Reviews For Air Mail to Neji
Name: BCG (Signed) · Date: 30/10/12 - 06:52 pm · For: Beginning of an End (Part 2)
I've noticed there hasn't been an update in years so I'm assuming you've abandoned the fic. It makes me sad because it's really good in the details and story line (although I kind of wish Neji had more of a backbone when it comes to anything not involving fighting). I am hoping one day you'll find the time and motivation to finish it.
Name: Megan queen (Anonymous) · Date: 20/08/11 - 01:23 pm · For: Beginning of an End (Part 2)
Is this the end??? I soooooo hope it's not I love this story could u add another chapter preeeety pleeeeese luv from megan xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo •^.^•
Name: megan (Anonymous) · Date: 16/08/11 - 11:03 am · For: Unconditional Surrender
That's preeeety HOT!!!!! deffo one of me fab lemons NOT THAT I HAVE A LISt OR ANYTHING!!!!!! jk ('.'). :}
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 - 09:43 pm · For: First Class Mail
i loved this story!!! i hope u can write some more soon cuz i got really exited with the whole story!!!
plz updates soon!!
Author's Response: I honestly hope I can write more soon, but I got other things going on in terms of writing; besides, that has to take a sideline since I'm about to go back to school in one week, and I haven't even started on the books I had to read. (-_-')
Still, I'll go back to this whenever I can. After all, I can't keep fans waiting, can I?
Name: howlinglizerd (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 - 10:08 pm · For: Beginning of an End (Part 2)
.......OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor tenten!!! i know that she'll end up w/ neji neway but still....when are you gonna update again??? hopefully soon
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm out of steam for the moment... I hope I'll get back to work on this soon, too...
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 09:57 am · For: Beginning of an End (Part 2)
OMG POOR TENTEN. does Neji explain to yumi i hope so!!! poor her :'( please get then backn together. (even thouhg i know they will in the end)
Author's Response: Oh man... no comment. Thanks anyways, though.
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 - 11:44 am · For: Kindling Flame
hay great keep it up.
i had a though that tenten and gotten her team in hosipalt (they were getting on her nevers (Gai and Leee) so she attact then the other team mate tried to save them can ended up in hospital almost dead) and Lady Tsunade is talking to her in the Can (she had been there so amny time cuz that were her parents died) it is just so happens to be in the one were neji is as she is geing them a check up. and Tenten say it neji who narmaly saves ther butt's and they like a big arugment and stuff and one thing lade onto andothe a had not gotten thta far.
Love you and your story AikoMatsuo
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion, but I've already got the storyline pretty much worked out. I won't spoil it for you, but I think it'll be pretty exciting. Thanks for the review!
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 - 06:32 am · For: Kindling Flame
It's about time this was updated! :D
Because I'm in a position to talk, huh?
Well, at least one of us is submitting hard work. Keep it up mate, and I'm ready for the next batch when you are.
Author's Response: Yeah... I need to write more, but I got jammed up in some jig in a lab, so I might not be able to write as much as I like.
I'm continuing with the "filler" chapters, but it might take a while...rn
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 - 10:18 am · For: Beginning of an End (Part 1)
hay great keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll stick around for more!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 - 10:17 am · For: Beginning of an End (Part 1)
hay great keep it up
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 - 09:28 am · For: Evasion
HAY WOW GREAY KEEP IT UP AMAZIING LOVE IT. but im would like to see a but more nejitenten.
love AikoMatsuo XxXxX xoxoxoxoxox
Author's Response: This story's going to be quite long; and, to put it indirectly, love can't be sweet without the bitterness.
I'll try to get back to work on this... soon.
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 - 09:26 pm · For: Evasion
I liked this chapter a lot. The characters are really starting to come alive. I especially like your OCs. They're cool without being unbalanced, and I like that a lot. More author's need to got that extra mile.
I've been looking back through the reviews on my stories, and I noticed your comment on RTMM about looking forward to the next chapter. I must say I am dreadfully sorry dropping the story like that without any forewarning, but I realized that I needed to go back and cover the backstory before I could move forward on the fic.
I look forward to reading more of "Air Mail". Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm writing this story to improve my writing skills, and it's good to know that it's paying off.
I completely understand the importance of backstories, so I will be patient. I'll check out your stuff later. Cheers!
Name: caityXchan (Anonymous) · Date: 21/03/08 - 05:52 pm · For: First Class Mail
AWWWWW........ I mean....... WHOOT!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ??? Thanks anyways. I'm glad you're excited about the story.
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 - 09:26 pm · For: Evasion
I reported this...
...as being an awesome chapter :-P
Like I said, good work mate. It's a shame that there isn't much traffic here. Do you run Air Mail to Neji on ohter sites as well?
Author's Response: Thanks. From my count, I guess people do read this, but not a lot, and they don't seem to review much.
No, I haven't posted this on any other sites yet. I plan to finish it before I do that (which means it won't happen for a while yet).
Yeah... your work needs attention, too. Good luck on writing Kiba's Journal... if you don't feel inspired enough, just let it sit for a while in the back of your head. Who knows what bolt of brilliance will strike...
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 07:46 pm · For: Entanglement
No problem with the mistakes man :)
Just happy to help out, as it gives me a creative release from the oppresion of my job. Besides, it trains me to spot things which need editing in my own story :P
Cheers mate, hopefully I'll be done soon with your next one.
Author's Response: I greatly appreciate your help... it really refines the things I write.
If you ever need my assistance, just whistle.
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 - 10:08 pm · For: Equal Reaction (Part 1)
Another heartwarming and fluffy that'll make you just be filled with joy and exhuberance. /sarcasm
On a more serious note, I think we need a lot more serious and truly dark fanfics on this site. I am tremendously grateful for your effort.
This chapter was really well put together, though I think a little bit more detail could be put into the torture scene. I'd recommend finding a good thesaurus; the more synonyms for pain you know, the better. That way you can increase the depth of graphic segments without having to be any more graphic.
Other than that, I have nothing to add. Cheers!
Author's Response: Yeah... I do find myself needing a thesaurus from time to time. I'll do my best to keep things from getting repetitive.
As for dark fics, I don't really consider mine "dark"... especially since I know where everything is going; just some trials and tribulations while I'm getting there. For truly dark fics, I recommend the work(s) by under a lavender sky (although she seems to have deleted a story or two, and is no longer active), Never Letting Go by Tanegawari, and Demons mating by Byouma (both on hiatus). I can also recommend Unchained Memory by Northridge (on serious hiatus, or discontinued, as far as I can tell) and The Diary/Journal of Kiba by TTM. In the end, though, I'd say whether a story is "dark" or not really depends on the reader.
This part of the story, and the torture sequences, are far from over. I'm getting the rough drafts for the next few chapters edited; it may take a while for my beta-reader to go through them, though.
I heartily thank you for your continued support; cheers to you, as well.
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 - 06:05 pm · For: Equal Reaction (Part 1)
Nice work man :)
I was glad to be of assistance, the final product is very good.
I don't know when your last chapter will be done, but (sorry bout this) I would like to finish off my own chapter before hitting the last one.
If you do need it sooner, email me and let me know.
Cheers mate :)
Author's Response: I really should thank you for helping me out, man. I really, really appreciate it- your way of looking at things helps me fine-tune the things I write.
It's weird, really... I've got so many ideas in my head, it's frustrating that I have almost no time and motivation to work on them. Have you ever watched Porco Rosso? If I can ever tell a story like that...
Anyways, my idea was to involve planes, ships, aerial pirates, and the sort in a story, but I haven't got a good plot worked out. Guess it'll be in the "sometime in the future" pile, just like my other ideas...
I've got a few more chapters ready for editing, but prioritize your own work first. It needs exposure more than mine does. If you need help or something, don't hesitate to ask. Cheers.
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 - 08:58 am · For: Third Law
that sucks for Yumi. Your story rocks!! Keep up the great work
Author's Response: Thanks!
Yeah... things aren't exactly going to go well for Yumi. I'm writing the next chapter (I don't know when it's going to be done, but at least I'm no longer on a block), and all I can say is that she'll be put through hell.
I'll try to update soon. In the meantime, check out my other stuff if you like.
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 - 01:45 am · For: First Class Mail
Alright, a torture scene. I've got one of them coming up in a while myself :)
If you still need me to Beta-red anything, just send it to me and I'll do my thing :)
Good to see you're still up on this mate. I've reread some of your earlier works and I can see you've improved. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I've improved? Wow, thanks! Looks like my school English class is paying off big time (it really gives me ways to improve my style).
Writing's been pretty slow. I think I hit a block again, and therefore the new songfics (Tired of Tears and Go On Sakura)- it's getting hard to put work into long-term projects.
Speaking of which, I've had this idea for a story in my head for some time. For a little preview, check out the chapter called Notorious Preview in my Upcoming Works. It'll be an AU mafia fic. If you have questions about it, please do not hesitate to ask.
I eagerly await your update to Kiba's Journal!
Name: Qwan (Anonymous) · Date: 23/10/07 - 02:25 pm · For: Premature Developments
you're good at writing. You should write a book!
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know about writing a book, though... I don't think I'm experienced enough to do that at the moment.
Glad you like the story. Check out my other stuff, too, if you have time.
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 - 09:23 pm · For: Third Law
Hmm, interesting. Torture is one of those heart-warming activities I just love...
One thing I'd like to point out is that in Naruto, interrogation is aided by the use of Genjutsu illusionary techniques. But, they guy said he was just getting started. ;)
Author's Response: Yeah... genjutsu is definitely in the arsenal of torturers (hmm... I wonder if Ibiki's any good at it). I'll see if I can implement that.
The guy is just getting started- there's more brutal things to come. (You know what "the pear" does? If you do, you have a good idea of what's coming to her.)
Just checked your profile. Political science, huh? Nice. I'm aiming for psychology when I get into college, though I might change my mind later on.
Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 - 06:48 pm · For: First Class Mail
Phew! finally updated "sound's new shadow"! It's dificult to update in times like this.You ever read "love and decisions," and "the loss of naruto"? they're both good.I'm trying to get the loss of naruto into the tens.Would you help me out in spreading the word about it?
Author's Response: Hmm... I'm quite busy recently, and I doubt I can attend to these stories. I'll need to see what The Loss of Naruto is like before I can do anything about it, so I don't know. I'll see what I can do.
Name: lovepeacepuppy (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 - 04:09 pm · For: Collision
I want to know what happens next! I want to know what happens next! I don't mind reading graphic violence I NEED to know what happens! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'll do my best to update quickly, but the thing is, it's hard to get that moment of inspiration that motivates you to write. Besides, my beta-reader is really busy recently, and I can be quite busy at times as well (school...). So, if you can just bear with me, I'd appreciate it.
Name: lovepeacepuppy (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 - 04:02 pm · For: Premature Developments
No offense, but I found a funny mistake in your story I would like to point out.
Why does Hiashi have reading glasses, if he has the Byakugan? You don't really have to change it, I just thought it was funny. By the way, I can probably handle graphic violence. I'm 12 years old and the only thing I really can't read is lemon. But, if you have a chapter that contains something extremely disturbing that you think might completely and absolutely scar my innocent youth for the rest of my life, than just warn me and I'll judge whether I should read it or not. Anyway, I LOVE YOUR STORY!! You're a great author!
Author's Response: My take on the issue is that when not activated, the Byakugan is like any other eye, and unlike Itachi's Sharingan, you can't keep the Byakugan activated almost all the time.
I'll warn ya when I have something really graphic. I'm going to include a torture scene pretty soon, and I'll tell you where the scene is so you can skip over it. I might include a few more lemon scenes, but those are still pretty far off at the moment. Anywho, thanks!
Name: magorly impressed (Anonymous) · Date: 09/10/07 - 01:31 pm · For: Collision
wow... you are really good at writing 10/10 keep uploading them! My life would be imcomplete if you stopped!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're really enthusiastic about this story. I'll try my best to update soon!
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