Reviews For Hold On Hinata
Name: Megs (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 - 08:21 pm · For: Chapter 17: Such Is Denial
Well u saud u would fix it and u did so.....thank you very much and,GREAT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!
Name: Megs (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 - 08:00 pm · For: Chapter 16: Hear Me Now
Y..you..you......YOU MADE THEM BREAKUUUUUP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Well u said u would make it better so....welll,MAKE IT BETTER DAMN IT!!!
Name: Megs (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 - 12:25 pm · For: Chapter 7: Sake and Genins
Great chapter....I LOVED IT!!!!
Name: Megs (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 - 11:48 am · For: Chapter 4: Silly Little Day Dreams
WHAT IS WRONG W/ U!!!Why did u make all that a daydream!!!And 2 think i thought u were awesome!!!T_T I will keep reading but u better have a good excuse 4 what happened!!...........as much as it pains me to say it...GREAT CHAPPIE!!
Name: narutoartlover (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 09:57 am · For: Chapter 19: A Lesson To Be Taught
You really should update on here as you do on FF.net.
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 - 02:51 pm · For: Chapter 1: Friends and Roses
if you want you could use fire fly thats a good song oh and also i know but where, like what website did you go on to translate them. and you thing negi can stand up against MY naruto, plus i already destroyed negi with fire muhahaha next is sasuke. *Thinks up plan to destroy sasuke* My version of hinat attack "I'll do my best" *places her stance* "Jyuuken" right to the opposite side of the heart. *sasuke coufs up blood*. "very good hinata" says naruto. "Oh yeah" *plugs hinatas and narutos ears* "i know the secret yay" why does evveryone turn preagnent in your story next thing you know you put anko preagnent. "dang it, why did i give you ideas" also i made my own jutsu i think reversal technique" its ovious but its too ovious. perfect
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 08:04 pm · For: Chapter 19: A Lesson To Be Taught
fianly im caught up very good please update and according to the story you dont update often so i guess naruto will have to attack you if you dont my version of naruto that is muhahahaha anyways you watch to much anime soon you'll be talking about full metal alchemist or someting well your cruel to the characters witch i enjoy muhahahaha well anyways yeah i forgot but anyways *bites thumb and spreads blood to all fingers on right hand* i have back up *places hand with thumb slightly curled, on the ground* summoning jutsu "hey, gamakichi" "yo, whats up" oh nothing just reading a great fan fic that tortures the naruto characters" "sweet, hey am i in it" "nope,sorry" "okay, who wrote this, POPS" *giant toad shows up* "what is it son" "The author hasnt put me in the story" "is that right well then, tim help me out here....ninja art:toad oil" *oil slime shoot directly at neji* "Fire Element Fire Style:Katon no Jutsu" tim shouted. neji turns around and screams yet again "Why me" neji said falling to the ground as a burnt crisp. anyways rock lily okay yeah thats messed up but also yeah i cant remember well update soon
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-- HyuugaAmane : I like to think I'm getting better about that. I've updated twice in the last week and I'm in of writing chapter 20. =3 If you send Naruto I'll send Neji to deal with him. *evil smile* I know I watch far too much anime. Last time I counted I had seen over 80 different series. XD FMA? Been there and got bored with. I didn't like that one very much. ^^' Being cruel to certain *cough* Neji *cough* Sasuke *cough* characters is the highlight of my day! ^^= lol Neji cruelity in reviews? It can't get any better. lol Yeah the Rock Lily thing was a spur of the moment thing. It was the only name that stuck out in my head so I used it. I'll update as soon as possible. ^.~
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 05:20 pm · For: Chapter 1: Friends and Roses
im listening to that song again as i read the responses and also i didnt think anyone liked that song besides me bodies and also i read the one review saying you gave up confidence in writing lemon well let me tell you this it doesnt matter people wont hate you and also you can look at others and get ideas from there stories and you gave hinata confidence in her self so put some of that in yoourself im making my own story and manga called Hitori Itai as im sure you know that means alone and pain hitori(alone) itai (pain) also how did you translate those lyrics and words and thank you ive never understood what anou meant finally janae
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-- HyuugaAmane : It's a good song. Yeah, but it still makes me nervous.. I guess I could give it a shot in an upcoming chapter, but I really doubt it would be any good. Granted I've read enough of them that I should be able to write it no problem. XD I knew itai, but not hitori. I looked up the lyrics to be honest. I'm not that good with Japanese. XD
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 09:23 pm · For: Chapter 8: That's Salty
okay thats really weird thats the song im listening to today ive been replaying it on youtube with naruto in it and now its in the story weird O.o
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-- HyuugaAmane : Ironically that's happened to me before so I know how you feel. lol
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 08:59 pm · For: Chapter 7: Sake and Genins
for one i like the song bodies and im assuming you got ichigo from bleach and since your the japaneese expert im sure you know that Ichigo means strawberry its true
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-- HyuugaAmane : Yeah that is a good song. Your right that's were I got the name Ichigo and yes I am aware it means strawberry. lol
Name: coolbeans13 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 07:40 pm · For: Chapter 19: A Lesson To Be Taught
Oh it's so HAPPY!! Nothing weird or awful happened in this chapter and it was just happy and everything. I appreciated that :)
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-- HyuugaAmane : Yep it's just a happy chapter. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting.
Name: animeangel1010101 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 05:11 pm · For: Chapter 19: A Lesson To Be Taught
Oh! So funny. I've read every single chapter, and I must say, this was by far the funniest! :D
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-- HyuugaAmane : I'm glad you think so. I agree I also think this is the funniest because I hardly every stopped laughing as I wrote it.
Name: Pedromac (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 11:22 am · For: Chapter 18: The Lust of Blood
Nice chapter, the only thing that you could do differently is actually try to describe teh sex scene rather than skip through it. It would make this story much much better. And, just in case you were planning on making another story that would explain teh sex scene so peopel would switch to that one when they read this part. Please dont. It ruins the story by adding pauses like that. Other than that i dont really have anything else to say.
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-- HyuugaAmane : Sorry about that. I've never written an entire lemon before so yeah I kind of lost confidence and decided only to hint at it. No worries I won't make a side story like that. I never intended to. Thanks for reading.
Name: lordlamson (Anonymous) · Date: 02/08/07 - 09:55 am · For: Chapter 18: The Lust of Blood
this is an amazeing story i hope u keep writeing and thank you for the story
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-- HyuugaAmane : Your welcome it's my pleasure. Don't worry I definitely intend to keep writing. Thanks for reading.
Name: sonic_richard (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 06:22 am · For: Chapter 18: The Lust of Blood
Wow this story is awsome! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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-- HyuugaAmane : Thanks for the review. The next chp is up! =P I hope you like it.
Name: coolbeans13 (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 - 07:35 pm · For: Chapter 18: The Lust of Blood
oooo it's soooo good! Update! Update! haha.
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-- HyuugaAmane : I'm glad you like it. I just updated today. Chp 19 is up. =3
Name: battousai1889 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 - 02:26 am · For: Chapter 16: Hear Me Now
Too much of the conflict in this story seems forced,,,almost as if it was an afterthought. While it is an effective plot device, all conflict must be natural, and fluid. Much like love, really. Otherwise it doesn't have the impact to a reader that a writer should strive for. Cheers
Name: Master_Jeriah_slayer (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 - 08:56 am · For: Chapter 17: Such Is Denial
Nice knew chapter...I always did wonder if those red things where birthmarks, paint. or tatoos
Name: HinaNaruforever (Anonymous) · Date: 06/07/07 - 05:58 am · For: Chapter 17: Such Is Denial
Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^
Name: Shikitoka Proto (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 10:17 am · For: Chapter 12: Seventeen
TOKYO?!?!?! Can I come? Tokyo kicks ass.
Name: Shikitoka Proto (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 10:08 am · For: Chapter 11: Assassin
HAHAHA! SASUKE GOT PWNTED THE 3RD TIME!!!! THIS IS THE GREATEST FIC EVAH!!!!!!
Name: toruk (Anonymous) · Date: 05/07/07 - 09:54 am · For: Chapter 17: Such Is Denial
this was a great chapter keep working
Name: Shikitoka Proto (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 09:38 am · For: Chapter 9: Unexpected Surprises
Can I get a copy?!?! PLEEEEAAASE??!!?!?!?!?
Name: Shikitoka Proto (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 09:28 am · For: Chapter 8: That's Salty
Salty? What?
Name: Shikitoka Proto (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 09:01 am · For: Chapter 6: Stormy Night
I didn't know it was lee, so I made him sound like a Jamaican lolz^_^'