Reviews For It All Started With A Girl
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 22/12/11 - 05:31 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh, wow, Orochimaru has a daughter? That's a new one, not many people write things like this and I'm intrigued to know more about this character and Sasuke's future with her.
I absolutely enjoyed this! Plz continue it!:D
Name: Jigoku Dayu (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 11:10 pm · For: Chapter 1
I think your writing style is quite impressive, given your age and level of experience. As far as Sasuke goes, he's not really my cup of tea. Still, I will try to keep up with it for the Orochimaru scenes.
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 26/06/11 - 04:46 pm · For: Chapter 1
It's coming along great! You have yourself a winning plot, very original! I can't wait to read more soon!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 01:37 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow, interesting. I found this chapter cool; I can actually imagine Sasuke being curious about her. Not OOC at all, despite my first impression.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks! In my mind of the story, Sasuke would be interested because there is this little girl, that Orochimaru (the powerful person that Sasuke is learning from) is keeping around. Why would he be keeping this girl? That is sort of his view on this. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 01:33 pm · For: Prolouge
Welll..... I'm thinking that Sasuke isn't the type of person who wants to get caught up in other people's secrets, y'know? He more like wants to become powerful, so if the girl can help him become powerful, only then will he be interested in her. In my opinion.
Also, his life is already pretty messed up so how was it like before she came?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 01:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
Aww, you're welcome for your first review :3
Now, this chapter had me squirming so much. It was so freaking graphic. The 11-inch senbon needle in his neck?! It just sounded painful, and the image was flashing in my mind so badly, I couldn't even concentrate for a whole 30 seconds before I finally brought myself to finish the chapter.
And as much as I was uncomfortable with the pain you so brilliantly illustrated, I still loved it. Remember how I said you improved? Yeah, DEFINITELY improved, to the point where I am really proud to have been able to watch your improvement. Well done, it was beautiful (in a really gross and graphic way, of course). Great job, I definitely look forward to more.
Author's Response: Sorry about the graphic-ness. (yes, also a word in my dictionary) I thought the best way to portray the character was by using it. I remember when I started writing fanfiction, about 7 months ago. I have reread some of my writing and I think I have improved. Thank you so much for sticking with me all this way, and giving me help and feedback. You know, all this sounds like a goodbye, which I hope it is not. Thanks so much for reviewing! =) Wow...now I am really happy...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 11:55 am · For: Prolouge
Wow! Do you know how long I've waited for a romance fic by you? And this was an awesome
prologue, explaining things very well while still capturing the reader's attention just enough to keep them wanting more. Well done! I definitely can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome work, Fantasy Madeline! You're an amazing writer!
Author's Response: Awe, thanks. I am already writing the first chapter, and it should be out in a half hour or so. Thanks for your support! I am trying to get people's attention with it, and I am glad you think I did that well. =)