Reviews For Below Average: Teaser
Name: coolninja90skid (Signed) · Date: 20/04/15 - 09:09 am · For: Chapter 1
its a keeper
can i be in it
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/12/14 - 07:44 am · For: Chapter 1
That wasn't bad at all. It was a bit on the short side though and didn't really give us a background on Minami. I suppose you'll reveal that through the actual story though. I saw a couple of run on sentences in the beginning but nothing too bad. Her father seems like a dick but I suppose a lot of fathers in Naruto are well dicks. If you update, I'll read it. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I did happen to notice that I had some run on sentences, I didn't actually notice until I published it though, and yes I do plan on giving you some more background on Minami. This was only the prologue so yeah it was kind of just a slight introduction. Thank you very much!