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The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

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Het Romance [1096]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [648]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [18]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1743]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [867]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [292]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1574]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [201]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.
 
 

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Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 - 08:32 am · For: Prologue
Aside from the shortness, as Silverwolf pointed out, it was great. Don't worry about the spacing at the top. I think it does that whenever there's no chapter notes to take up the space.

This is a very interested start, giving us a look into the main character - Mitsuki, I believe - and leaving me at least hungry for answers. I can't wait to see the next chapter because it might just give me those answers. And if not, at least I'll have the next chapter to what is so far a good story.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/12 - 11:35 am · For: Prologue
The summary is what drew me in, really. This is a really short prologue, which is a bit disappointing. I was hoping for a little more, something to help me understand the summary a little more. Darn T_T

Your writing is pretty good, but as I said, this was pretty short and it doesn't give me much to judge. But what you have was enjoyable to read.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Can't wait for more. Nice work.


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