Reviews For Island Life
Name: Leticia (Signed) · Date: 09/12/14 - 01:01 am · For: Its an Order
The story is good but I notice that chapter 7-8 are the same. I thought chapter 8 was the beach party. I can help you writer more into this story and add some romance and some lemon. I am a writer and I write story. I am a devianart and wrote four chapter on a fan faction story on narusaku is valentine story on the last one it has a some juicy hard core lemon.
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 - 10:58 pm · For: Its an Order
i really likd this story hope you write more, wen is the next ch.?
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 - 04:20 am · For: Its an Order
Not bad! I am really interested in this. Please submit more work;; and I love the whole play format =] its cool
Name: tayangel_12 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/02/08 - 11:19 pm · For: Its an Order
tht was a really good story i hope u wrtie more! :)
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 23/02/08 - 06:01 pm · For: Chapter 5
next chapter coming out when?
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 - 10:18 pm · For: Chapter 4
wow not the best but finally Chouji gets some screen time and a girl, congrats
Author's Response: Thank you and well Chouji needed some one.
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 - 06:48 am · For: Chapter 3
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 05/10/07 - 07:17 am · For: Chapter 3
liked hurry and update
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 - 04:50 pm · For: Chapter 2
cant wait for updates and verygood storyline
Name: ayami (Anonymous) · Date: 08/09/07 - 02:29 am · For: Its an Order
well, I think u should continue your story...the story was interesting.
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 - 11:38 am · For: Its an Order
post more please...
post more soon??? ^_^
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 01/07/07 - 02:37 pm · For: Its an Order
OKay, will you be revealing the princess thing later? Nice chapter, and it looks to be an interesting story!!