Reviews For The Sacred Relics
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 12:36 pm · For: Chapter Nine
Just give me a second. I really can't think of any word that can describe this chapter...... Yeah, there's no word in the human dictionary. I guess I'd say "THAT WAS SO AMAZINGLY AWESOME!" times 20. Yeah, I don't think there's any word for that....... I loved this chapter. I really liked your fighting scenes. I always love writing those (as you can probably tell from all the fighting scenes so far in Darkness Unleashed.....) And I saw you joined my site. Thanks. Your site, while I'm talking about sites, is awesome. Well, everything you do seems awesome, so of course that's awesome.
By the way, you're doing an awesome job with Tori. I absolutely love what you've done with her. I wonder what will happen if and/or when they find out that she's conflicted like she is.
Author's Response: I'm glad I am portraying your character well, sometimes it gets confusing with how many I have. But if the owners of the characters are satisfied it puts me at ease.
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 12:30 pm · For: Chapter Nine
Wow, great job with the action scene! (I always find myself a bit lost when writing them, but you did a very good job!). I can't wait for Kiba and Tori to join the battle!
I noticed some mistakes, but they didn't bother me. Very good chapter! :) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you, writing battle scenes is challenge, but I find it fun so I guess that's why they turn out well.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 09:06 am · For: Chapter Nine
Amazing!! :D
wow suspense suspense....
cnt wait for update already :P
Author's Response: thank you =)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 08:24 am · For: Chapter Nine
Wow! Your battles are so intense! I'm so excited to read more of Kanami and Rei's battle, I just know the end will be just as awesome as this beginning. Poor Kiba... I certainly hope Akamaru is alright. And oh gosh, the darkness is spreading, not cool! But you write everything so amazingly that I just can't wait to see what happens! Please keep up the great work with this! And btw, I'm sure you have seen that I have tried joining your site, but it won't work. :( I'm very upset with that, I'm convinced that technology hates me. If you could invite me over, I wonder if that would work, but I don't want to bother you. But thanks for joining my site! You're awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you are enjoying this story. Kanami and Rei's battle is going to be a long one, I can promise you that. I will send you an invite to see if that works, hopefully it will.
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 07:39 am · For: Chapter Eight
My face looked like this "O___O T____T" when I realized there was no "Next"-button on this page. Your story is awesome! I like all the characters, the idea and your writing style! I seriously can't wait for you to update. :D Keep up the good work! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you very much =D
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:11 am · For: Chapter Three
Gosh! Your idea for the fic is very different and I like it a lot! And I like the fact that your readers may suggest OCs (it shows you have skills as a writer when you give life to characters who aren't your own).
I'm hooked and definitely going to read the next chapters! (And I'm definitely doing more reviews! I myself love reviews and I'm quite sure others love to receive them too!) This story is definitely intriguing.
I noticed a couple of spelling errors, but since there weren't many, I didn't feel the need to point them out to you. :) They didn't bother me that much.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:05 am · For: Chapter Eight
=) The whole end part had me smiling. He truly is like Jack. I keep picturing him as a ninja jack before I realize he's not actually Jack.... Yeah, you just do him that well. I can't wait to read more of this. And, since Krina almost never gets on, I'll be the one to tell you Hikaru is fabulous. You're doing amazing with him. Please write more soon, cvhoneybee. You're doing an outstanding job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm trying to update all my stories ar much as possible.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 01:58 am · For: Chapter Eight
Kool!!!
it was an awesome epp....
hw do u write chapters so quickly....
n yeah thnx :D i'l wait for the opportunity to join this story :))
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 06:09 pm · For: Chapter Eight
Brilliant! The adventure is underway and it's super exciting!
Kakashi and Naruto's battle was exciting!
Oh and Satoshi and Hikaru's part was great and the end made me chuckle a bit myself.
This is really great keep on going!
Author's Response: many thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 10:26 am · For: Chapter Eight
Naruto and Kakashi were amazingly epic in their battle! But then that guy, Geninji Arakawa, had me in suspense because I thought there would be another battle. Oh well, in an upcoming chapter I suppose...
Satoshi and Hikaru and Gaara had great teamwork in defeating that sea serpent. I love how you describe Satoshi's personality, it's very accurate! Great work with everything in this chapter, it was absolutely brilliant! I definitely cannot wait to see what happens next. Everything seems so mysterious right now, so I am really looking forward to reading more! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I'm aiming for mystery, so I'm glad to hear it. I want that edge-of-your-seat effect =)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 08:54 am · For: Chapter Seven
That was amazing. No, correction, this whole story is amazing. It's so original and awesome. You do the characters as perfectly as if they were your own. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Many thanks =D
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 07:36 am · For: Become Apart Of It
oh nevamind :)
thnx anyways....
wel... no probs i'l b in ur story 'The shinobiu games' ^.^
Author's Response: Very true, but this story has a ways to go, so if an opportunity for a new character arises you shall be the first to know =D I promise
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/11 - 09:18 am · For: Become Apart Of It
OMG!!
That ws purely awesome.....
Nice epp.... :) worth the delay
Author's Response: Thank you very much =D
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/11 - 05:02 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Can i add a OC too, plz?
a Villian.....
Author's Response: I wish I could say yes, but I have more than enough character for this story. So I'm sorry, but no...Don't be mad.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/11 - 03:40 am · For: Chapter Seven
I have to agree with the others, your fight scenes just completely blow me away. They are so amazing! And with Kanami back, things are only going to be more intense now that Rei actually wants to fight. I'm so excited for more! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you bunches! Kanami's fight will be super awesome...I hope at least LOL =D
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 08:10 pm · For: Chapter Seven
This story is coming along great. I loved the fighting sequence in the beginning, I was glued to the page, Keep on writing, even if you only update once a week, don't stop until it is finished!
I want to read all of it from start to finish. It's a great story with a cool story line, honest truth!
Author's Response: I will write until the end I promise! I'm glad your enjoying it so much =)
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 07:43 pm · For: Chapter Seven
Awesome. The fight scenes were pretty cool! Good thing Kanami came back.
The relics' powers continue to interest me. Awesome, just awesome!
Author's Response: I thought my fight scenes were gonna be bad, but thank you for saying they were cool. =) I have big ideas for the Relics, it's going to be great.
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 07:10 pm · For: Chapter Seven
:D Excellent! Nothing to criticise!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm trying to get your character a bit more spotlight, but first I got to bring everything and everyone together. I'm glad you are enjoying it though.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/06/11 - 07:40 am · For: Become Apart Of It
And keep in mind it can't be your own oc.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/06/11 - 07:39 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Yeah, I was in a hurry since I was using (and am again) a school computer, so I forgot to ask who the oc is supposed to fight.
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 03:02 pm · For: Become Apart Of It
I meant to say nobody under 16, so you can change your oc's age if you want.
Author's Response: Oh okay awesome I will do that =)
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 08:36 am · For: Chapter Six
Yay Ayame was featured! I can't wait to see when all the characters meet, they are so close yet so far away.
The battle was awesome and Satoshi pushing Temari made me laugh, just because of how I pictured it in my head.
Excellent work, you make me want to write one of these stories =D
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 09:31 am · For: Chapter Six
Hahahahaha, that was funny when Satoshi simply pushed Temari into the water. Haha, I don't like Temari that much.
I'm glad you updated. Thanks!! It's great!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 08:40 am · For: Chapter Six
Yep, this chapter was definitely worth the wait. It was excellent. Itachi should definitely listen to his instincts, things could get bad if he doesn't watch the jewel carefully. And what an epic scene with the Sand Siblings and Satoshi. Great, excellent, fantastic! I loved it, but you left it on such a cliffhanger! And Hikaru ended up right in Sun, how convenient ;) Let's hope he finds Satoshi for his sake. Definitely can't wait for more! Hopefully, there'll be an update soon....? *hint hint*
Actually, an update for either of your stories would be amazing. You're very good with this joint story, so I can't wait to see how the other one comes out. Will you be adding that one to the Joint Stories challenge as well? Well, anyways, keep up the good work with your writing, you are a very exceptional author!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/06/11 - 03:06 pm · For: Chapter Six
That... was.... AMAZING! I loved the part with Tori. I can't believe how well you are doing with her. It's perfect. I liked the part with Tatsumi walking up to her and everything. I also loved what's going on with the sea serpent. That's coolness to the extreme. The end with Ayame was also as amazing as the other parts. I can't wait to see how the characters progress. You're doing an amazing job. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you are enjoying this =)