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Reviews For The Ten Tails

Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/14 - 10:31 pm · For: Chapter 30
Very excited about the final!!! Can't wait to see who will be the Proctor!

Author's Response: Me too. But the really exciting chapter are just a few chapter ahead. I'm really excited to write them, and for the readers to read.


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/14 - 12:29 pm · For: Chapter 29
What is up with the owl? Yeah I know, hold my horses lol. I will(try)to be patient lol.

Author's Response: Haha it'll take time to really know who she is. But I'm excited to write the next chapters


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/14 - 05:34 am · For: Chapter 28
This chapter was perfect timing, I watched episode 219 where Guy and Kakashi race through the village. The epicness of it left me lolling as did this.


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 22/04/14 - 06:43 am · For: Chapter 27
Loved it, as usual. I just wish we'd seen more of the dinner with Gai. Obviously Kakashi is perturbed by it, and might even have followed and spied on them. But I'd like to know what to picture, like was it quiet, or one sided conversation, or a lively conversation. And if he contributed to flirt. Idk, it feels like bc she's inexperienced her point of view can be far more limited than it could be. Either way, still very entertaining, and I'm glad the love essence is coming out a bit now :) thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to write more detail in.


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/14 - 03:24 pm · For: Chapter 27
Oh gosh I love how Guy and Kakashi are now vying for Kiyoko, this story got even more interesting *fist pump*

Author's Response: I want to really thank you! You have been reading and commenting and it really helps me. I like to know what is on the mind of my readers. So thanks!!!!!!


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 19/04/14 - 06:11 am · For: Chapter 26
Oh gosh Guy and Kakashi were great, hmm a love triangle maybe hehehe


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/14 - 09:43 pm · For: Chapter 25
It's nice she got a little girl time in :)


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/14 - 05:23 am · For: Chapter 24
Oh man that was some dream and a recurring one, not a good omen.


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/14 - 06:13 am · For: Chapter 23
Awww Kakashi


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/14 - 10:36 am · For: Chapter 22
Whew I needed a little down time after that last chapter. Look forward to the next chapter!


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/14 - 06:07 am · For: Chapter 21
Now that was an exciting chapter! Looked like somebody has been dabbling in Hashirama DNA.


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/14 - 11:41 am · For: Chapter 20
I did not see that coming *jaw drop*

Author's Response: Hahaha. I was thinking of a great twist an I came up with this. I'm glad you liked it.


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/14 - 07:46 pm · For: Chapter 19
I was wondering how the group and individual exams were going to work, well done :)


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/14 - 11:18 am · For: Chapter 18
Nice to see her with Kiba and Hinata!


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/14 - 07:38 pm · For: Chapter 17
Another very good chapter! Things are getting so good!


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 13/03/14 - 05:55 am · For: Chapter 16
Whew, that was an emotional chapter, very nicely done. Yeah, Yamato!!


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/14 - 06:41 pm · For: Chapter 15
Another good chapter, looking forward to the Chunin exams!


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 09/03/14 - 09:42 am · For: Chapter 15
Woah. Well that was interesting. I kind of wish some of the things she does, like meeting with Hinata and Kiba, would have a bit more detail. They just seem a little rushed. But other than that, good plot and character progression :) I'll be looking out for another update!

Author's Response: Thanks. While I was writing it, it seemed fine, but once I published it and read it, it did feel rushed, I'll try to put more thought into it. Thanks for the feedback


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 06/03/14 - 06:27 am · For: Chapter 14
I don't think this was a bad chapter at all :) I enjoyed reading it. It was filled with quite the existential crisis... Good work, and I look forward to reading further chapters :)


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/14 - 05:23 am · For: Chapter 14
Two more wonderful chapters. Good to read a little more of her backstory, sad and tragic as it was. Good for Kakashi to get what happen out, he needs to do more of that. Look forward to reading more!


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/14 - 05:23 am · For: Chapter 12
I was so glad that I was feeling up to reading finally(I've been sick, still am)and then I reach a cliff hanger! Needless to say this has gotten very exciting my friend, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thanks I'll try to post later today or tomorrow. You're like my number one reader, so thanks for reading my story and commenting! Hope you feel better.(I'm getting sick too, but I'll still write and post for my few readers)


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/02/14 - 12:06 pm · For: Chapter 1
Okay, first off the little nitpicks. There were some fragmented sentences. Most can be fixed with maybe an extra word or two. Another thing is you basically explained the character and her past all in the very first chapter. That takes away from the bond that grows between reader and the character. Like maybe you could have had the attack and then gradually explain her hard past. Another thing is your dialogue. Example: You have no choice.” This is taken from one of the last paragraphs. The problem here is the period. If you end dialogue with a period and then go on to express how they spoke (that wording may be a bit confusing. I apologize), as you did, with "one of them said, there should be a comma instead. So it'll look like this: "You have no choice," one of them said. If, however, you went right from dialogue to action, you would keep the period. (ex: "You have no choice." He threw another kunai in my direction,). I think that was most of it. Oh, also I was a bit confused. Like you jumped right from explaining her past to what she was presently doing. That threw me off at first.

Despite the size of the before, I enjoyed the first chapter. Kiyoko seems interesting and I like how and has no clue what's going on. For whatever reason I love doing that seeing as I am doing/going to do that to all the main ocs in my stories. I'm eager to learn more about her as well. I'm curious about how the whole thing came about of her hosting the demon, so I will admit you didn't tell us everything about her past. I can take guesses due to the name of the village, but still. What drove the decision? Or was it even a human choice?

Also, I am under the age of 18, so would you mind explaining the reason behind the rating?

Author's Response: thanks for the feedback. The first couple chapters are written in my phone that's why there are so many mistakes. I'll try to fix that, so keep commenting on the mistakes I like it. Well there is a lot about her past that the reader doesn't know, even Kiyoko doesn't know about it herself. I don't know why the rating is 18. I'll change it. Thanks.


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 16/02/14 - 04:50 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh goodness Kiyoko seems cornered.


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/14 - 06:32 am · For: Chapter 8
That was really good, especially about the blood on her hands.

Author's Response: Thanks. You are like the only one who comments so thanks


Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 07/02/14 - 06:25 am · For: Chapter 7
Oh the Kakashi feels! I like the Sasuke sighting you added, nice. Jiraiya, got to love him lol.


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