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Reviews For Battle Stadium

Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 06:50 pm · For: Introduction
I, Rowanrose, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.

I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.

It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.

In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.

I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.

These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.

All OCs created.

Author's Response: Rose-chan! Welcome! I'm glad you want to join! Thanks for taking part!


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/12 - 11:06 am · For: Introduction
wow...
super fail attempt at writing... lol xD
massive typos...
too much sms style...
can i redo this please...? =P

Author's Response: Uh, sure if you really want to :P


Name: UzamakiMasumi (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 03:16 am · For: Introduction
I, UzamakiMasumi, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.

I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.

It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.

In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.

I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.

These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.

Any, all, or any combination of The Blue Pirates of my Hoist the Colors series.

any and all OCs I create

Author's Response: Hiya, Masumi-chan! I'm flattered you decided to partake in this fun! I can't wait to see what you come up with or what someone else comes up with for your characters. Oh, but the funny part is that you kinda placed in my characters from my Hoist the Colors series into your pledge :P No biggie though, I understood what you meant.


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 04:25 am · For: The Father-Son Battle That Never Was Pt. 1
Woah....
Kool...
Sasuke n goketsu in action.... :D
cnt wait for the next part...


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 04:04 am · For: The Father-Son Battle That Never Was Pt. 1
Well, it's a good thing I read your story then :D

Wow, I'm really liking this battle so far. A fight for approval from his deceased father. I like it. Sasuke resurrection was really cool too, very creative. Overall, it was a really epic chapter, and I look forward to more. Nice job, Tragedy :)


Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 30/09/11 - 08:48 pm · For: Introduction
I, Tragedy, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.

I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.

It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.

In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.

I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.

These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.

Any OC I have created or may create in the future. Basically any OC that's mine goes.

Author's Response: :D Ah, nice to see you have decided to join the fun, Tragedy! Thanks for joining!


Name: Firestar83 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 06:12 pm · For: Introduction
I, Firestar83, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.

I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.

It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.

In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.

I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.

These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.

Any OC I have created or may create in the future. Basically any OC that's mine goes.

(I figured I better take a chance and join up, don't really care what happens to my OC's cause they'll probably get rolled by everyone else.)

Author's Response: Aww, I'm flattered you decided to join up! I'm glad you decided to give this a go ;)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 02:21 pm · For: Title: The Battle of Jubilee, the Final Stanza
Wow, okay, first off, I'm honestly surprised you joined in on my little round robin. I'm honored that you would do so. And that you like the idea, thank you. I'm glad that Battle Stadium held a place for one of your extra battles, that is one of the reasons why I put this up :)

And okay, double wow! This is like my sneak preview into info on your story. I loved this. We finally see some info on the famous Jubilee. And I'm so surprised at what I read, I never pictured the Prophetess to be like what she actually is. And I was even more shocked that she almost killed Interpono.

This was amazing, really. Great job with it. Keep up the amazing work with your writing!


Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 06:44 am · For: Title: The Battle of Jubilee, the Final Stanza
I didn't understand all of it, and I didn't see much action there. Oh well. Great though. It was very spiritual, and it was very strange. Immortality, haha. Not. She got destroyed. Great job on this!


Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 09/09/11 - 09:20 am · For: Introduction
@Sasaui Uchiha
Thank you! Very Much! For the review! I'm glad I got Krino's protective nature right. And yeah, that is what Light used to make Krino possess him. I'm glad that you were able to laugh. Dark is dumb. Didn't he try to take over the world at some point? Oh yeah, when Ezra left Duel Academy. And about your weirdness: no worries, some of my friends and I call ourselves proud weirdo's! :D *Sweat drop* Haha, sorry. Thanks!


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/11 - 07:25 am · For: Introduction
lolz......!!!
jst read sasaui's review on dark in theez's bingo book biout him always being by ezra's side n being loyal n stuff... :3
n lk wt dark is doin her -_-
no offense sasaui bt it ws funny... xP


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/09/11 - 04:36 pm · For: Power Beyond Imagination!
Yeah, it's Toshiro Katachi. I loved Krino the way you wrote him. It was excellent and makes me want to write about him. You nailed his protective nature. Is that what Light is using as his drive to fight and what made it so he could take control of him? And it's bad that I'm actually glad one of my character died......Don't dodge me! He's the bad guy who captured Krino and was attempting to catch Kina!! Even though I'm the one who was making that happen...... -_-...... Anyway, I loved the crush thing. That was hilarious. And I can't believe it about Dark. I mean, seriously? SERIOUSLY!?! I just commented how he was the one to always stick with Ezra on the Bingo book, too. You just wanted to prove me wrong, huh (yes, I know that you posted this before that, but still......). If I haven't told you this yet, here: Do not question my weirdness. I have no answers.

Anyway, I'm really eager to see part 2. I'm sure it will be as awesome as all your previous stuff because you're just plain awesome.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/11 - 11:07 am · For: Power Beyond Imagination!
Okay, the only thing is that I don't understand why Kina was fighting Ezra in the beginning when he went crazy on Kasumi. It was an awesome three-way battle, don't get me wrong. But I'm assuming it was that Kina was trying to calm Ezra down, I guess?

But everything else was amazing! I can't believe Hinata died... And the intros to Krino and Toshiro were actually really fun. Krino wants to destroy Kasumi and Ezra, meanwhile Toshiro has on the Blue Tiger... haha, I think the chaos of the entire situation was extremely entertaining.

Gosh... Dark is evil?! He's going to kill the body who was so nice to him?! That's so mean!

Oh man, I seriously can't wait to see what happens next now. Nice job! Keep up the awesome work!


Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 08/09/11 - 08:17 am · For: Introduction
@shadow9000
Yeah, I know, triple battles are a bit messy. They're hard to write. I'm glad you liked it though!


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/11 - 08:15 am · For: Power Beyond Imagination!
hey nice...
i loved the one on one fights... bt eh.. no offense... bt i feel the triple threat battle ws a lil messy... :| sorry...
i didn't quite understand y kina as fightin ezra in da beginning....
anyways the twists r interesting.......
cnt wait fr d part 2....


Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 05/09/11 - 03:59 am · For: Introduction
@ Sasaui Uchiha
Ah, shoot! Forgot something! Akira and Arika are like Ventus and Vanitas, except that if one of their hearts were destroyed, the other would survive.
Yes! Akira and Arika ARE like Ventus and Vanitas!!!!!!!! Ventus is my second favorite KH character [Roxas is first, their hair styles are SWEET!] As for Hoshi, yeah, she can be introduced in the chunin exams. That's fine. Oh yeah, and thanks for the review! Also for the pronounciation for Xion's name! Very useful! And yeah, Akira and Arika are like Ventus and Vanitas, except that if one of their hearts were destroyed, the other would survive. Also, can I have some info on Krino? I wanna see if he's right for the job.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 - 12:20 pm · For: Reunion of Fighters! Ezra Hyuuga VS Kina Katachi!
Crap. I forgot to ask/say something. Just to clarify, Akira and Arika are like Ventus and Vanitas, right? Oh, and as for Hoshi, I'm sorry, but Team 9 is full. I'm not so sure you'll like it, but would it be okay if she came in during the chunin exams so that she'll still be a genin and from sand? Or are you willing to risk her being with Akira in group 2?


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 - 12:16 pm · For: Reunion of Fighters! Ezra Hyuuga VS Kina Katachi!
I'd do the same thing the Silverwolf just did, but I don't drink coffee. Instead I just spit out my orange juice. Is it possible for a computer to frown at someone, because I think mine is frowning at me........

First of all, thanks so very much for thinking Kina was worthy of being in TWO fights with Ezra. I love their friendship. It kinda makes me want to send her into the Naruto GX world so she could kick the butts of all the people who are mean to Ezra since he wouldn't..... Well, I'm not sure she would either, but he'd have someone to comfort him =P. This was amazing, though. The way she mistook Ezra for Light was genius. It also opened the perfect reason for a fight. As for the fact Light killed everyone makes me want to kill him. Though I'm not sure I could.... Speaking of Light, you still have no clue just how alike Kina and Ezra are. =D. I love giving hints without telling the whole thing. Ask Silverwolf, she knows. I can't wait to see the second part of this. The fact that you have a second part to this makes me want to jump up and down with glee. And just so you know, I am planning on making a battle between these two. I just need to finish reading the newest chapters (I have no clue when I'll get to that. I'm kinda busy lately) and get everything planned out.

Now for the possession part..... Hm, I think Sasuke is closely bonded to both of them. Or you could use Krino (if you forget, he's the boy from the prologue in Never Too Late). Any information on him you'd need I'd give. That Time style ninjutsu would be a true pain in the butt to fight. Trust me, I know, I already have a fight for that planned for way later on in Never Too Late.

Oh, and to respond to the thing from Drawn Together, Xion is pronounced: She-on.

@Silverwolf1213

I'm sure you could have written it better than me. I don't see it as being anywhere near better than something you could write. As for the other side of her, I was a little afraid to write it because I'm still adjusting to it. I'm still used to sweet Kina who is still trying to find her strength. And as for the TG updates, I'd meant to work on them over the weekend, but that plan didn't work out because someone was on it on the way to NY *cough Krina cough* and it was out of juice, and it was about 1:00 at the hotel, so I just went to sleep. The same happened again later.

@Theez

I'm glad that you (as well as Silverwolf) thought I had Kasumi in character. I was a little worried because there won't be as much of that helpful-ish side to her in this chapter as there is in the next chapter. Though, unbeknowest to her, she was kinda helping her......


Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 02/09/11 - 08:49 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga VS Kina Katachi. And Then A Small Secret Battle!
This is a really neat idea. I wonder how my OC Takuyamo-chan from no mary-sue would do in this fic. lmao

Author's Response: That would be pretty interesting, I must say :D


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/11 - 08:37 pm · For: Reunion of Fighters! Ezra Hyuuga VS Kina Katachi!
?! Uh, hold on please... *makes coffee...drinks coffee...spits out coffee!*

There's a sequel?! With Kasumi?! So... Does that mean it's like a three-way fight or something along those lines?

Anyway, awesome fight! I was so sad that Kina thought Ezra was Light, but at least he forgave her. Wow, Light killed everyone? That's terrible!

Oh... I don't know who Light should possess... If you can't decide, you can make it Kasumi, I don't mind :P

But anyways, great fight! I look forward to more! Keep up the awesome work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 08:56 pm · For: Invasion of the Ore Village
Side note, I will never get used to a story under my name (I know it's a round robin, but still) suddenly appearing at the top of the Most Recent page. It's so bizarre :P

Anyways, onto the battle...

Perfection. Your battle was perfect. It was so vivid and so intense, I loved it.

I really like how you revealed some interesting things about Kina. It adds a lot of depth to her character. It was really interesting to see this side of her, as opposed to NTL.

And you did perfectly with Kasumi! Considering this is before either of our stories, and Shippuden for that matter, you did amazingly well with her taunting attitude and fighting style. I probably couldn't have written that battle better myself.

This was amazing. I honestly enjoyed every moment of it. I look forward to the sequel, but I know you have your TG updates that you're working on. Even just leaving this will satisfy me for a while. I loved this battle, and I look forward to whatever you update with next! Keep up the good work with your writing, Sasaui!


Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 07:58 pm · For: Invasion of the Ore Village
Nice! Oh my gosh, I HAVE to get a plotline for my stories before I make another battle! That was also really cool, I really understand how Kina felt. I think Kasumi was in character; but that isn't for me to say. Grat job!


Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 - 03:01 am · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuuga Versus Kasumi Mayonaka: The Final Battle! Part 2
Great! Honestly this was pretty balanced. Although Ezra didn't have to be the winner. I would have been just as happy if he had lost. But thanks anyways! Good ending, and you have improved on fight scenes!

Author's Response: *happy dance* Yay! I'm glad you liked it. It's also very reassuring to hear that the action and dialogue was relatively balanced. Well, given the circumstances of the fight, I felt that the ending would be proper if Ezra won. I'm so happy you thought it was good. And double yay, I've improved on my fight scenes! Thank you for the feedback! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 05:01 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga Versus Kasumi Mayonaka: The Final Battle! PT 1
Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. You continue to amaze me with how easily you can tie your own characters in with another's story. Speaking of which, that previous comment goes out to all of you who have posted a fight. You definitely weren't repeating or anything. The Light against Orochimaru was an awese twist. Oh, and this goes back to the one with Kina in case I didn't tell you - Thanks for seeing her worthy enough to fight your oc.


Name: CricketFighter (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 01:24 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga Versus Kasumi Mayonaka: The Final Battle! PT 1
Oh wow! Lots of nifty stuff in here! Really cool, I kind of want to enter too ^_^

Anywho, glad you all posted this! Good job!


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