Reviews For Heartless
Name: shannon (Anonymous) · Date: 24/09/07 - 06:15 pm · For: Void of Innocence
you never up-dated
Name: Shabuki (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 - 02:29 pm · For: Void of Emotion
That was great. The style was excellent and it wasn't at all rushed. And GO ITASASU! Cute pictures too. =3
-- Usagi : why thank you!! I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while on this one. I've got stories on almost every website known to man nowadays haha : )
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 - 10:56 am · For: Void of Memory
What i mean is with more paragraphing, and the speech separated out, sorry i didn't explain that well. I think that that makes it easier to read.
Author's Response: aw thank you! I'll do that with the next chapter : D
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 02:40 am · For: Void of Memory
Aww they are being so Kawaii! I can't wait to see what happens next, I really like this story. It would be easier to read if it was more separated out like previous chapters though. But update soon, you are doing fantastically on this story!
Author's Response: explain what you mean by more seperated? I'm always looking to improve my writing
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 05:28 pm · For: Void of Emotion
I love your writing. and oh how i love uchihacest! soo hot
Author's Response: yeah uchihacest is amazing : D thank you for the reviews and im glad you like my writing <333
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 03:53 am · For: Void of Lust
*drools* so hot:p
you got a nice writing style;)
Author's Response: awww thank you!!!!! <33
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 02:56 am · For: Void of Lust
I love this story! you gotta update soon, i want itachi to feel again! and i loved the sex scenes!
Author's Response: YAY! I'll get an update hopefully by tonight. and I'm glad you liked the sex, I never think I get it right though. haha <33
Name: Yami Uchiha (Anonymous) · Date: 08/04/07 - 02:29 pm · For: Void of Emotion
uh. . . wow. thats all i can say.
Author's Response: as in bad?