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Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 12/07/12 - 10:45 pm · For: Explaining
Whoa, you were on. XD I'll delete this extra review if you want me to. ^_^ Ah, sorry I freaked though, I kind of am like that sometimes. *rolls eyes* Warning has been given!

Author's Response: It's cool I like your spazzy personality it's cute and I am always on ^^ I sent you an email ^^. So you can give some pet peeves you don't like


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 11/07/12 - 05:20 pm · For: Sakura
Nah, tis k since I already know the risk of being on Tonfa and reading fanfictions/speaking with people about Naruto. XD I'm sorry, i don't understand what you mean about the new Itachi...? I think I was talking about young Itachi? Bwahaha, looove that promise; I promise! XD Alright, i'll do that then. ^_^

I like this chapter about Sakura. I've read plenty of fics where alot of this is true; i didn't mind so much the gothic fics, since they were kind of interesting, but the character bash ones... T_T I get really annoyed with those, so your analysis was awesome. Sakura isn't really featured prominently in my stories but this is still really helpful.

Author's Response: Glad you like the deal ;P I already reviewed you story I must review the second soon ^^. Thank you very much for the review. I hate Sakura but she is a character and a (character with many fans)...you want me to do one with Sasuke right? Well tell me a few of your pet peeves with him and I will make one ^^

Author's Response: Glad you like the deal ;P I already reviewed you story I must review the second soon ^^. Thank you very much for the review. I hate Sakura but she is a character and a (character with many fans)...you want me to do one with Sasuke right? Well tell me a few of your pet peeves with him and I will make one ^^


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 10/07/12 - 05:21 pm · For: Itachi
Helllooo Miko-chan, i remembered meeting you before on Tonfa and decided to check your (this) story out. This is an amazing guide to Itachi, and I LOVE it. I don't know if you adressed this, but as a child, Itachi definitely showed more emotion. E.G, he smiled at Sasuke, teased him by poking him in the forehead, and carried him around. Plus, I don't remember much about the scenes where he was fighting with his dad, but i'm pretty sure he showed anger/frustration then. I didn't know that he cried during the massacre (darn spoiler T_T) because I haven't reached the part where he dies yet (i'm close!). In any case, since you said requests were welcome.... Would you mind looking at my story Cygnus Olor? It's on the Most Recents page and is an another Uchiha survivor fanfiction. The other survivor is Sasuke and Itachi's younger sister; the first chapter (parts 1 and 2) are the ones that show Itachi most prominently, so i was wondering if you would mind going over it once and seeing if Itachi was OOC?

Oh, and if you're going to do a Sasuke OOC page, I can tell you about a pet peeve of mine that many Sasuke fanfictions make, if you want me to.

Peace be upon you~ RowanRose

Author's Response: Hello sweetie ^^....thanks for reviewing...O.o I do remember you. Once again I apologize for giving spoiler, I honestly didn't mean too. It just after I hear about it I like to think everybody already knows about. I have to get out of that habit...Please don't remind me of the "new" Itachi. I already know that half the things I wrote could be validated as wrong TT^TT....but this is more for Itachi's old personality so whatever. As for your story I will be glad to read and review it as long as you make a promise to read and review my story unforgettable truth ^^. You want me to do Sasuke huh...message me a few pet peeves and I might start it soon my email is on my profile ^^


Name: Karnia (Anonymous) · Date: 11/12/11 - 03:02 pm · For: Itachi
This does help in some areas, Miko. I know that keeping Itachi in character is a seriously straining task- he is a very complicated guy. I totally agree with you on most of your points. The main one though was the fact that he would never say "I love you" to someone. It's just not him. That would be showing too much emotion. :). However, I would argue that Itachi is not posessive. If he was possessive he would not have given up his entire life to live in solitude and have a terrible reputation on his shoulders. Posessiveness is a form of greediness. I just don't see him thinking he owns a person; it goes against his codes for peace. However, I do think that someone could write him as posessive and get away with it with most of the fandom. However, on a personal note, I don't think he is. Just some thoughts. :)


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 25/08/11 - 01:05 pm · For: Explaining
It can take a lot of work in a Fic to believably mold a character into an unlikely pairing.

Most narutofic authors seem to want to skip right to what they consider the meat of the fanfic, like the fluff, so for example they resort listing out their OC attributes from the start instead of revealing it from within the story.

I agree with what you said in your post and maybe it will do some fics good, but in the end the majority are just fangirls using the foundation of Kishimoto's world to recreate their fantasies.

But I would love for people to stop making these characters OOC.

Author's Response:

It does take alot of work to mold two different characters so they fit but destorying them is a lot easeir to put the two characters togeather doesn't take much work.

I' really hope that people will see that this is meant to change your story but help you understand that if you don't like how a character is made it means you don't like the character as a person and have no right to change it



Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/11 - 01:30 pm · For: Sakura
*nods head* Yes, yes, yes. I agree with you on how many people OOC Sakura. I actually don't write too much about her, so I think I'm safe... for now, at least.

There was something that I personally disagree with. #8

For the whole fangirl thing, you said that there was no possibility of her ever hating Sasuke. Are you sure? Yeah, she's a fangirl, that much is obvious. And getting over Sasuke would be a natural thing for an annoying fan. But she really wasn't only a fangirl. There really was a bit more depth to her when she was with Sasuke. Things did get better between them, up to the point where Sasuke could somewhat tolerate her presence. So when Sasuke left and continually shut her out throughout the Shippuden series, she was left heartbroken, repeatedly, in fact. With that much heartbreak, I personally don't see why she can't hate him. It sounds logical to me.

That is what I think. I'm sorry if it sounds like I'm bashing you or anything. I'm really not trying to. I was just trying to explain things differently. I really do think everything else was spot on, OOCing Sakura is a really common thing that I have seen throughout my time reading Sakura fics. And I think your guide for her really hit all the key things that are always messed up. Nice job.

Author's Response:

I think Sakura is the easiest character to keep in character but people destory her twice as much they destory any other character and it's a little upsetting.

I'm not upset that you don't agree I like what you are saying and somewhat agree of course what I have posted up is not a complete and I will take what you said in to accont.

I think alot of people have noticed that people are too shy to tell them that they OOCed Sakura because the person will yell at them.

Again I respect your opinion and see what  I can do Thanks for the Review :)



Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 30/04/11 - 02:47 pm · For: Itachi
Thank you. This was really informative, and I noticed a lot about my own stories. I totally murdered his character in some of them. Thank you for letting me know this, by making this guide. Can you do Kakashi next? I really love these and they are so helpful. =D

Author's Response:

Glad I could help, I'll be getting to your story soon and give you a review...

Kakashi will be third on my list, I'm already making one for Sakura but I will get to Kakashi next



Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/04/11 - 12:22 pm · For: Itachi
Okay, the stuff about Itachi and emotions was very, very true. You were very accurate on those things. Cuz let's face it, if Itachi ever shows affection in any gushy way, the world will end. I'll be thinking about the kittens and puppies whenever I write about Itachi, don't worry ;)

The thing about Itachi's possessiveness actually made sense. I never even thought about that, but that really is an issue for writing.

Of course, I will admit that I do tend to enjoy those major OOC fanfics, where the character is just so outrageously out of character that I can't help but laugh and question their sanity. But that is my opinion, cuz I think everyone needs a hilarious story to read.

Keeping that in mind, OOCness is annoying in a serious fanfiction.

For my request about the Rookie Nine, I'll work on finding those good and bad fanfics that I have read in the past. But is it okay to email them to you, since I would feel bad about posting them in a review?

Also.... I kinda feel bad about asking this. Everyone has already asked you to read their own fics, so I don't want to burden you more. Plus, you still have to write this guide while getting to some of the requests. But if you had time, do you think you could read some of my stories? I'm working on four different fics right now, and I'm proud of all of them in their own special way. So I can't say which one I want you to read. If you could read any or all of them, I'd really appreciate it. But as I said, if you're busy, then I won't bother you about it.

I really liked this Itachi chapter. You're very passionate about him.... I can't even believe I just said that.... I just pulled a Captain Obvious moment....

Anyways, I look forward to reading about the other characters. I can only imagine what you have to say for the upcoming chapters. Keep on writing for this!

Author's Response: Thanks I’m glad you enjoyed: D it. We all enjoy like major OOC fanfiction they make me laugh at how ridicules it gets, I read one story where Itachi killed his whole clan because of Santa. That was a fun read you can find it on my favorites for ff.net.Thanks my email is Yukikuroshi@hotmail.com you can bet I’ll get it right away, I just liking have reference of the characters and knowing the basic with them. Don’t feel bad I love reading other peoples work, I get new idea’s too so your stories will be on my must read list. And no I’m not too busy to read and review =) and if I was summer break is right around the corner.


Name: Swrestler12 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/11 - 08:51 pm · For: Explaining
I like what you're saying. Yeah, i dont see why people tend to completely change the character of the story into their own depictions.

Um, i hope this isnt a big deal, but would you mind going over my war story, i only ask because i am trying to get the characters as close to the anime/mange but am not to sure if i am doing it correctly. Thanks anyway and i can't wait to hear what you have to say.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately a lot of people think it is their god given write to make the characters they way they want because it’s fanfiction (I’m seriously getting tired of this excuse). Sure I have no problem reading your story and would love giving you advice ^-^.



Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 29/04/11 - 05:50 pm · For: Explaining
*sighs* I hate admitting i need help. In almost all of my stories I have OOC characters. It would bring my writing up so much by not having that. I struggle when writing Naruto Uzumaki. A lot of people think that if you just say 'Believe it!' After every sentence you can do it. That is so wrong...

I do Naruto either to serious or too Orange-clad Hyperactive kid. I also struggle with Kakashi Hatake. He is one of my favorite characters, and I tend to mess up his personality.

One of my biggest worries is my main story. It is titled 'One Little Girl.' I would appreciate it so much if you could read all of it, and get back to me about characters.

If you could do Kakashi, Naruto, Itachi, and Orochimaru it would be appreciated. Kabuto also. Thanks. This helps a lot.

Author's Response:

Lol we all need help after all we aren’t the author right…I believe I need some help polishing Itachi’s character a little after all I didn’t create Itachi. And I so agree with you on Naruto just cause he “Believe it” became his trade mark doesn’t mean he says it all the time that is just annoying and most of the time just plain stupid.

Hmmm :\ I will try to figure out Naruto’s personality and write a guide on him he was already on my list. Kakashi is someone I will have difficulties with too one of stories I’m writing has him in it and now my concern is if gets too OOC but I’m watching Naruto and getting a feel of who is. I think Kakashi has too many different personalities for my liking. XP

Guess what? I’m almost done with Itachi…so that will be coming out soon J

And don’t worry we all struggle as Authors and I will be glad to read your story it’s those who admit their mistakes that become greater =).



Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 29/04/11 - 10:55 am · For: Explaining
DARNDARNDARNDARNDARNDARNDARN! I checked out the Itachi tribute.... AND I GOT SPOILERED!!! WAAAAH!!!
oh well. The beginning of the tribute was good. I also liked your first video on youtube.... Really cool.

I got to read this! Yep, i've started over on the Naruto series, and once again, i realize, JUST HOW FRICKIN COOL THIS SERIES IS! and how i don't want to OOC the characters.

so.... buh bye. Oh yeah, and Peace Be Upon You, Miko. ^^

Author's Response: Ahhh –claps hands together begins apologizing over and over- I’m so sorry I should of put a warning I’m soo sorry. I love the Katy Perry video too. (If that’s the video you are talking about)That’s good me and you together reading the Naruto series again just to find out what happens.

Back at you too, Peace be Upon you XD



Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/11 - 03:38 am · For: Explaining
Ah, I'm interested to see what you have to say about the characters. And everything you said in this chapter was very true. Except for the part about Sakura still being likeable... That is highly debateable in my opinion.

I also want to see if my writing contains large amounds of OOCness. I hope not >_<

Requests? Um... How about the rest of the Rookie Nine? Those would be a pretty interesting to see, since most stories do center around some, if not all, of them.

I'm looking forward to seeing this. Should be interesting, and slightly humorous in my opinion. Can't wait :D

Author's Response:

I’m a writer so I find it highly offensive people feel the rights destroy my character, by changing their personality so it’s unnoticeable but by keeping their look…if they hate how my character is then write your own story.

And believe me I hate Sakura too, but people make a money grubbing slut, or to cool for school type of person and once again that’s not Masashi Kishimoto Sakura. So I will help people lead her in the right direction.

As for the Request I would love to do the Rookie Nine….send me some good fanfics with them so I can get a feel of their reaction to other characters and some bad fanfictions so I can make reference where people go wrong. As for the profile’s,  l’ll go to wiki and/or leafninja.



Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 28/04/11 - 10:07 pm · For: Explaining
Hello! Yep, i've commited that crime a lot.... (Naruto rubbing back of the head and grinning while sweat dropping pose being stolen here...)

Since I've decided that I need to work on my OOCness. Thankfully, many of the char's in my stories are not in the manga- LOL, keeps things easy.

But i get your point. So i'll work on it.

BTW; haha, i only could read a few of the first sentences. You should space more- everything comes in a big jumble.. Just check out how it looks you'll understand. I had that problem a lot.

The Sakura being a fangirl but likeable idea is nice.

What's a Canon?

Author's Response: We have all committed that crime called oocnesss so no worries =). I even OOCed Itachi back in the day so I’m hoping this will help some fellow Naruto fans)I do hope this guide will help you if you decide to put any Naruto characters in. ^-^OMG O.o I can’t believe it did it to me again O.o…I’m so sorry it does it all the time I believe I fixed it…for now

Canon is characters from Naruto. So when people say CanonXCanon they are saying Naruto characterxNaruto Character. I hope that explains things for you…



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