The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1095]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [655]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [18]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
General Fiction [1741]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [870]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [291]
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1579]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [203]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [107]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [128]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.

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Chapters: 25700
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Reviews For Bakemono

Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 15/05/16 - 06:09 pm · For: You're a Monster
I loved it
can I be in the story

Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 12/12/15 - 06:51 am · For: You're a Monster
Hey I really enjoyed it
And I was wondering if I can be in the story?

Name: Elizabeth (Anonymous) · Date: 28/04/14 - 05:11 pm · For: You're a Monster
Love your story hoe you continue it!

Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 05/11/12 - 05:55 pm · For: You're a Monster
Aww.. Poor kid.. :( He's so jumpy and scared. I like this idea. Kano-kun is so... pitiful. :'(

Now, for criticism...
Overall, great job. You could use more detail. There was also this one instance: "The thought kind of that reassured me." After re-reading it, I realized you were probably trying to say "The thought of that reassured me" but yeah. Just thought I'd point that out. Otherwise, you should continue this story. :)

Author's Response: *gasp!* that will be fixed right away! Arigatou Konan-san!! And t-ank youuuu for the reviewww ;D and I've already started the next chapter

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