Reviews For Into the Dawn
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/04/12 - 02:08 pm · For: War
This is a lot like how I think. Well, my mind actually goes a little more, but overall it's a lot like how I think. I've always hated war. It just means death. Not just of those fighting in it, but also of the innocents count in the crossfire. Darn it, now I want to write a story of mine (real story) as a fanfiction just because of this. Then I'm sure Silverwolf would have my head.......
Author's Response: Glad you liked :) Haha I don't think getting your head bitten off is a great idea :P
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/12 - 06:39 pm · For: War
This was just so real. It really keeps to the theme of what Shizake was really about, and that's why I loved it. It was just a really sad yet thoughtful entry. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :) Tbh there was no real reason why I wrote it but I just had an burst of thoughtful ideas running around. This will probably become an assortment of one shots on many topics such as death, birth, etc. etc. Thank you for the review :)
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 09/04/12 - 02:25 pm · For: War
I've never read Shizake's story, but I suddenly feel like I know him very well. This had a lot of good points in it, in and outside of fan-fiction. Peace is such a unfathomable idea. Everyone wants it, but with human idealism and opinion, the only way to really get it seems to be by brainwashing people.
Again, I've never read the story, but this is a good opening to a completely different story. I could just settle into it, not knowing at all what happened before hand. It's like reading the first book in a series that's related to something else. I don't need the first ones, but they'd clear up a few questions.
I really enjoyed this, Senpai! I wish you luck on all of your writings!
Author's Response: I had a sudden burst of philosophical inspiration. I will probably add more entries. I'm really glad you liked it :) Thank you for the review Haiena-chan!