Reviews For Aftermath: The Last Ones Standing
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/12 - 08:22 am · For: Don't Panic
Ah, I've missed this story. It's just such a refreshing take on the aftermath of the war. I've always really liked what you were doing with this story. You've taken it so far, and you keep adding new twists and such to make this story even better.
Even though you said inspirational speeches weren't your thing, I thought you did an excellent job with Sakura's speech. And you left off at a very good place too, the cliffhanger is killing me just a bit T_T
Great work on this update. I hope you post more soon!
Name: Maiki (Signed) · Date: 29/03/12 - 08:44 pm · For: Chapter 79
Oh my goodness, I LOVE this! Please finish it!
Author's Response: Oh, hey there! I hadn't checked this page in ages... Thank you so much for the review! It's good to hear someone's still reading this. :)
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 21/02/12 - 09:40 pm · For: Chapter 79
Because Kumo Was Really Just Searching For An Excuse To Try And Study The Body Longer? Area Advantage? No One (Including Sakura) Has Looked At The Body An d Said "Bullshit, They Could've Moved This." Madara's Freaky Body Draws Way Too Many Other Thoughts Too Mind, Like... "Ew."
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/02/12 - 12:19 pm · For: Chapter 79
Uh... Huh? Well...now I'm thoroughly confused... But with this story, that always leaves me wanting more! So I can't wait for the next update! Awesome job!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/12 - 12:21 pm · For: Not Time To Cry
That is so grotesque! The body merged back together?! That's so disgusting. Oh jeez, it's just... So gross...
But it just makes me that more curious to see what will happen with his body! I must know. I can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 24/01/12 - 05:35 pm · For: Both Sides Now
Ne... No Melodramatic Statement? Anyways.. Do I Ever Complaints? No? Will I Start Now? Yes. Tooo Short.
But That Is All.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/12 - 04:29 pm · For: Both Sides Now
Oh my gosh, he might as well just be committing suicide! Yikes! Kakashi, live dang nab it!
Great chapter, by the way. I didn't see any mistakes, which was very lovely. I can't wait to read more, keep up the awesome work!
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 16/01/12 - 05:35 am · For: Something I Can Never Have
So... As A Loyal Fan Im Upset It Took So Long,. But As A Fellow Author I Understand. And Yes, Im Still With You Here. Anyway, Next Update Soon, No? Gotta Find Out Whats Up With That Hair..
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/01/12 - 08:59 am · For: Something I Can Never Have
Noooooooo! Kakashi, don't die! Please don't!
Geeat description in this chapter. It was hurried and chaotic in a good way since the fight was meant to seem that way in Sai's perspective.
There were more spelling errors than usual, I'm sad to say... Do you have a beta who could fix those errors for you?
Great work on this chapter though! I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I really don't feel too confident writing action-scenes..rnThere were? I did't notice. (I don't have a beta.) I have to admit that I may have been not quite as thourough with the proofreading this tim, the office-spellchecker didn't mark any mistakes though. I did finally switch it to british english - maybe that one is more faulty than that for us-english? I don't know.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/11 - 04:08 pm · For: So Few Words
T_T He's bidding her goodbye... That's just so awful... And sad... And tragic... And heartbreaking... And whole lot of other things...
Great chapter, I can't wait to see what's happening next now. Keep up the good work. And don't worry about slow updates. The pace really does not matter; your faithful readers know you are trying very hard ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/11 - 03:32 am · For: Older Chests
What the heck, what is in the scrolls?!
Wow, seeing Rin's distress really makes me feel extremely bad for her. I wish there was someone there to make her feel better *cough Kakashi cough*, but I doubt he'd be the first person she wants to talk to right now....
Wow, great chapter! I can't wait for more, keep up the awesome work!
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 23/11/11 - 06:07 am · For: And The Boys
I Like It. Lets See What Happens.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/11 - 03:15 am · For: And The Boys
Oh my, they're going to kill Kakashi... Well this is certainly taking a turn towards a darkening plot. And if Sakura doesn't make it home in time, she might miss it... Wow...
Great chapter! Can't wait for more, keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/11 - 11:31 am · For: Bride of the Rain Dogs
Oh my gosh, I can't stand the suspense of this romance! It makes me want to cry right along with Sakura. It's so awful, and Shino's words were definitely true, yet even as the reader, just hearing them hurt a lot.
Excellent job on the drama of this chapter, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the awesome work!
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 13/11/11 - 10:31 am · For: Bride of the Rain Dogs
Shino... Should Put Bugs In Her Clothes. That Guy's Amazing Though, Great Perception.
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 07/11/11 - 05:07 pm · For: Something Fast
He... Just Got Kissed By A 15 Year Old... Statutory Rape.. O.o
However On A More Serious Note, I Like The Way You Write. Nice Chap. Short, Sweet, And Simple.
Author's Response: Well... one could argue whether Rin's true age is fifteen or thirtyfour... ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/11 - 11:40 am · For: Something Fast
Aww, I really feel sad for Rin. The depressing part is that she's not even supposed to be there, so she's witnessing everything when she shouldn't. And Kakashi is as stiff and clueless as ever... I kinda feel bad for him too though, live triangles stink.
Great chapter! It was awesome to see this updated. Keep up the amazing work!
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 29/10/11 - 07:05 am · For: Werewolf
How Embarrassing. And Uhh.. So Kakashi Never Visited Shika Before? And I Wonder What He Said...
Author's Response: Not since he saw the wallpainting, no. Too many things keeping him busy...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/11 - 06:17 pm · For: Werewolf
I really love when Kakashi and Pakkun are together. Humans and their faithful canine companions always make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :3
Great job with this. It had a very sad yet nostalgic and sentimental feel to it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: If I weren't so wrapped up in this monster of a story, I would start a series of one-shots with those two right away. Maybe I will, if I ever get to finish this story.
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 28/10/11 - 10:39 am · For: China Bird
Well, I Didn't Think Neji Was Talking About Shikamaru In The End. Whenever Somebody References To Tsunade Its About Sakura Or Rin So I Thought He Was Talking About A Different Event.
Also,Earlier, Kiba Told Ino Her Team Was The Only One Still Unbroken (Minus Asuma). Like, Two Days Later, Shikamaru Died, So Yeah, Eating His Words.
Author's Response: Ah, I see... Heh, I have to admit, this wasn't on purpose. But now that you mentioned it, I'm kind of happy that it works out that way :D
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 28/10/11 - 10:17 am · For: China Bird
Hey, Chap. 69. Hehe. =0 I'm Sorry, So Sorry.. (Bows In Apology. Anyway, I Was Wrong. I Dindt Think You Were Talking About Shika Dying. But Now Kiba Can Go Eat His Words.
Author's Response: Uhm... I have to admit, I don't really understand what you mean with this review... oO
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/11 - 03:34 am · For: China Bird
Um... Well, is the Hyuuga tradition that Neji has to die because Hinata died? That's what I think...
Wait a gosh darn minute... You killed Shikamaru?! NOOOOO! I don't believe this! This is so horrible! Aww....
Wow, I didn't know you were updating so fast because the chapter were already written; I just thought you were a speedy writer... aww, now I have to wait for updates... Well, that's alright. I know each chapter will be worth the wait :)
Awesome job on this! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: ...yes, I killed Shikamaru. And it would be a lie, if I claimed I did not feel bad about it.rnI dare say I am a speedy writer (kind of), though I recently slowed down a little, due to having a RL of sorts... (Hence the catching up ;))rnrn
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/10/11 - 12:56 pm · For: Genius Next Door
D: It's so horrible... I'm about in tears right now... Please let him live...
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 27/10/11 - 09:19 am · For: Genius Next Door
This... This Is Horrible. I Really Didn't See This Coming, And It Made My Eye Tear Up. I'm Afraid That If I Read It Again I'll Cry... :'(
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/11 - 01:06 pm · For: Help
And here I thought we would see some intense NejiTen fluff, but I guess not :P Though the reason behind his actions is quite sad. Very heartbreaking, in fact...
Nice job on this. I really liked it. Keep up the awesome work!