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Reviews For Final Wish

Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/13 - 01:18 pm · For: The Dream
and forgot to mention...
those guys were talkin like they're used to bringing kids from the real world to the naruto one...
so Danny is the only one then?


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/13 - 01:16 pm · For: The Dream
okai...
that was actually a pretty big chapter!

bullies :/
well... i've been subject to a few... i'l admit.... so i really hate them very much :P as most do... yeah... nothin new in that i knw i knw...

anyways...
so this guy who enters this time is not a dedicated Otaku then?
and hmm... not a fan of Fairy Tail :P
didn't like the manga very much :P
poor kids :/ having to be beat up all the time with no way to escape beating -_-
and haha lucky he gets to sleep over at his friend's place like that :P
my parents would never lemme do it XD

so his friend is an Otaku...
so only Daniel is gonna visit the naruto universe then...
and Woah.. thats a pretty interesting start here O.o
a void area or something? O.o a gap between 2 dimensions huh?
so why do they want to fuse their souls? O_O
are they trying to form a path between the two dimensions?
so that Danny or the other guy could travel between both the worlds?
and is Danny from his own world... or does his family have connections with the Naruto world... if not originally a part of it...

so are these 4 a ninja team... or just siblings...?
i thought his real life injuries were being healed :P so they didn't? or did they already? :P

ok... i didn't notice any grammar mistakes... or there weren't any very noticeable ones...
the characters seem interesting :)
danny being ur average teen...
peter a nerd with all the anime/mmorpgs and stuff...
so i'm guessing only Danny will be entering Naruto's world...

and what is this Nerumi thingy O.o

the plot seems quite a different one then ur usual "otaku suddenly falling outta nowhere into his fav anime world" plot...

loving it so far :D
u shoulda told me bout this fic once u'd updated it 2-3 chapters more! :O
coz i'm already wanting updates for this one!!!

its really a great anime Puny :D
and i don't regret reading it ;D
infact i'm glad i did read it :P
the headache ain't affecting it one bit XD

A great job at another Fic :D


Name: AiAi (Anonymous) · Date: 22/03/13 - 05:42 am · For: The Dream
I loved it! You are an amazing writer. Please continue to update the series! :)

Author's Response: Ahhh. Thank you so much. This review means so much to me because I don't usually get anonymous reviews ^_^. I'm so glad you liked this, and I hope you enjoy it in the future, AiAi.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/02/13 - 10:51 am · For: The Dream
Gosh, it took me so long to read this one too~!

The one Danny assumed had spoken looked similar to Kado... I actually stopped and went back to find where you had said the name "Kado" because I had no idea who you were talking about. You threw in his name without saying that the guy who was there was actually named Kado. You didn't introduce him until a few lines later.

You also say "beside of him" a lot when it should be "beside". Well I'm not actually sure if "beside of" is wrong in terms of grammar but it is awkward to say / read. I'm in a picky grammar mood right now XP

Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter. Albeit reading it in parts because I can never sit down and read long chappies anymore XP I'm really glad you made Danny feel resistance towards the "dream" because that's the more realistic way to act, and the end sets up a still reluctant yet more willing to listen type of response for Danny when he sees this group again. Overall this was a good chapter, long for an intro chapter but still flowed pretty well. Nice job.

Author's Response: Haha. It's fine. It took me a bit to reply =P. Oops. I guess that's what happens when I am too used to writing Kado. I'll have to remember to go back and fix that sometime. For now I'm distracted trying to type TK..... Beside of? I only saw it twice... Really? I've never seen it as awkward, but I'll try to remember to fix that as well. Haha. It's fine. I can read long chapters. It just takes me forever to review stories lately <_<. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I wasn't sure if I made Braelyn as good resistance wise. I felt more comfortable with how Danny was reacting, and I'm glad you agree ^_^. Well, he will meet them again, obviously. After all, the fun is just starting. You shall see then how he'll act, but I'm glad that I got across how I was wanting people to see him reacting. Again, thanks, and I'm glad you liked it.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/02/13 - 03:57 pm · For: The Dream
usually I'm not a fan of crossover fics but what the crap I'll give it a shot.

In general it was great, I mean you should know that by now because your writing is great. I'm very interested to see those people Komichi. We'll see where it heads next, nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you greatly, Itoko-san, for choosing to give it a shot. Haha. I'm not so sure my writing is great, but I'm glad you think so ^_^. Those people? Komichi is just one of them. Their actual title will be revealed as you read (if it wasn't already - I can't remember =P). Again, thanks for giving it a shot, and I'm glad you liked it.


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