Reviews For Seeking Life
Name: coolninja90skid (Signed) · Date: 20/04/15 - 11:25 am · For: Prologue
I enjoyed it
can I be in the story
Name: coolninjaboy (Signed) · Date: 07/03/15 - 05:00 pm · For: Secondhand
can i be in the story?
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/03/12 - 06:03 am · For: Secondhand
Wow. I really should have read this sooner. It's just...... It's just.....
Ryu: Uh, Sasaui had to stop for a moment so she could finish crying......
Okay, I'm back. Sorry, I was stuck between crying and going off to join Sakura. As is, I just might send Sasaui and Ryu with her.
You writing has definitely improved. And you seriously say (in your little 'favorites' thing for authors - yeah, I'm a creeper) that you're envious of my development and other things? I seriously don't see any reason to be when you're so amazing. I really hope there's a next part of this because it's really amazing. Don't listen to Silverwolf, Rose-chan. Fight the power. Wait, on my site, I'm the power...... Fight Silverwolf's power!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad it made you cry! O.O wait, is that a wierd thing to be happy about? Really? Awesomeness! I'm glad~ *grinning really broadly right now* (If you're a creeper, I'm a stalker, I swear) Of course I'm envious! You're awesome! I mean, tell me, have you even once messed up so greatly as I have with my stories? No! And, you've got so many stories at that! - - - I shall fight Wolf-nee's power! :P I've been putting off writing the second part until now, and yes, I'm very guilt stricken, but Hurrah! Second part here i come! Thanks Brekkychan!
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 12/03/12 - 02:42 pm · For: Secondhand
That was very good and heart-felt. I love how you displayed the emotion everyone was feeling. Very good one-shot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that I was over doing it on the emotions bit, but apparently I didn't. I'm glad ^^ Thanks! And nice to meet you!
Name: UzamakiMasumi (Signed) · Date: 12/03/12 - 01:05 pm · For: Prologue
This is a really cool idea to watch your improvement in writing! I'm almost tempted to copy you, but, sadly, it would not work. Any one-shot I've ever attempted could not be contained as a one shot and turned into a whole series. I really just cannot write simple one-shots. *sweat drop* Oh well! This is a cute idea, and I'm looking forward to tracking your style along with you on this story! X3
Out,
UzuRose-chan
Author's Response: haha, I was responding to my other reviews and then I'm lik, Woa! Another one! *sweatdrop* I have the feeling some of these stories are going to have a lot of parts, lol. Thanks UzuRose-chan!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/03/12 - 08:35 am · For: Secondhand
Oh wow this made me sad :( I never thought about what would happen if Naruto had died at the final valley. Good story though I can't wait to see more
Author's Response: Hi Zhake san! I'm really, really, glad it made you sad, although that's a wierd thing to say, 'cuz it moved you enough to make you feel that. Thanks for reading, reviewing, and apparently, enjoying, Zhake san ^^. I'm a bit filled up with this wierd euphoria right now, lol. Thanks! Think I should do a part two?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/03/12 - 03:50 am · For: Secondhand
.... When you said you were writing a new story, you failed to mention they would be one-shots. I don't mind one-shots, you should have said so earlier! I wouldn't have yelled at you!
Anyway... This almost made me cry. It was so...heartbreaking. You portray emotion amazingly well. I was able to feel each character's feelings like they were my own. It was great.
I kinda like that you made Sakura able to understand Sasuke and how she now wants to kill him. I think anything I've read that had this type of plot change usually only had Sakura sitting home, too depressed to do anything. I like how you made her take action.
I mean, I don't know what else to say. This was a really amazing well-written one-shot. I think the only mistake I remember was that you misspelled Ichiraku. But other than that, this was a really good piece of writing. Nice job, Rose-chan. I can tell you've improved in you're writing ;)
Author's Response: Ah! I thought I did! I guess not..... Haha, IchiRAKU, ooops, thanks a bunch wolf-nee, Thanks so much. ^^ You don't know how much, or you probably do cuz you're a writer too, but, that means a lot to me. I'm really happy right now! :)