden Love?
nice story.

i rilly lyk it

please type faster

and finish it

goodluck


Name: dark aura (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 10:15 am · For: Forbidden Love?
nice story.

i rilly lyk it

please type faster

and finish it

goodluck


Name: dark aura (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 10:15 am · For: Forbidden Love?
nice story.

i rilly lyk it

please type faster

and finish it

goodluck


Name: dark aura (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 10:15 am · For: Forbidden Love?
nice story.

i rilly lyk it

please type faster

and finish it

goodluck


Name: hikaru (Anonymous) · Date: 09/10/07 - 06:24 am · For: Prologue
google the manga baka updates and search for bara no tame ni, you could find a few scanlation groups that translate it. in my country they published it until the end, 1 tankoubon is quite thick, the character design is quite boring at first but when you read it you'll find that it was indeed a high quality and quantity manga, enjoy


Name: hikaru (Anonymous) · Date: 07/10/07 - 06:30 am · For: Forbidden Love?
hei, it's me again. sorry for my review, i love your story because i like yaoi especially uke-naruto. i found the title of the manga that i mentioned, it's called 'bara no tameni' by Yoshimura Akemi sensei, she is great because she could made 1 book in short time. I include the storyline i took from manga baka updates 'After being dumped, followed closely by her grandmother's sudden death, the chubby Yuri is left broke and homeless. That is until she discovers that her grandmother had been lying to her for years. Her mother is not dead, but is in fact a famous movie star, and very much alive.
Upon arriving at her mother's house, she meets her three new beautiful siblings, all from different fathers. Her newfound family is filled with hilarious oddities, ranging from laziness to drunkennes to gay incest. She is constantly antagonized by her brothers Sumire and Aoi. And her sister Fuyou does little to help. And thus Yuri becomes little more than a maid in the household, catering to her siblings needs while her mother travels the world. But as Yuri's warmth fills the house which before had been so cold...what will happen between her and her brothers? Can they come to see each other as siblings before it's too late?' ok i hope that'll help. you should try to read it, it's very good story. keep on to your story because i love it. will you include a lemon in it?


Name: hikaru (Anonymous) · Date: 07/10/07 - 06:06 am · For: Forbidden Love?
hei, it's me again. sorry for my review, i love your story because i like yaoi especially uke-naruto. i found the title of the manga that i mentioned, it's called 'bara no tameni' by Yoshimura Akemi sensei, she is great because she could made 1 book in short time. I include the storyline i took from manga baka updates 'After being dumped, followed closely by her grandmother's sudden death, the chubby Yuri is left broke and homeless. That is until she discovers that her grandmother had been lying to her for years. Her mother is not dead, but is in fact a famous movie star, and very much alive.
Upon arriving at her mother's house, she meets her three new beautiful siblings, all from different fathers. Her newfound family is filled with hilarious oddities, ranging from laziness to drunkennes to gay incest. She is constantly antagonized by her brothers Sumire and Aoi. And her sister Fuyou does little to help. And thus Yuri becomes little more than a maid in the household, catering to her siblings needs while her mother travels the world. But as Yuri's warmth fills the house which before had been so cold...what will happen between her and her brothers? Can they come to see each other as siblings before it's too late?' ok i hope that'll help. you should try to read it, it's very good story. keep on to your story because i love it. will you include a lemon in it?

Author's Response: Uwaaaah, the story line indeed matches my storyyyy!! Where can I find the manga? I really want to read it!! Ok, for the next chapter, I will use the story line you mentioned above XD! And I will give a proper disclaimer this time!! Thank you so much for your information!! I'd really like to know where I can find "Bara no Tame ni". Kyaaah, really want to read it!! XDrnAnyway, thanks for the review!! Hope you will like the next chapter as well!!


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 - 12:43 am · For: Forbidden Love?
OMG! HOLY ----!!!! That was so...CUUUTTTEE! Naru-chan is just so adorable! His first love...IS SASUKE! Awwwwwww!!! ^^ I really am starting to hate Haku more if he keeps this up! Grrr! And Itachi is still just SO funny! He eats , sleeps, be lazy, and watch TV all the time. What a freak'n Koala! He's being more lazy than Shikamaru and we ALL know that thats impossible. lol

Author's Response: Yeah, it is impossible, that's why iy becomes more challenging! I do have reason why I make Itachi's personality like that. And I also have reason why Haku acts like that. It's because the time and place are limited, I will try to conceal their past slowly in each chapter, and I believe you will stop hating Haku in the end. And yeah, Sasuke is as cute as girl when he was younger, that's why Naruto mistook him as girl *grins* and he falls for him (hell yeaaah!). I'll try my best to keep this up and update faster...well, maybe two weeks from now...probably...^__^;


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