Name: SweetLullaby (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 - 11:32 pm · For: Campimg
1:forgiven typos/sleep deprivation(i.e vimpire)2:feh.karma sucks.again,why'I'm uchiha naruto'?3:I loved Tenten's reaction.4:sensei,or sensai?5:'but other then then that'6:last part was kinda weird.Other than that,wOOt!ht was good as usual.
Author's Response: no i know i have a lot of typos its more sleep the lack of sleep and it is going to get better sorry for the chapters before.
Name: SweetLullaby (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 - 11:11 pm · For: The Two Twins
My unwanted advice:1:its 'geez',not geese.2:hehe.People in actual books seem to know more than what they show.3:careful where you put quote marks.4:will it explain why Sasuke pretended his name is Naruto later?5:sorry to be a @?!$# but-typos.I forgive you wether accidental or tired. ;]
Name: SweetLullaby (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 - 10:54 pm · For: Dream of truth
Feh.No wonder Naruto doesnt know Hinata likes him.The typos werent taht bad,so I guess its readable.Yes uniquely written.Was this meant to show how stuck up Sakura is?Shouldve unpacked herself instead of actually waiting.Ack.Im being insulting,arent I?Sorry..
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/07 - 09:13 pm · For: Dream of truth
Nice! Can't wait for the update
Author's Response: Well Thanks, hope you keep reading.