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Reviews For Reverse This Curse

Name: impurity94 (Signed) · Date: 14/02/13 - 01:35 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! i haven't even started reading so im makin a prediction. rayne comes back as a ghost? or sasuke keeps dreaming about her? OR OR OR OR MAYBE RAYNE WAS RESCUED BY A STRANGER ASFTER SASUKE LEFT AND SHE WAS BROUGHT BACK TO LIFE?!?!?!?!?! i sure hope so because you were mean and made me cry because you killed her. anywho, THANK YOU SOOOO SUPER MUTCH FOR A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl shreek*

Author's Response: Loooolololol. Oh man, when I saw this I burst out laughing xD I'm not going to tell! I'm happy to hear you cried; it's nice knowing you made a connection with the character (: I hope you enjoy reading! Thank you! Xoxo~

Author's Response: Loooolololol. Oh man, when I saw this I burst out laughing xD I'm not going to tell! I'm happy to hear you cried; it's nice knowing you made a connection with the character (: I hope you enjoy reading! Thank you! Xoxo~


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/02/13 - 01:22 pm · For: Topeka
I always love seeing Itachi's thoughts on the massacre, the history, and his brother. It was heartwarming to say the least. With this flashback it let us, the readers, know the deep bond Itachi and Rayne are going to share. Here it starts. It's about to get a whole lot interesting. Amazing chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, this is where everything gets better ;D thank you!!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/13 - 01:35 pm · For: Topeka
I almost wasn't sure when this chapter had occurred, took me a few minutes to realize it was in the past. XP My whoopsie.

I really liked this chapter though, the little interaction between Itachi and Rayne was really good. They have a bit of history and I liked the tension easing into understanding and everything. I'm a little curious as to how Itachi knows about the love-to-hate thing relating to the Sharingan, since it was the Second Hokage that we all learned it from. I do like that Itachi wanted to train Rayne though, you've tied up a lot of a questions in this chapter that I really like. Nice job on this chapter, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I mentioned it was in the past in the Author's Notes. I guess no one does read them xD lol

Well, I figure that the Second hokage came before Itachi and knew all that. The discovery was probably passed down.. But I decided to include it because, hey, why not? He's supposed to pass all of his knowledge to Rayne. This is definitely one of my personal favorite chapters (: Thank you!


Name: almostambient (Signed) · Date: 13/02/13 - 09:22 am · For: Topeka
I was so excited when I logged in today and saw that you updated! I'm obsessed with your story. It's so well written and follows the plot so closely, and that seems to be getting harder and harder to find lately. Excellent work! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Ahhh, reading that gave me the biggest grin :) Seeing such a nice compliment when I woke up was a great start to my day. I'm happy you like it so much! I already wrote half of the next chapter, so it shouldn't be up too long from now. Thank you, much love! Xoxo~


Name: Fem! Gilbert Beilschimdt (Anonymous) · Date: 12/02/13 - 08:22 pm · For: Black Dahlia
Ze awesome me vants you to update! >:D

Author's Response: I'm sorry! It will be up soon!!!


Name: Zakuro Vargas (Anonymous) · Date: 03/02/13 - 09:55 pm · For: Black Dahlia
Updaaaaaaaate! :)

Author's Response: I'm working on it! I'm sorry, I'll explain in the Author's Notes when I post the next chapter ;m;


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/01/13 - 11:43 am · For: Black Dahlia
Um...... Would it be bad if I said I don't remember making any request? >_>. I really like the picture, and I need to get to commenting on it at Deviantart.

I really enjoyed the first scene. It really started to set up a bit of how Rayne feels. I kinda wish we could see some scenes between her and Itachi. There relationship was always interesting, and then we get hints of what happened, such as their discussions. It's very intriguing. I like seeing the parallel (I think this is the right word) between what Itachi did with Rayne and what he did with Naruto. Both of them have been entrusted with his will, though as you find out later, Naruto is giving it mostly to Rayne.

And then the meeting..... 0.0. I was waiting for the Naruto and Sasuke thing to see how she would react to the announcement that when they fought, one of them would die. But instead she stopped them. And then Sasuke..... I definitely wasn't expecting that reaction, that it most definitely makes sense. And then Sakura and Kakashi. I can see Kakashi being him, but maybe a bit more shock from Sakura. It was pretty good, though maybe a bit more at the beginning?

I am waiting very patiently for their next meeting. Seeing as right now he was mostly in shock and fear, I can't wait until he actually gets a hold of himself. That'll be interesting. As is.... Wow, Karin, I love you right then for telling us this stuff, but hate you for being what you were calling Rayne. It was really heart wrenching to find out what had been in Sasuke's heart this entire time, but it also makes me even more excited for the meeting between Rayne and Sasuke. Wow..... Now he knows she's alive. Will that hurt more or bring happiness? I can't tell with the dark state he's in. And whenever they have their first conversation. Gosh, I can't wait for more. But for what you have, I absolutely loved it.

And then Naruto...... I really enjoyed that. He can really be deep for someone everyone sees as an idiot. That's one of the most lovable things about him. I love the blond duffus XD.

Great chapter, Tink-chan. Other than the occasional mistake grammar wise, it was epic perfection.

Author's Response: It wasn't a request, more a suggestion. In one of your comments on dA you said you'd be interested in asking me about a banner for Cursed Saint.

Don't worry, the Rayne and Itachi scene(s) are coming, but at a particular time. It's hard for me to contain myself because I love writing them together so much. I want everything (the feelings, the conversations, the underlying themes, how Rayne is related to everyone, etc.) to be revealed over time because it makes reading more exciting. I like making you ask questions, because you always come back to answer them :D

Silverwolf said the same thing about Sakura's reaction, and I might go in and make it stronger. It proved to be difficult; I'm not really sure why. It was crucial to have Rayne come between Naruto and Sasuke for that reason. Naruto didn't forsee either of them dying in a fight against one another..so ;) WINKY FACE. It was also important to me to have the way Sasuke was feeling over the past three years discussed. Rayne is feeling very torn about what she wants to do, is she going after Sasuke just for Itachi, or is she going after him because she wants to save him? Giving her a little bit to go off of is what makes her decide to pursue him at the end of the chapter... I think I might write a guide for this story so I can talk about everything I'm doing that's important to the plot. I just might do that, because it's something I actually praise myself for xD

Pardon my grammar mistakes. Spell check has been working against me since the middle of HTAO ;__; ~Xoxo!


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 21/01/13 - 10:19 am · For: Black Dahlia
amazing chapter! I don't think I've ever seen such a perfect portrayal of karin *is laughing helplessly*


Interesting the way you've woven canon and "How to Adapt And Overcome" together in everyone's motivations.

is Rayne going to fall for Naruto?! *is laughing uncontrolably* you should totaly do that!

Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to nail her (LOL) character as well as I could. I'm happy everything's coming together well ^_^ Thank you. Nuooo! Well, maybe. I'll see how badly I can troll you guys ;D


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/01/13 - 06:46 pm · For: The Sound Of You and Me
I was surprised I actually recognized the band. Though I've only heard their Fighting song.

Just another random thought that occurred to me. This is after Pein's attack - shouldn't Konoha be in recovery mode or ruins? I thought of that last chapter, but I forgot.

I, like most judging from the reviews, was shocked at her waking up in Izumo's bedroom. I was extremely glad to find out nothing had happened. Rayne must end up with Sasuke or Naruto! I think.... Your story is making me like Izumo, so it's a bit conflicted, but Sasuke needs her, so..... Haha. Her conflict with Koketsu is so much fun. I love those two and how they're always butting heads. And his friendship with Izumo is fun. I really like these two characters after reading them in your fanfiction(s).

Hahahaha! Good ol' Rayne. Such a temper, and yet it's so fun. When it's not directed at you, of course. I loved that she made her own door, and then Yamato's later reaction. I don't know how it was before you corrected it, but I really liked this version. I can really imagine Naruto's state in this chapter. I was about to facepalm at the kiss (don't know why - just felt like doing it), and then ended up laughing when Yamato made the Ahem sound. Just like an adult. Even though it has slowly been unraveling, it's nice to see Rayne describing what happened all in once, as well as telling us how she survived. There's another mystery solved.

She knocked out Yamato. Great way to make an impression, Rayne. First blow him back by breaking a hole into their cabin, then knock him unconscious. Then again, this is Rayne we're talking about, and this is what makes her so lovable.

This was a great chapter, Tink-chan. I really enjoyed it, and so glad that HTAO wasn't the end of this, because I don't know what I'd do without your awesome stories. Okay, well, maybe I'm exaggerating a bit, I'll admit. BUT RAYNE STILL IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I don't listen to Yellowcard too often (I just happened to see them in concert twice lol), but this song makes me think of Rayne and Sasuke (: In regards to your random thought, yeah, that re-occurred after I had already written the chapter and re-read the manga strips...another whoopsie. I'll probably edit it out, but for right now, it's just going to stay there and I'm going to pray that no one else picks up on it :D Ahaha...hah >n>

The way I had Rayne's grand entrance into the hut wasn't as comical, and I find her blowing a hole in the side of the place more believable than what I first wrote, so I'm happy with the revision. I'm glad you followed how she survived. Figuring out how to explain things without any loop holes was challenging, but I think I got it. It will be explained in depth in future chapters as well :3 Ah, your comment about her knocking out Yamato made me laugh like a weirdo in the grocery store xD People stared, but it was too damn funny to contain myself.

You flatter me~ (>;u;)> I've said it before, and I'll continue to say it. Your love for my stories and Rayne really keeps me going. I'm grateful to have such a wonderful fan reading and enjoying my writing. Since you're an author, I'm sure you know the feeling (: Xoxo Always~


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/13 - 03:52 pm · For: Black Dahlia
Darn it, Sasuke! I was waiting for this epic reunion between Rayne and Sasuke, and all that he did was ignore eye contact T_T Darn you!

I guess I could picture Kakashi and Sakura reacting a little more outrageously upon Rayne's sudden resurrection, but that's just really hard to capture sometimes I guess. Especially since they were already preoccupied with Sasuke.

Oh, I reread the last chapter and saw the scene you rewrote. I like that one much better :3 Nicely done.

I also really loved the part where Karin shared what Sasuke has been thinking while on Team Hebi. I wonder if it's OOC of him to share personal stuff like that with Karin, but I still really liked what she said just because we got to see an inside look at Sasuke's thoughts of Rayne over the time skip and such.

Very nice chapter, Tink! I really enjoyed this one. Looking forward to more, as always :D

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it (: I like the revision myself.

It could be considered OOC, but I go off of his past self when it comes to Rayne. Since she was someone he let in and allowed to get hurt, being the one that hurt her, it makes him more sentimental over the fact. We have to know he still cares! Right? .. >u> Thank you! I will deliver more soon! :D Xoxo~


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/01/13 - 08:50 am · For: Black Dahlia
Wow that chapter was absolutely amazing. The whole reunion was just gut wrenching at least on Sasuke's part. I can tell his whole psychological make up crumbled in an instant and now he's confused beyond belief. What was he really thinking? What is he going to do now? So many questions. And Karin being dumb as usual lol.

Oh don't worry about the banner take as much time as you need honestly. I don't wanna rush you :P

So great great chapter. I really can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Wanna know a fun fact? I wrote their reunion in February 2011. When I say I've been planning a long time, I mean a loooong time. Damaging Sasuke's mental psyche is important; gotta knock some sense into the guy! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter where she seeks him out. Karin was meant to be a trigger for Rayne. I'm not really sure if I got that across, but basically Karin was supposed to give Rayne the push she needed because she was having doubts about Sasuke's feelings.

NO! You asked me first, so your request is going to be done first! End of story; I'm getting my ass in gear and doing it D:<

Thank you for reviewing(: I can't wait to see how I write what's in my head xD XOxo~


Name: almostambient (Signed) · Date: 18/01/13 - 09:48 pm · For: Black Dahlia
I absolutely love your story and the new chapter! I'm always checking back to see if you've updated because I'm so excited to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D I'm sorry I disappoint you so often when I don't update; I'm trying to get back on writing track ^^;; I'm happy you enjoy this story; thank you much for reading & reviewing~ Xoxo


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/13 - 07:28 pm · For: Black Dahlia
gasp!! how dare she! i hope karin dies in a pit of boiling lava laced in burning firecrackers and oil

Author's Response: Yeah, I still don't like her c:


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/13 - 07:12 pm · For: The Sound Of You and Me
freaking rayne! i love her so much! blowing yamato away!! lol and seesh, naruto should have done a motorboat :p

Author's Response: Woo! I love the love of her <(;u;)> I figured since I was revising, I should make it entertaining.. and motorboatless!! ... >_> Bad Amaya!


Name: mkgirl10 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/13 - 12:55 pm · For: The Sound Of You and Me
Yay! Naruto and Rayne are reunited. And she is truly scarier than Sakura.

Author's Response: Yeah, Sakura went from being kick ass and intimidating at the beginning of Shippuden to...well, kind of just there :x Thank you for reading! :D I can't wait to see reactions on the next chapter >u> Xoxo~


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/13 - 12:17 pm · For: The Sound Of You and Me
Gave me a flipping heart attack when Rayne woke up in Izumo's apartment. Seriously, I still figured there was gonna be a RayneXSasu or RayneXNaru story at this point, but that doesn't mean she can't do...other things (was my logic).

That being said... the first thing she does is kiss Naruto awake... Personally I think it would have been better if she punched him awake and in his sleepy haze she kissed him. Kissing him awake seemed so inappropriate considering they haven't seen each other. That being said, the kiss was still pretty sweet and a very nice moment.

And now that Rayne has pretty much knocked Yamato out, I wonder how she'll treat all these other Konoha shinobi when she sees them XD Nice work on this chapter, definitely wanna see how everyone else feels when they see Rayne. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Good, good. I'm glad everyone that reads this is as perverse as I (x Yeah, y'anno, I was torn between having her kiss him, or punch him. Just as I did with chapter 3, I may rewrite that scene in chapter 4, while updating chapter 5.. Yes? Yes. Yes I will, and I will take your advice, and I will improve! :D

Well hey, she doesn't know Yamato on a personal level. He's disposable to her xD Thank you for giving me feedback. I will definitely edit it because I see eye to eye with your opinion. Xoxo~


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 05/01/13 - 11:49 pm · For: Walk
too lazy to wait for my phone to load the lastest chapter to put this review. so yea.. lazy mode activate. you should TOTALLY troll us! lol she should go with naruto XD he deserves a girl since saku is a boobless alien that loves a chicken assed fathead lol. (and i think naruto should get laid before sasuke *nudge nudge* lol)

Author's Response: I read on my phone, too! :D I didn't even think about trolling, but I must say, it does sound veeeerrryyy tempting xD I can only imagine the burn reviews I'd get, along with a knock at my door from an outraged fan OxO ..Your ability to be blunt is truly comedic xD I'll see what I can do to get some for Naruto. I'll see what I can do xD


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 05/01/13 - 09:51 am · For: The Sound Of You and Me
ok just woah! why is rayne in Izumo's room? oooh ok so nothing hapened, that makes sense. I take back my shocked objection. and tearful denounciations forestalled. I would be mad at you if you trolled us by making rayne end up with someone other than Naruto or Sasuke.

tsunade didn't go into a coma untill the invasion of pein, after the kirabi vs sasuke thing.

rayne has knocked out yamato to go off on an adventure with naruto against orders? seems legit! XP

Author's Response: LOL IMAGINE IF I DID?! Oh man that'd be the ultimate troll xD Well this takes place after the invasion. She's announced unconcious in chapter 450, then Danzo becomes hokage, etc. Haha, what could possibly go wrong with her disrespecting the elders, allowing Danzo to be killed even though she was aware of the plan, and knocking out a Leaf operative? Psh, I dunno! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Xoxo~


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/01/13 - 07:17 pm · For: The Sound Of You and Me
Haha so many sexy moments in this chapter ;P
Though I am glad her and Naruto reunited!
Disobeying the rules ahh classic Rayne, hopefully yamato will understand.
As usual great chapter! Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: I~couldn't~help myself~ x) Yamato was in the way, so, y'anno >_> ..It will come soon!! And it will be EPIC *A* Thank ou for reading & reviewing! Xoxo (:


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/13 - 04:25 pm · For: Hotblack
heh heh heh when i saw that she was with him in the begining, my mind went to the gutter right away xD

Author's Response: (; buahahahah.. That was my intention b29;


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/13 - 04:10 pm · For: Hotblack
lol i reread this chapter. i dont like danzo at all.

Author's Response: Nor. Do. I. And that is a good thing, because he dies anyway :D Yay!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/12/12 - 11:18 am · For: Hotblack
*fist pump * Finally caught up! Though that does mean no next button T_T

Izumo..... *starts laughing like crazy * Oh man. I didn't realize how much I missed the two around each other. I was mentally laughing (mentally because I didn't want to be stared out) through most of the first scenes. First she is fighting to be arrested, and the Izumo comes in and she melts. Good ol' Rayne. So shall a little romance go on there before Sasuke returns? Ooh. What would Sasuke say if he knew? Well, probably along the lines of "SHE'S ALIVE?!?!" But, well, after that part.

Anyway - so my mental guess was right. It was the Uchiha massacre she wanted to discuss. And man, I love Rayne. She always points out the things I have been wanting to scream at others. Thanks for being my voice, Rayne XD. She really did put them in their place. Though as she described a good leader I began to miss Hiruzen like crazy. I'm very eager to see how this turns out. What will the bad parts of this outcome be? O_o. Oh, and it was nice to see Tsunade's pride in Rayne. She has a way of wiggling into everyone's hearts like Naruto.

P.S. What time does this take place? Because you mentioned the Kage Summit, but Tsunade was in a coma during that time.

Author's Response: This is what happens when Shannon decides to write a chapter because she thinks she remembers everything she read months ago, and doesn't want to refer to the manga... You are correct. I looked back through the chapters, and Tsunade was indeed down and out. I've revised this chapter, written Danzo in, and will re-post it along with the update tomorrow. Thank you for catching that for me :)

I really enjoy the random RaynexIzumo fluff I came up with. I've come to see him as an "all around man" and a gentlemen through the anime and manga, and Rayne's hormonal teenage...ness just clashes with that in a humorous way. I interact with someone older than me in a similar way, so that's probably where I get the inspiration from. Besides, it can't be ALL about Sasuke xP

I agree. I've always disliked the elders, so having the opportunity to bash them in my story through Rayne makes me happy >____> Continue to be eager, curious, and angry at me for cliff hangers because I don't explain everything directly! Thank you for reading and reviewing my dear! (: Xoxo~


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/12/12 - 10:39 am · For: Walk
Well, as I've already told you, I absolutely love the picture. It's really amazing, and Rayne will definitely make sure the Uchiha's cannot resist, as you said.

Has anyone told you you're evil? Because you are. You so totally are. I mean, seriously, are you trying to fry my brain with questions? It's just not fair. Leaving so many cliffhangers. I hate getting a taste of my own medicine T_T. For starters, is that Itachi's necklace she's wearing? I just noticed it when I enlarged the pictures. What mystery is she wanting to reveal? How is she alive? And where is Killer Bee's stuffed unicorn (don't ask, just had to add in something random)?

This was a really good, thought provoking chapter. Definitely, as you said, a cliffhanger chapter. It was nice to see Rayne interact with A since we didn't see too too much on that in HTAO. Also how close she is with Bee. Haha. More Rayne humor. I missed that. I also loved her speech to Rokubi about her purpose and will of fire.

Well, only one more chapter to read. Hopefully I'll get some answers *pointed look*.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/12 - 07:02 pm · For: Hotblack
Wow, way to go Rayne. I'm very proud of her for being able to tell it to those elders. She's still just as outspoken as she was before but I'm so glad that she's strong-willed and passionate about what she believes in. Good for her.

Oh my gosh, the entire scene with Izumo... so adorable XD It was pretty cute and funny at the same time and I can't believe she asked him out. That should be...fun... :3

Great work on this chapter, it was pretty funny and inspiring at the same time. Definitely looking forward to seeing how Rayne changes the plot up.

Author's Response: They're jerks >n> Dating all the way back to the Tsunade Retrieval Arc, when they approached Jiraiya about the position of hokage, I sat there thinking, "You guys are such dicks."

Bahahah. I don't know why, but I really enjoy Rayne and Izumo interacting. It's so fun to write into the story xD I'm happy to have you wanting more! The update is coming! Thank you for reviewing (: Xoxo~


Name: Zakuro Vargas (Anonymous) · Date: 24/12/12 - 02:56 pm · For: Hotblack
Yea!! U tell those old bastards rayne! I woulda cussed them out buuut I don't think that would have helped anything. Meh anyway love the chapter cant wait til the next update. Merry Christmas! :D

Author's Response: Badgering the elderly! Whoooo!! Happy Merry (belated) Christmas! And Happy Merry (belated) New Year to you too, sir and/or madam! :D


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