Reviews For Naruto: The Mitsuki Chronicles
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 - 08:32 am · For: Prologue
Aside from the shortness, as Silverwolf pointed out, it was great. Don't worry about the spacing at the top. I think it does that whenever there's no chapter notes to take up the space.
This is a very interested start, giving us a look into the main character - Mitsuki, I believe - and leaving me at least hungry for answers. I can't wait to see the next chapter because it might just give me those answers. And if not, at least I'll have the next chapter to what is so far a good story.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/12 - 11:35 am · For: Prologue
The summary is what drew me in, really. This is a really short prologue, which is a bit disappointing. I was hoping for a little more, something to help me understand the summary a little more. Darn T_T
Your writing is pretty good, but as I said, this was pretty short and it doesn't give me much to judge. But what you have was enjoyable to read.
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Can't wait for more. Nice work.