Reviews For Leaf High: Freshman Year
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 02:41 pm · For: Split Milk
I very much enjoyed this. IO think that you got the characters pretty well. I myself have never been to high school, yet I can still relate to this. Now I'm picturing going to school with Naruto characters! Ha, I'm glad I read this. Keep up the great work. I'll get to the next one soon I hope.
Name: naru-fan (Anonymous) · Date: 28/12/11 - 07:24 pm · For: First Day
I liked the first chapter, therefore I shall continue to read more =D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/12/11 - 01:39 pm · For: Clubs and Gym
*_* Is this going to be like Glee?! That'd be kind of cool, though I can't really see some people singing or even playing an instrument... Well, maybe an instrument, but not some people singing...
Anyway, I continue to enjoy seeing all this high school drama and such, and I definitely look forward to more. Keep up the good work.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/11 - 07:55 pm · For: Split Milk
I really like how this is progressing so far! Normally in high school fics, everyone knows each other and it's one big happy party. But I really like the idea that everyone's still kind of meeting each other.
Ah, the drama has already started, apparently. Very nice, very simple yet pretty believable. I do hope we see Hiwatari and Tanaka soon though, just to make things interesting.
Nice chapter, I really enjoyed it. It makes me eager to read more. Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/12/11 - 09:18 pm · For: First Day
Haha, this is actually quite good. As Sakura was going through her day, I was literally imagining myself on my first day as a freshman. It was so long ago, yet I remember having the same expectations and fears as Sakura. The great part now is that judging from the summary, this story is going to be just like what high school is really like. I'm looking forward to that; I've read way too many cushioned high school fics that have no accuracy to real life whatsoever. I'm hoping this will be different ;)
The only problem I saw with this chapter was that you switched to first person POV around the time when Tenten came in. Just be careful with perspectives.
Everything else was quite enjoyable. I liked it because it was realistic, so I hope you stick to that theme. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah high school was a while back and I found some old high school stuff when I was watching Naruto and was like, totally cliche to write a Naruto High School fic, but I really wanted too. And, dang! I though I fixed all the first person stuff. It was originally going to be all Sakura, but then I was like no I wanna cover everyone so yeah lol But thank you so much for the comment, more should be up soon.
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 26/12/11 - 07:51 pm · For: First Day
I don't normally read these, but your's caught my attention somehow. And I must say, I'm glad it did. This was really well written and even though so little happened, it was still really interesting. I truly want to see more of this as soon as possible! Thank you for posting it, update soon please :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I know it was a slow start just getting everything set up and then we'll be flying through high school.rn=D