Reviews For TobiXNaruto
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 09:49 pm · For: Chapter 1
Oh, I love it. You should write a sequal to this one, ObiXNaru. That would be interesting, and Obito could remind Naruto that he owed him money for the drinks. That would be funny.
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-- naruto_newbie : lol, maybe but that would be a long time from now, i'm so slow at writting...
Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 - 09:29 am · For: Chapter 1
I really liked it and all, but if Naruto is underage and Tobi isn't, that's called Shota and it's not allowed on TONFA.
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-- naruto_newbie : underage to drink... but thank you for telling me...I'll be sure to be more careful of that next time... thank you for reading and paying attention.
Name: KyuubiXNarutoRULES (Anonymous) · Date: 18/06/07 - 04:10 pm · For: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD!!!! I GOT IT!!
....what the hell
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-- naruto_newbie : lol, um... some people think Obito is Tobi, though i'm not one of those people, it was just fun writing it like that... glad you got it...
Name: KyuubiXNarutoRULES (Anonymous) · Date: 18/06/07 - 04:09 pm · For: Chapter 1
WHAT IT WAS MR. UCHIHA?!?!?!?!?!? I didn't get that?
I'm an idiot!
*runs back to read*
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-- naruto_newbie : lol don't worry... and you're not an idiot
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 - 03:12 pm · For: Chapter 1
OMG! I get it! The guy who fucked Naruto was his teacher! Mr. Uchiha! I so got it! This was really good and well written.
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-- naruto_newbie : *dances happily* someone got it! thank you for reading and reviewing, i'm a little hyper right now :P ^ ^ thank you again!
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 - 09:04 pm · For: Chapter 1
Omg 8squeass* tackle glomps* I loved it!! Absolutely loved it!
The ending was just to adorable! *squees* *gives cookies* *squees more*
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-- naruto_newbie : lol, thank you for the challenge, it was a ton of fun! thank you again! ^ ^
Name: puresugar13 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 - 08:50 pm · For: Chapter 1
that was an awesome yaoi story.. one-shot... but... Poor Obito! *huggles Obito* MINE!
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-- naruto_newbie : lol thanks....
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 - 07:56 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hmm... think you rushed the smut a lot and you confused me some with calling Naruto a blonde all the time, even more so when talking about Deidara and naruto at the same time. I liked the ending, but still the middle as a bit rushed. Also when he was talking about his teachers in the beginning you got me a bit confused there, maybe you rushed it a bit? But otherwise I would just blame it on a tight schedule and trying to write this is one night. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- naruto_newbie : thank you for telling me what i need to work on, i was a little nervous writting it 'cause my parents were trying to sleep, so... I needed to get off the computer quick... With the teacher part I was attempting to explain why an underage teen would be drinking a crap load of drinks, that and Mr. Uchiha seems like Kakashi, but it's Obito so I wanted to clarify that ti wasn't Kakashi, and really was Obito... I'm sorry taht was confusing. But thank you for telling me... Also I'm not that great at writting lemons... heheh, but this is also helping me get better at it...sorry... for the confusion... Oh and for some reason when ever i write someting with Naru in it I call naruto 'the blonde' but i'm not sure why i do it....sorry for that. I'll just call naruto 'naruto' for yours okay! ^ ^ thank you again that was great to hear... sorry that was a long explanation... (I also can't spell without a spellchecker)
Name: KyuubiXNarutoRULES (Anonymous) · Date: 17/06/07 - 07:52 pm · For: Chapter 1
o.O
THAT WAS AWESOME!
Great job....never actually read a tobiXanyone fic but I loved it *huggles computer screen* Sooo wonderful ^_^
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-- naruto_newbie : lol thanks....