Reviews For Love Me True ItachiXOC
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/07/11 - 01:38 pm · For: Chapter 3
Hehe, cheese is still good, no matter how you slice it ;D Aha, puns...
Ah, I always love your reference to nursery rhymes. It's so different and unique, but it's oddly enticing. I like it.
And Itachi is always dark and handsome and amazing whenever you portray him. Well done!
Keep up the amazing work with your writing!
Author's Response:don't we all love puns ^^
I'm so glad you think that about the nursery rhymes ^^.
I just hope I keep him in character thanks ^^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 - 03:31 pm · For: Chapter 2
Aw, fluff! Always adorable, no matter how cheesy it is ;)
I really like how Deidara and Yuki can be so close, even after their breakup. I know that it can happen, but it's actually very rare. I like their friendly banter :D
And of course, the amazing scene about Snow White. Just beautiful. Cheesy, yes. Wonderful, heck yes.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:ahaha I'm trying not to be too cheesy
I think it is off that Yuki and Deidara are still friends but Deidara is her only friend in school and Yuki would like to keep that even if Deidara flirts with her.
My favorite fairy tale is Snow White and I think I did a good job showing it off and getting the "story" out no matter how cheesy.
Your reviews always make my day lol thanks for reviewing again
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 05:09 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh wait... Yeah! This story was on here before! The site crashed a while ago, maybe your stories got deleted?
Eh, I'm reviewing it anyway.
It's very fluffy, yes. Then again, I'm such a sucker for it, so I found it cute XD Toward the very end, when it got to her birthday and White's Day, I feel like it was a little rushed. There was no depth to her feelings, just the mention of the white iris. It would have been good to see more description on how she was feeling.
But it was overall very good and very cute. Good job :D
Author's Response: lol you feel the same way about the romance. I like the advice and when I do re-edit after I am done with the one shots I'll try to fix it thanks for the advice ^^