TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1097]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [655]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [18]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1741]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [871]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [294]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1580]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [203]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [107]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [128]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.
 
 

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Reviews For All The Lights

Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 23/11/12 - 02:45 am · For: All The Lights
"He didn't know if any band had ever done it, but he knew that old bands like The Who and The Beatles used to do it, at least one song at the time." That's a straight contraction surely. You can't 'not know' something and know at the same time. It's a little confusing like this.
What you mean would be more along the lines of: "He didn't know if any band had ever done it exactly like that, but old bands like The Who and The Beatles did at least play one whole song at a time." You also seemed to miss a word at one point and forgot to mark Iruka's thoughts.

Otherwise, this was very sweet, well-written and I really liked it. It was touching, realistic and yet they were both very much in character. Lovely work.



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