Reviews For naruto and gaara finding happiness
Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 - 12:02 pm · For: Chapter 1
Great story! *good guy poise* Keep going!
Author's Response: thank you =)
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 - 03:37 pm · For: Chapter 2
Wow. I like this story. Its cool!
Name: Cherished (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 - 04:07 am · For: Chapter 1
wicked. you should right more!!!!!!! :heart:
Name: KyuubiXNarutoRULES (Anonymous) · Date: 12/06/07 - 06:15 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hmm.....Well if you are going to make it so short ( I don't mind cause I like short chapters) you should space it out more so it will be easier to read and also makes it look better.
Add in a lot more details so it doesn't go by so quickly. It was basically just a list of what happened so it was kinda hard to get in to.
Other then that I like the whole plot of the story cause it seems it will be sad and maybe one day happy.
Well good luck with the updating and I will be sure to read! Later!
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