Reviews For An Angel
Name: DeniCamuiTsukino (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 - 11:17 pm · For: Back to Stay
I just found this story and I'm absolutely addicted! X3 Can't wait to read more!
~Deni Camui Tsukino
Name: Tanuma Manami (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 02:30 am · For: What now?
heyy.. is aarin based on you??? sure sounds like it!
Name: Wolfenhawk (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 - 06:10 am · For: Sucked into Their World
Great story update it. UPDATE IT! Sorry my friend is rubbing off on me. He has 3 tons of raw sugar every day with 2000 gallons of coffee.
Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 - 04:38 am · For: Death, was his name
Wow..You updated while I was reviewing...O_0 NO THATS WHAT I CALL EXPRESS DELIVERY!
Not another evil cliffie!
Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 - 04:35 am · For: A visit to some friends
Uh oh...dun,dun,dun :P
Who? Who? Who?
Tari: You might as well tell her, she won't shut up otherwise.
Me: URUSAI BAKA!
Tari: *eyes glow*
Me: meep!
Hehe..I'm random i know. Your story is really cool, but cant you make the chapters longer? seriously, I see youv'e updated, am like 'YAY!' and then just as i get into the flow, it finishes...WITH AN EVIL CLIFFIE!
Please update soon! 10/10!
Author's Response: Well, that's kind of the point to have people review I'll update real soon.
Name: dehaloking (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 - 12:43 pm · For: The meeting
i can tell this story will be epic
Author's Response: Yep you're right! But I'll try to make it as short as possible if you would like. That's for reviewing!
Author's Response: Yep you're right! But I'll try to make it as short as possible if you would like. That's for reviewing!
Name: dehaloking (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 11:15 am · For: What now?
the first two chapters are a cool prolouge keep up the good wrk
Author's Response: Thank you!!!^_^
Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 06:45 am · For: What now?
Hehe...I like all you funny little arguing in the middle and stuff :P
You've got quite a nice writing style, but be careful not to rush to much, it detarcts from the quality of the story. You could try describing your characters thoughts and feelings as they move between more imprtant parts of the story.
Overall, pretty nice, please continue! ^^
Author's Response: Yeah, I totally agree with you. Soon you'll see their thoughts because the story revovles around Aarin, and thoughts of her. Anyway, thanks for the advice!