Reviews For Forsaken Heirs
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/14 - 09:25 pm · For: Caged Birds
Can't tell you how happy I was to see an update for this story! Wow what a update it was. There was so much of this chapter I liked(the affair between Hinata's father and Kiba's mom, that was superb. I certainly hope that you will be writing more, I've missed this story a lot.
Author's Response: I am so touched you reviewed! I missed writing to people that actually take the time to write a few lines!!! I am trying to change the pace to this story, I felt it was too introductory for now. But the chapter in itself is not even finished, I have a few more 9000 words to write, to seal the young woman and to get going with the plot. And yes, I couldn't keep quite about Tsume and Hiashi ... because I need Hana to twist this plot (I know you are thinking about the obvious here, Hana being Hiashi's first child, but not really where I want to go ... sorry for spoiling) >.< And by the way, I loved your Next Room oneshot! It was GOLD! (besides what someone wrote you in their reviews). Really reminded me of some old school short stories.
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/13 - 11:26 am · For: Fate
Another great chapter! I couldn't help shedding a tear about Neji but that's just me lol. I just love the personality you have given Ko, seems so fitting for some reason, makes me wish I lived in their world lol. Yeah I'm weird like that. As always I'm looking forward to reading the next installment!
Author's Response: I always loved Neji, maybe more than any other character (besides maybe Kisame, and yes I already have written a KisaHina fanfiction, if you are wondering). His death really shook me to my foundations. But at the same time I couldn't but give him a role in this fanfiction, maybe because I am worried he will be forgiven. It is the bitterness of his death that made me show him in a different light, as more willful. I guess that when it comes to Naruto, I would as well like to be part of their world, to interact with them on a friendly basis. As for good old Ko, when you watch the anime, he has a personality at times but he is not really developped (and in the manga, he appears one time and has a big nose, gee), so whatever I do with him, there will be OOCness. So why not embrace it wholly! My Ko is a 32-year-old man who wants to kiss the dust a 19-year-old girl walks on. Fetichism? All the way!
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/13 - 10:34 pm · For: The Bodyguard
This just keeps getting better! Superb writing, I enjoy seeing lesser know characters get their time to shine in a story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: And you are back! I will tell you a very stalkerish secret. I waited with great excitement for your review, not that much because it praises the story, but I did feel that maybe you were a less conventional fanfic reader and that you might actually enjoy the novelty of lesser known characters. Now, I must admit that since you are my only reviewer on this site, I do keep you in the back of my mind when I write, and I am a tid bit anxious that you will not like it and that I will end up with no follower whatsoever (yes, egocentric, I know). The next chapter is a little bit of a far stretch, you could seriously hate it or be okay with it. What does worry be though is the fact that it will still take one or two chapters before we squeeze our main Sasu-boy in there and you might get bored. All that to say thank you! I really, really do care about reviews and they do make me want to update as fast as possible.
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/13 - 06:38 am · For: Sisters
Very much looking forward to the next chapter. I do envy your writing style, nice and smooth.
Author's Response: I can't believe I received a review. I must admit that I am so very flattered and touched. I am quite aware how difficult it is to get reviews on TONFA, especially for a non-canon pairing that also implies a character that was barely seen in the series. Thank you so very much for your encouragements. And if you do permit, I would like to read your own fanfiction. It seems intriguing actually, and I rarely feel intrigued by original characters.