Beautiful... just beautiful.

You know, when you think about it, love isn't just passion and all that... in the end, the subtle things count more, and define what love is. It's so demure that you don't notice it until it's either too late or you're in too deep to get out of it.

Well, I guess that's what you wanted to say. Even if it isn't that, though, I still say you did a great job. I'd like to see more stories like this on TONFA, to be honest.