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Reviews For Bad Influence

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/12 - 06:45 pm · For: Building Bridges
Gah! Naruto and Shigure meet again! Not quite the reunion I was hoping for, but hey, whatever works I guess :D Naruto was so shocked he couldn't say anything. I'm a bit surprised, because I'm pretty sure he still sees Shigure as a traitorous Akatsuki member, right?

But this was still an awesome chapter! Loved it, but my favorite part was when Shigure yelled at Naruto for not figuring it out XD Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Hah, thanks. I'll be sure to have more to come soon enough.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/04/12 - 02:54 pm · For: Building Bridges
For some reason this was one of my favorite chapters. I know it was just development, but everything seems to be playing out so nicely for Oto. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Gracias!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/12 - 05:15 pm · For: The Struggle Within
Gah, I was just going to tell you that you had more spelling errors in this than you normally did.... Then I read the End Notes, so.... I apologize for bringing it up, I guess :P

Other than that, I'm honestly quite glad that you brought up the fact that Shigure is pretty much sharing a soul with Jugo. It means that the whole thing isn't perfect, so there could be problems later on. You can do a lot with that as a twist.

I did like how Shigure was so inspirational towards people... Or maybe they all were just afraid of Jugo, so we may never know XD

Good job on this chapter, Hazard-san! It definitely had awesome development, and I really loved it!

Author's Response: HA, yeah I know about the errors, but unless I get somebody as a beta reader It'll probably never be fixed. A few more twists in turns coming up as well :D


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/04/12 - 03:33 pm · For: The Struggle Within
Wow things are progressing in the sound ninja greatly. Im still a bit shocked that this is even taking place. Great stuff man! Keep it up!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/04/12 - 01:30 pm · For: Second Chances
Damn. Its hard to believe that you have 43 chapters written. That's a lot.
Well I didn't think Shigure was the type to help those in need but surprises are around every corner. Very curious as to what he intends to pull off with this kind act. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: "kind" act indeed. And yeah, it's a shit load of writting, I'm thinking of ending this story though in the next 15 chapters possibly, and a final conclusion will be made! (eventually).


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/12 - 09:27 am · For: Second Chances
Wow, Shigure wants to help people? I feel like that is a bit off the path of what his mission is.... I wonder what he has in store.

Oh, remember that his name is 'Shikaku' - you accidentally put 'Shukaku's POV' when the scene changed. Other mistakes would probably just be forgetting a word while in the midst of writing, but I think everyone does that at some point :P

This was a very surprising chapter, but I liked it. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: All is not what it seems...remember that your not looking through his eyes all the time. And I'll go fix Shikaku's stuff.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/04/12 - 08:31 pm · For: Foundation of Sacrifice
Whoa...He took over Jugo's body huh? Thats pretty insane. Well hell, still glad Shigure is technically alive. Cant wait to see how the next set of events unfold.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/12 - 12:40 pm · For: Foundation of Sacrifice
Wow! A lot did happen! Shukaku as Hokage? I didn't see that one coming, I hope he isn't too lazy, honestly :P

Whoa, so no more Jugo, huh? Shigure is almost like Orochimaru in that respect now, he's taking over people's bodies...

Awesome job with this! So many plot developments, it's amazing!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Lots of new things will be happening in the coming chapters. Shukaku as Hokage makes sense to me due to him being very smart and part of a legendary team of Ino-shika-cho, so hopefully he can fulfill his duties. And I didn't realize the Orochimaru reference, but yeah. Same deal pretty much.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 06:13 pm · For: Urgency
Holy crap! Tobi figured him out! And Shigure killed himself! It really is a good thing he used that seal thingie on Jugo :P Now I wonder how this little twist will turn out.

Ah, great work on this! It was such a plot twister that it threw me for a loop. I'm eager to see what happens now, keep up the awesome work, Hazard-san!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 06:08 pm · For: Urgency
Whoa...Intense! Haha I knew you couldnt kill him off. Jugo is his lightning rod after all...Great update I really liked this chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah...not yet. Tobi is just too powerful for Shigure to beat him though honestly so I couldn't have it be too unrealistic. What happens next though should be quite interesting.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 01:07 pm · For: The Babysitter
Sweet he was able to help Jugo. Lol I laugh whenever he's like yeah...babysitting is gonna be easy...Great chapter! Keep em coming


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 03:38 am · For: The Babysitter
Aww, that was really nice of Shigure... even if he is doing it for his own benefit as well :P

Glad to see you're back! I'm happy to hear you no longer have writer's block. Keep up the good work with this story!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 04:22 pm · For: Stalking Truth
Oh man, I really kinda hope Shigure does have some kind of effect on Sasuke. That boy is such a nimrod, he needs an adult to tell him what to do!

Awesome updates, Hazard-san! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks Wolf-chan! I'll be having more interesting updates coming soon!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 04:06 pm · For: Stalking Truth
Another great chapter. I see Suigetsu is going to have problems with
shigure later on. And I can also tell Shigure's words are going to have an impact on Sasuke. Nice job


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 03:54 pm · For: Night Shift
Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see how Shigure and Kisame handle the recon mission. Im really curious to see how this Uchiha thing takes place. Itachi has good intentions with it at least. Nice job

Author's Response: Thanks man, next chapter should be up right now too.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/12 - 04:55 pm · For: The Family Tree
*gasp* The suspense thickens. It's so intense! I kinda laughed when Shigure said he was an Uchiha; such a good way to mess with Sasuke's head XD

Oh, and his name is 'Suigetsu'. You kinda misspelled it :P

Anyway, good job on this! I can't wait to see how this little bit turns out now that Shigure has shown himself to Sasuke.

Author's Response: Yeah I had no idea how to spell "Suigetsu" at the moment so thanks. glad your liking it.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/03/12 - 03:03 pm · For: The Family Tree
There were quite a few mistakes with past,present,and future tenses. But It wasnt that bad, I still understood it. Great chapter, I cant wait to see what you have in store for Sasuke.

Author's Response: I'll be sure to go over it...but glad you liked it.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/12 - 05:02 pm · For: Despair
You were worried about Naruto's POV? I think that was the best part! You wrote it so well, it was very realistic. His feelings were really well shown.

As a nice contrast, we see Shigure right after, feeling bad about how he treated Naruto in the fight. It was so well written.

Great job on this, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Thank You! I just second guess myself sometimes when trying to write the dramatic parts :P


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/03/12 - 01:30 pm · For: Despair
Nice follow up on the mission. It must be rough for him to have seen Naruto like that. Even more rough to learn the true plans of the akatsuki. Keep up the good work


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/12 - 07:48 pm · For: Turtle Season
You just condensed a ridiculously long filler arc into one chapter... Thank you so much! I've always hated extremely lengthy arcs.

Anyway, the fact that he has the Akatsuki's approval is good for his mission, but now Konoha hates him! It's just a terrible thing to happen! Very sad, actually...

Great job on this! Keep up the awesome work and update soon please!

Author's Response: Glad you like, and I didn't want to spend much time on that arc either :D


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/03/12 - 03:49 pm · For: Turtle Season
Nice chapter. I liked seeing the extent of Shigure's power. His sharingan is pretty deadly. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Indeed it is! Next chapter will have him deal with the after effects of using his power, and How the leaf ninja react to him being with the akatsuki.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/03/12 - 08:07 am · For: Know Your Place
Nice chapter. I laughed at the part where Shigure scared the shit out of Deidara. Mainly because im not a big fan of Deidara. I find him just as annoying as Tobi lol. Cant wait to see more of this.

Author's Response: hey glad you liked it, I wanted to make it a bit comical.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/12 - 05:02 am · For: Know Your Place
Awesome chapter! It did jump around a lot, but I think the different viewpoints were good for wrapping up this arc. And now we have the upcoming action-packed arcs, so I'm very excited for that. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Yep, basically a transition chapter for the bulk of events to come, which may end up quite different.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 07:05 pm · For: Just Another Day
Nice chapter. It's good he's sticking to the shadows and not fighting. Although he did almost get caught.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 03:27 pm · For: Just Another Day
Whoa, Shigure was almost caught by Kakashi. How awkward would that be? I wonder if he will ever get caught... Good job on this! You're doing a great job of showing how Shigure is gaining the Akatsuki's trust. Keep up the good work!


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