Reviews For Oh No, Orochimaru!
Name: dw431 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 - 03:14 pm · For: Chapter 10
ha ha don't end it
Author's Response: very well i will add to it eventually but i'm afraid to make it a round robin because people might write something stupide or violent or curse or something
Name: dw431 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 11:45 am · For: Chapter 8
kill people faster duh READ MY STUFF
Author's Response: hi i was gone for a while... incase you were wondering where I was...
Name: dw431 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 - 03:20 am · For: Chapter 8
NO HE GONE GET THE ARMY THE NAVY GIVR OROCHIMARU A GUN NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: what's Orochimaruo gonna do with a gun!
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 16/05/07 - 05:55 pm · For: Chapter 8
AHHH! -Slaps Orochimaru- YOU JUST HAD TO PAY ATTENTION TO YOURSELF! YOU COULDNT MAKE SURE POOR, INOCCENT DOSU DIDN'T GET LOST! -Triple Slaps Orochimaru-
Nice chappie! ^_^
Author's Response: wow a triple slap! didn't see that coming!
Name: dw431 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 - 03:59 pm · For: Chapter 7
plz make the fat one eat the resant i=os the spider one to fall in the water abd hey you killed some one plz let him say IN THE FACE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ I AM BEGGING YOU and well me and sxl are your like 0nly readers so PLZ DO IT PLZ PLZ PLZ if you don't then 0k
Author's Response: ... i will consider it but this is supposed to be child friendly humor...
Name: dw431 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 - 03:53 pm · For: Chapter 1
aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no guns but i like guns go read my storys to see more plz well how about the twins thow up in he mouth :) i wiould lol of years
Author's Response: ...
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 - 03:17 pm · For: Chapter 7
-Slaps Orochimaru- HOW DARE YOU YELL AT THE POOR CHILDREN!!
Nice chappie. Hehehehe... YOU MUST GIVE ME REASONS TO SLAP OROCHIMARU! Wait.. He did something REALLY bad... -Double Slaps Orochimaru- MWAUUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Author's Response: Yes...i would consider threatening to CUT OF THIER LIMBS a VERY BAD THING!
Name: dw431 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 - 03:20 am · For: Chapter 6
fine i will not crase hum baby well orochjmaru should like shoot them inj the FACE the say IN THE FACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Author's Response: yea,,,um, incase you didn't notice, this is a rated U story, so NO GUNS OR SHOOTING that would be too violent
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 - 02:56 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hmm... Yesh I did!
Now, I use curse words but I usually tell people about it when I do unless I'm being unuaslly lazy.
Author's Response: that's good that you warn people... I only get annoyed if a) you curse where children can see without warning b) you curse soooo much that it gets annoying
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 - 09:02 am · For: Chapter 5
-Slaps Orochimaru... AGAIN-
DON'T LIE TO THE CHILDREN!
Hehehe. Nice chapterr!
Author's Response: Thank you! Did you see the jerk/jerkette who cursed in my review? I don't beleive in cursing so I want to delete it but it won't let me! Now every poor kid who reads my review will be exposed to bad curse words!
Name: dw431 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 - 08:59 am · For: Chapter 5
hum i er LOVE IT maybe you should make the twin thorow up in his mouth i would lagh to death or he truns in to a hugh snake and they all shit them selfs
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it but DON"T CURSE IN MY REVIEWS!!!!! I'm serious I don't like it when people do that! Infact if I can I will certainly delete this review.
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 12/05/07 - 01:16 pm · For: Chapter 4
MWAUHAHAHAHA. -Slaps Orochimaru for no reason-
I have a reason! *thinking...thinking* YOU BETTER NOT PUSH THEM INTO THE WATER! ..
I'll read your other fic now! Well, once I'm done typing this review.. XD
Author's Response: I think Orochimaru's face is getting sore... All well who cares! tee hee thanks!
Author's Response: Also, my sister has an account here too. Her penname is KupKakeKitten and her only story sofar is called Christmas in Konoha. Its really funny, please check it out.
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 - 02:12 pm · For: Chapter 3
Hehehe... TO AMERICA! -Slaps Orochimaru- Now, don't do anything to those dear children, your I will DOUBLE SLAP you! ^_^
Nice chapterrr, keep the story going!
Author's Response: Thank you Thank you Thank you! You've given me so much self-esteem! Have you read my other story?
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 - 05:16 pm · For: Chapter 2
I agree, Sakura and Lee are meant for each other!
-Slaps Orochimaru again- HOW DARE YOU THINK OF LEAVING KABUTO ONLY WITH CHILDREN WHO GET SICK ALL THE TIME?!?!!?!?
Author's Response: *lol*
Author's Response: Oh yeah! You probably didn't read my whole thing cuz I started to write, then I stopped to have dinner, and came back to write the rest and your review was already their so you might want to check chapter 2 again. Thanks!
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 - 02:02 pm · For: Chapter 1
That was funny XD.
Yes, Orochimaru does seem like the type to forget about children needing food and such.
Author's Response: Thank you! That was the first review I ever got and I'm glad its a good one! Meanwhile in the Hidden Sound Village... Sakon:My tummy kinda hurts... Orochimaru: NOOOOOO!!!
Author's Response: Also, SakuraXLee are an awesome couple!!!