Reviews For A Legacy in the Dust
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/12 - 12:40 pm · For: Experience
Haha, Hotaru sounds like me when I wake up in the morning XD
Oh my gosh, Zuzake learned Chidori! That's awesome! Good for him, its exciting to have a relative to help him in his endeavors.
Good job, Shizake! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: haha I knew you would say something like that :P Haha yup he did :D and it's just gonna get a whole lot better. Thanks for the review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/05/12 - 06:14 pm · For: Consternation
When the old man first came in, I thought "It's Sasuke". When I saw he was using lightning, I thought "Yep. Most definitely Sasuke". And so, I was smiling like crazy as the first twin made his appearance.
This was a great chapter. I felt like crying when he spoke of how much being alone hurts. I feel bad for poor Zuzake. I'm so glad he finally met some living family. YEAH!!!!!
This was a great chapter, Itoko-san. I absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: Haha were you :P I wanted to make it...Idk the word for it Ah don't cry. Now he's not alone :D Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/05/12 - 02:48 pm · For: Revelations
Sweet! I was right. It was Shizake! And I'm so happy to see him. I've really missed Shizake. I hope there's more dreams with him =D.
Ahhhh..... Sasuke and Sasaui are coming back? Haha. That reminds me of a time I thought of doing a story about the next generation with her kids. Anyway, I can't wait to see them. I'm sure it'll be great. And I really want to see the mission. Knowing their lives, something's sure to go wrong.
Author's Response: Haha you guessed right. The dream sequences will become important :P Yup! They are, I can't wait to introduce them completely back! Well. Sasuke took care of the mission :P Thanks for the review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/05/12 - 01:34 pm · For: Turning Point
Are you sure that's how they're chosen? Because if it was that way, it would be impossible for all the Rookie Nine and Team Guy to become Chuunin. And how is Gaara still alive? Wouldn't his generation have passed by now or do I have the time wrong, because I may be thinking of the Legend of Korra.
This was a great chapter. I was partially hoping to see more fights, but oh well. I really enjoyed Hitomi's and Zuzake's. Speaking of which, Zuzake's fight was amazing. I absolutle loved it! And he awakened the third tomoe, and we finally get to see who the mystery voice is. For some reason I think it's Shizake or his dragon spirit.
Great job, Itoko-san! This was amazing!
Author's Response: Yup. I looked it up. Yeah they could still be alive. I guess it depends lol. Sorry for the lack of fights. I just hate doing multiple fight scenes lol. I'm glad you like the fights though :P Thanks for the review
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 21/05/12 - 04:10 pm · For: Character submissions!
Ha, nice intro to Sasuke. Liked the chapter and I sent you an email for Aku OC stuff. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. And thanks again for the Aku submission.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/05/12 - 03:51 pm · For: Consternation
When I saw that the rogue shinobi were messing with an elderly man, I was literally thinking, "It's Sasuke!" XD
I'm so happy for Zuzake that he has a relative now. He deserves people to care for him.
Good job on this, Shizake-Nii-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Haha I didn't try to make it not obvious :P Thanks, glad you liked :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/12 - 07:56 pm · For: Revelations
Aww! Zuzake met his grandfather! That's so great! It's so sweet too!
Oh wow, if Sasuke and Sasaui are still alive, they must be old! Wow... I can't wait to see them, haha!
Great chapter, Nii-san! It was awesome! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Glad you liked :) Eh...If you do the math...They would be around...70 maybe?
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 14/05/12 - 04:14 pm · For: Character submissions!
Nice fight, but a little dissapointed you didn't do Isago, but eh it's fine. Goddamn cliff hanger! nice chapter, and you should update abysmal soon.....
Author's Response: Haha sorry. I'll make it up. Don't worry, I'm working on the next chapter so you will find out what happens next soon. Oh, I'll work on Abysmal tonight. My bad lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/12 - 06:49 am · For: Turning Point
Wait... Is that how the Chuunin Exams are? I thought it was just judged based on how well you fought which was why Shikamaru was promoted...
I'm a bit disappointed we didn't get to see Isago's fight, bu Zuzake's was so awesome that it kinda makes up for it :D It was so epic...
Cliffhanger?!?! Seriously?!?! C'mon!
Haha, good job on this chapter, Nii-san! Can't wait to read more and find out what happened!
Author's Response: Yeah. I looked it up and was surprised. I thought the same as you. lol I know. I was just getting tired of typing. I'm glad you liked Zuzake's fight though Hehe I know. Don't worry it will be updated soon
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/05/12 - 06:49 am · For: Test
I find it hilarious that Hitomi's second kekkei genkai awakened in the chapter after I mentioned it.
It was a great battle. I feel bad for Hitomi for having to go through that just to awaken her Kekkei Genkai, but I feel worse for Zaishi for being on the receiving side of that.
This was a great chapter. I was jumping up and down when I saw Hitomi was using her kekkei genkai. Great job with this, Itoko-san. It was absolutely amazing. I loved it.
Author's Response: Yeah. I had it planned so her second one would kick in during the chuunin exams. Yeah, he had no idea what was coming. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review.
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 11/05/12 - 01:25 pm · For: Character submissions!
Nice man, I really like the fight scenes, and the chunin exams are just great. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks! More epic fights to come.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/12 - 07:56 am · For: Test
Yay! Hitomi won! That fight was awesome, and when her second kekkei genkai came in, I was really excited for her :)
Ooh, I can't wait to find out who is next. I'm looking forward to more epic fights! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Epic fights all the way through. Thanks for the review
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/05/12 - 02:20 pm · For: Progression
I'm so sorest that I made Ryoushi, Zuzake! He must hate me for making such a jerk face character that seems to enjoy testing him. Again, sorry Zuzake. Though it was a great chapter that I loved. And I thought Hitomi blushing was extremely cute. And it seems like every time Hitomi gets knocked out, I imagine her kekkei genkai activating =P
This was a great chapter, Itoko-san. I absolutely loved the fight scene. Hitomi protecting Zuzake and then his sudden will to fight. I just loved it.
Author's Response: It had to be someone right? Might as well be him. Don't worry you'll see her kekkei genkai soon enough. Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/12 - 03:46 am · For: Progression
Dang... Zuzake was so scared of Ryoushi... It was a bit sad to see him so afraid. but with Hitomi there, he seemed to sober up enough to face his fears. And Hitomi with the blushing and stuttering! Aww! I wonder what's going on there! ;D
Great job on this, Shizake-nii-san! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I'd be scared of anyone who left me to die with a gash across my chest :P Haha yeah. She did help a lot Thanks :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/05/12 - 07:23 am · For: Extreme Training Week
I can't wait until the actual Chunin exams start. I'm really looking forward to the mind-blowing battles that I'm sure you'll create. I'm really eager to see team 7 in action.
I thought Hotaru personally training Zuzake was really sweet. I'm curious about if Zuzake will discover who he really is in the Exams. Anyway, I can't wait to read it! Great job, Itoko-san. It was an amazing chapter.
Author's Response: Hehe glad you liked! The chuunin exams will be awesome! Thanks for the review :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/12 - 08:24 pm · For: Extreme Training Week
Aww! We got to see a sensitive Doubutsu! That's so nice! It kinda makes me like him more now, even though I wasn't attached to him at all when I created him... Awesome chapter, Shizake-nii-san! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Doubutsu might be young but he has to be one of the people who knows Shizake and Kuzake. The truth can't be revealed because they are afraid Zuzake will go after their enemies. But in due time will Zuzake learn. I'm glad you liked :)
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 02/05/12 - 06:42 pm · For: Character submissions!
Nice! great to see the training progress for the exams.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/04/12 - 07:04 am · For: Visitation
I'm really happy to see that Konohamaru is the Hokage. The kid definitely deserved it. Well, I guess he'd be an old man now, but still.
Sweet! The Chuunin exams. I can't wait to read them. I'm sure they'll be amazing at the very least. It makes me very eager for your next update. Great job, Itoko-san.
Hehe. Ryu had to apologize.
Author's Response: I couldn't think of anyone else better you know? Yeah, the chuunin exams should be exciting and what not. lol yeah :P Thanks for the review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/04/12 - 06:51 am · For: Recovery and a New Mission
When I read the name Ryu, the first thing I thought of was my Ryu. Then I saw how big a jerk he was and I realized he was nothing like my Ryu. I know my Ryu would be good friends with Zuzake. I can't believe both he, the nurse, and the barbeque shop owner are jerks. I now love Hotaru because she put two of the three in their place. Go Hotaru!
I teared up reading about the Red Dragon. I miss Shizake so much. I absolutely loved that guy. Speaking of dragons, is that who's talking to Zuzake? The dragon spirit?
Great job, Itoko-san. It was a great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Haha yeah, I just needed a random name, and Ryu popped into my head. Your Ryu is way awesomer! Did you? I thought it would be nice to put some tributes in there for him, but I didn't mean to make you tear up. My bad lol. Thanks for the review :)
Author's Response: Haha yeah, I just needed a random name, and Ryu popped into my head. Your Ryu is way awesomer! Did you? I thought it would be nice to put some tributes in there for him, but I didn't mean to make you tear up. My bad lol. Thanks for the review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/04/12 - 06:30 am · For: Check-up
Well, seeing one of my ocs reminded me I was going to submit another character, but it seems as if I never have time. So I guess all I can say is I may or may not send one in. I don't know anymore.
And sweet! Ryoushi appeared. And since you've read the new FC chapter, you know just who he is ;). I like him a lot since now not only is he in a story with Deno, but also with Zuzake! How cool is that? And he's the one who tested Zuzake. Bad Ryoushi! But at the same time great since you did a great job with him.
This was a great chapter. I'm glad to see Zuzake grow. It's truly interesting since Shizake was already so far along while Zuzake is just starting. Great job, Itoko-san.
Author's Response: Lol take your time. They won't all be introduced until way later. Yeah, I decided Ryoushi would be the coolest the be the check-up dude for Zuzake, so I threw him in there. Haha yeah it is pretty cool. Thank you for the awesome review :)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 27/04/12 - 02:51 pm · For: A Fresh Start
Hi Zhake san. This is my first time reading script style! It was interesting ^^. It reminded me of a play...? I guess i'll find out along with Zuzake about his past, ne?
Author's Response: Hope you enjoy!
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 26/04/12 - 06:12 pm · For: Character submissions!
Hell yeah, more battles and the chunin exams! Great filler update!
Author's Response: Thanks bro. I can't wait to write the chuunin exams.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/12 - 06:09 pm · For: Visitation
Yay! Chuunin exams are next! I always love reading them!
Awesome battle too! I laughed when Ryu had to apologize to Zuzake, serves him right!
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Yay chuunin exams. Thanks for the review :)
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 25/04/12 - 01:43 pm · For: Character submissions!
Coolio man, keep it up! I want to see what becomes of Zazuke's dreams!
Author's Response: Thanks bro. The dream sequences will be very very important later on. He's just gotta awaken the third tomoe. Thanks for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/12 - 03:36 am · For: Recovery and a New Mission
Hotaru has become so protective of her students, especially Zuzake. I really love her for that, nice work!
Ahhh.... Shizake, the Red Dragon.... Thinking about his death is so tragic....
I'm really looking forward to finding out about Zuzake's dreams! They have me so interested!
Great job on this, Shizake-nii-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: I see Hotaru as being the protective type ya know? then again shouldnt every jounin be protective? Yeah, I thought it would be cool to give him a cool nickname. I know though...At least he is a legend. Everyone is just unaware he was an Uchiha. Thank you for the awesome review Nee-chan!