Reviews For A Kunoichi At Heart
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/06/13 - 04:26 pm · For: Meeting the Hokage
Haha. I think a lot of people are ghost readers. I'm very glad to find out you read it and liked it. It's always a joy when someone else loves the worlds I create.
Hm..... I like where this is going. I've tried amnesiac characters a few times, and whether they are serious or lying, they're fun to read/write about. I wonder if she'll continue with her lie. It seems like she "lived" in Konoha while she actually lived in our world. I wonder what her life was like here. The Hokage knows her, so that's something. Then again, he's so nice it doesn't surprise me too too much. I keep on wanting to say I wonder what will happen next, but then I remember I choose XD. Her excitement from being in the Naruto is really fun to read. I wouldn't mind switching her places right now. Too bad it's not really me XD.
Author's Response: Agreed, but I'm always just happy that there are people out there enjoying what I write too. And yes, definitely! Haha, I agree. Hmm, that's true, unfortunately, there's only so much one can choose, as the author controls and restricts the plot-lines. *smacks self* ;^; Same with me, that's one of the reasons I wrote this fic. It's about the closest I can get to actually landing in the Naruto world. :P That's why I find reader-insert stories so much fun to read, though the 'reader' persona isn't actually me, but it's fun pretending sometimes. xD
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/06/13 - 03:36 pm · For: Decisions, Decisions!
Ah, so you recognized me, too. Since I'm new there and so far Cursed Saint hasn't really gotten reviews or anything, I didn't figure you would. Nice to know it's caught your attention. If you want, there's 12 more chapters here.
Now the actual review (being on ff.net a lot has gotten me used to replying to others thoughts =P). So it seems [Name] is playing the amnesia card. I wonder how that will go. Ah, so here is where the CYOA part comes in. Interesting. Man, I want to see how they all go..... One at a time I guess. So far this CYOA is a very fun experience and I'm excited to see where it leads.
Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks! I really enjoy your writing style and the way the plot flows, and your OC Ryu is pretty awesome so far. I'm a little bit of a shy reviewer/ghost reader, aha. :D That's what it seems thus far *shifty eyes*. Yep, finally the choices! And thank you very much again for taking the time to leave a consctructive review. I really appreciate it!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/06/13 - 02:16 pm · For: Introduction: The Vanishing TV
Well, this is the first CYOA I've seen on Tonfa, and it surprised me since I recognized you from fos-ff. So, well, since I'm not feeling as overwhelmed by all the CYOA here, I figured I'd read.
It's very weird reading a CYOA because I've never even read a 2nd person story, but it is also similar to reading a 1st person. The story seems interesting so far, and I am curious as to how..... Okay, now here's the weird part. Okay, curious as to how [Name] arrived in the Narutoverse. And it seems like she's well known. How is that? This beginning definitely has me asking questions, and I'm eager to see how this CYOA thing works.
Nice chapter, Chloryl.
Author's Response: I see, I recognize you from fos-ff too, and your story posted on there definitely has me intrigued! Yes, they are pretty similar. Though for a reader-insert style story, second person POV gives more of a feel that you're in the story rather than just reading about someone else...sort of. It depends if the person is reading it for the story, or actually picturing themself as the main character. ^^ & that gets revealed soon, somewhere in the first six chapters. It differs from choice to choice though. :D And thank you so much! I'm very honoured and happy that you find it interesting thus far.