Reviews For Uchiha Bitch
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 10/02/12 - 07:32 pm · For: Special Someone
Oh... This is so well done. I wish I could rhyme that well! This would make an excellent prologue, or are you planning on doing the whole story like this? Reading a rap fan-fiction would be awesome and definitely original. Whatever you do should be amazing. I hope to see more from you soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/12 - 06:14 pm · For: Special Someone
Your rhymes are very entertaining, I really enjoy it. And this story was actually pretty good, considering it was all written in a rap. Very nice.
Author's Response: thanks for the kind words, i didn't expect to get any reviews. i know it's not everyone's cup of tea, but i'll try to keep improving and maybe add some more content. sometimes on my playlist I just hit a track that gives me inspiration so i just open up wordpad and go with the flow -- killerbee knows how it goes, thats why he carries a notepad everywhere he goes. it's hard to portray rap without a beat to go with it, if you try to use slant rhymes/half rhymes it just doesnt click to the person reading that easily. ty again