Reviews For Lithium
Name: Airhead (Anonymous) · Date: 19/08/07 - 10:06 pm · For: Ch. 3: The Kiss
Sad, poor Ino. I feel bad for Naruto too though, poor guy, he must be so confused. To think, he's smart enough to see Ino's feelings in the card (I think that's what you were implying) but too dense to get Sasuke's feelings towards him. Well, I only spotted one mistake, it was near the end "Naruto did nothing the rest of the day, but try to avoid what had happened. But it haunted him like the Plague, and the worst part: he didn’t know hat he thought about it. Nothing. Almost absolutely nothing." do you see the mistake? It's the "hat" part, I think you meant to put "what" though. Good work, keeping writing!
Author's Response: ^^ thanks. Yeah, well, there are actually several other mistakes that I've caught, and I'm just glad that you haven't, because that means that others probably haven't as well.
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 - 02:45 pm · For: Ch. 3: The Kiss
YAY! Now Sakura would leave Naruto and Sasuke the hell alone and be with Ino! But than again, Ino is hurt, Naruto is confused, and Sasuke is stubborn. The pressure is rising. ^_^
Name: QueenJ (Anonymous) · Date: 10/08/07 - 01:40 pm · For: Ch. 3: The Kiss
OOOHHH Drama drama! I love it. Good stuff.