I'm honestly quite happy this is a ShikaSaku fic now. I've never read one, and from the previous chapter, I was worried about how any GaaSaku would appear. I'm kind of glad the romance in this story changed, my opinion of course.

But anyway, this amazing fic continues to leave me breathless. Each passing word leaves me almost in tears. The entire plot is just so depressing. But I can tell that everything is incredibly well planned out, and you've definitely given this story a lot of thought when writing it. This is truly amazing, and I am honestly quite entranced with it.

There were a few mistakes in this chapter, mostly just misspellings or leaving a word out when it is needed. Though the most noticable thing had to be that you tend to write the word "quiet" as "quite". Just something to watch for.

Anyway, great job on this chapter! I look forward to more, and I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews! I always look forward to reading them :) Yours are always uplifting.rnrnI'll have to go back and fix the mistakes. The keyboard on my new laptop is ridiculous. Like, the keys are out of place because of it's size, so I'm still not used to it. Plus I sometimes lose myself in my sentences. And actually, I would really like a beta reader, if you'd be interested for future chapters.