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Reviews For The Truth of War

Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 - 12:31 am · For: Keeps the Doctor Away
Wow this is really interesting. Are you going to be playing Red Orchestra 2 by chance?

Author's Response: NEver heard of it..... but now im interested


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 09:18 pm · For: PHase 1: Infiltration
Oh, haven't seen this in a while ;)

Well, this story still continues to intrigue me. There's always something that leaves me in suspense, and this was no exception. I can't wait to see what happens! I really do enjoy this, and I hope to read more soon! Keep up the awesome work!

Oh, if you ever need help, you can still ask :)

And another side note, I hope wrestling went well, considering there was so much traveling for it.

Author's Response: I aim to please and to keep people wondering. Thank you for the positive review, it does not get old to receive them.rnrnI will ask for your assistance if i ever need it thank you.rnrnYeah it went well, last year and all it was probably the best summer for wrestling. Although i didnt have much of a summer. ^_^


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/11 - 03:57 am · For: Revelations
YAY INUZUKA!!!!

Ahem, yes, well.....

Great work. The description of the area was good, and Anko's meeting with the leader was thrilling and chilling at the same time. I was scared for the poor woman, honestly. But I think you captured the heat of the moment really well, and it seemed to flow really well.

Awesome job! I continue to really love this story, it seems so good! Can't wait for more, so update soon please! Loving this so far!


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 20/05/11 - 11:14 am · For: Keeps the Doctor Away
yeek... Shino! What on earth.... Scary, LOL. ^^ freaked out but can't wait to find out more.
THe nurse was Ino, right?

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Silverwolf raised an interesting issue as to how the women could be incorperated... Maybe the girls could sneak into the army for various reasons? Like TenTen, her being a tough tomboyish sort of girl.

Author's Response: :) thank you for the review.....yes, i enjoy Shino this way. Um the nurse... You'll find out about later, and the whole women issue, there was a few orginazations or things like that, that did allow women to fight in the war, bbut sneaking in could be an option


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 20/05/11 - 11:12 am · For: Red Death
Isn't Naruto sorta... OOC? cuz he's more of a cheerful sort of chap, right? But i guess that was the warning... But i think it'd be interesting if you could insert these characters into the era and kep in character.

I liked it. ^^ bloody but cool.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/11 - 07:19 pm · For: Of Nobles and Theives
Yay, I love the intro to the new characters! At first, I thought Hiashi was gonna be OOC, but then when you described how they had changed, I let it slide. It's good to see them getting along so well, especially during this time of war. And the Uchiha vs. Hyuuga rivalry was very well introduced. Very realistic, I liked it. As always, nice job with this. Can't wait for the next one! Keep up the great work with this story!

Author's Response: Well i aim to please. I am glad that you liked this introduction as well. I thought about it and well a nice Hiashi would not have been typical if he had always been like that, so i decided that he would eventually change to become nicer because come on, who can be mean to Hinata. In times of war we should not strain our relationship with those that we need most. I am glad that the U v. H rivalry seems realistic and i am also glad you liked that. Thank you again for being such a faithful reader


Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 09:45 pm · For: Motherly Love

I really like how you made each character fit into each chapter and I really like the way the writing flows and the description that are used make pictures.

Oh I can’t wait till Itachi comes in your story. I want to know what you have planned for him.



Author's Response: Well thank you for the posotive reinforcement. Yeah, I'm glad you think this is going so well. Yes, I plan on having the Uchiha play an important role in the story, although I'm trying to figure out how this will go. Thanks again


Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 06:43 pm · For: Damned

Another intense chapter, all in which I loved. I really like what you have going on here the story seems to following the Naruto story and the characters seem in character. Why you are asked for my advice is questionable I think you have a good hold on all the characters.



Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 06:01 pm · For: Always the innocent ones....

I love the mad scientist sort of Doctors you don’t know if you should trust them or be scared of them. My favorite parts are the Shino’s parts (though I still can’t see him as mad scientist but it’s your story). God Shino makes my skin crawl and I love his sadistic personality. If I wasn’t in love with Itachi this new Shino would grab my heart (yeah I kind of sadistic).



Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 05:20 pm · For: Remembering Debt

I think you did an excellent job with Anko’s personality…and for a male to. It’s always difficult writing about from a different sex point of view but you got a good hold of it.

I really enjoy how you keep us guessing till the end of the chapter. Word of advice is use the guessing game but change it up a bit because some people will get a little annoyed by it (I don’t know why though) try to balance out your story with a few obvious things.

Good chapter by the way a real enjoyable read.



Author's Response: Thank you, that means alot to me considering i wasnt too sure how to write it. I am glad that i was able to get it into a good enough perspective. thank you for your advice and for taking the time to read this


Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 04:54 pm · For: Mobolize

That was interesting Shikamaru seemed in character if want to be serious during war but also that laid back personality that we love.

(Sorry this review is short)



Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 04:40 pm · For: Planning and Contreversies
That chapter left me on the edge who are they talking about…and I like the Inuzuaka’s were the family they were talking about that’s a nice plot twist and what else was nice was how you called the Third Hokage by his name and not by third, that was refreshing.


Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 04:24 am · For: Keeps the Doctor Away

Oooooh. Experiments on the human body –smiles- my favorite type of villain…ooooh that part reminded me of my favorite character of my favorite manga…kyaaaa –Miko spazes out- I loved it XD a lot though Shino being the villain didn’t really fit Kabuto doing it more the human experiments. But awesome chapter XD.



Author's Response: XD alrighty then. Yeah, i know Shino isn't the type of person to be the villain, but honestly is there anything there that says he is? just saying. I could picture him as a Crazy Scientist though couldnt you?


Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 02:39 am · For: Red Death

I don’t normally read war stories…since none of them really caught my interest ever (typical girly stuff caught my interest such a sparkly gay vampires :D) but your story was good…better than good it was excellent, I really like how you wrote it the description was good though a little confusing. Spacing when characters talk helps I got a little confused on who was talking.

As for Naruto you kept him in character for the most part, Naruto and loyalty is like peanut butter and jelly can’t have one without the other so you worked that pretty nicely. But Naruto thinking of a plan and everybody listening seems a little off Naruto is more of the type action first, think later type of a guy.

All in all good chapter it was enjoyable to read and I’m excited to read more XD.

P.S. sorry it took so long to review. I’ve just been super busy

P.S.S I was joking about the twilight part -.-. I hate that book.



Author's Response: :D thanks for the review. Yeah, I am glad that this story was able to grab your attention and for that i am well pleased. Well I will continue fixing little things here and there so thank you for telling me what i needed to fix. rnrnYeah, this is what i had pictured Naruto like if he were a soldier, sorta think later act first. rnrnThanks for the review even if it did take a while, and thank goodness there are other sane people out there who do not like twilight


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/11 - 03:54 am · For: Motherly Love
Wow, I didn't even think of having Naruto's mom in this. That was a really good portrayal of her. That is a good Uzumaki family scene. I liked it. It showed caring as well as comedy. And it was a good opening for a new mission for Naruto, which should really be exciting. Good job on this chapter, I look forward to seeing what you put out next time. Well done.


Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 06:47 pm · For: Damned
The introduction of Kiba, and more of Anko's past. I must say Orochimaru works well in this roll, and again the vivid description really enhance the story, it immerses me in the story. Keep writing, and I cant wait to see what happens as things come together.


Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 06:43 pm · For: Always the innocent ones....
Wow, Neji is very scary here. He fits well as the elite german General in charge of such a program. The Nurse is described well, and its good to know a bit about her character. all in all a very good chapter.


Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 06:41 pm · For: Remembering Debt
This was very good, I especially liked how vividly you described what was happening ,it gave a real sense of the feelings of the moment.

Author's Response: Thanks for the update. Yeah, i wanted to give the reader a sense of what was going on. ^_^


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/11 - 05:01 pm · For: Damned
Ooh. Could this possibly be what I have been waiting for? The arrival of the Inuzuka clan, perhaps? Sweet! Can't wait to see Kiba!

This was a nicely done chapter. Anko's flashback was so eerie and creepy, but it worked so well for this. And it kept close to the manga, with some flare of your own, of course. It was sad about Anko's parents, but it does give her that tough personality that we all know her for.

Good work with this chapter. I always enjoy reading this when a new chapter comes out. You're a very good writer, and this is a great story. Keep up the good work with this, and I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Well thank you for those kind words, i really do appreciate it. Yes, this is a small introduction to the Clan we all love and enjoy and i plan on introducing Kiba after the next chapter. I wanted to find the best idea for a flashback, and that whole idea came up and i thought it would fit perfectly, even though i did not want to think about a little girl witnessing that. Thanks again, and i actually might update really soon.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/11 - 06:16 am · For: Always the innocent ones....
*shivers* Gosh, Shino creeps me out so much in this story. You really describe his sadistic behavior very well. And I kinda liked the intro to Belinda. You describe her past as an innocent girl, and then somehow she becomes mixed up in some twisted psychotic lab work. It's very common in a war, so I'm glad you described her. The description of the Hyuuga eyes was also very interesting. You changed the manga version into a real world version while still giving them some kind of special ability. I also can't wait to see the rest of the Hyuuga and how they do in the war. Good job with this chapter. I really like this story so keep up the good work with your writing!

Author's Response: Well thanks for the Review. Yes, Shino is coming out exactly as i imagined he would be, and I'm glad it's working out. Well i was asked before about the nurse and decided that i would identify her. I decided to do it this way because i thought it would go well this way. Yeah, i wanted the Hyuugas to maintain an advantage in the battlefield and i thought having their eyes this wat would go well. Thanks for reading.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/11 - 03:26 am · For: Remembering Debt
My praise is not official until I put it into a review.

Again, good job with this chapter. Anko's past is a mystery that needs to be unraveled, and you have already given a nice start as to how her story in the war will go. The flashback gave a lot of insight, and the ending of the chapter shows how she has grown into a strong woman (as we all know her to be).

Just one thing. You forgot to end the italics after the memory, so everything after the flashback is in italics. It makes the rest of the chapter seem as if it is part of the memory. Just change it when you get the chance, that's all.

Another job well done with this story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Well thanks for the review, and for your help. And yeah i noticed that, i was going to fix it. Thanks again


Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 11/04/11 - 06:53 pm · For: Mobolize
This is very good, I'm liking Shikamaru in his leadership role, and Choji is great as a solider under his command. This captures the mood of sneaking behind enemy lines very well, and is a good transitional scene. I like it :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^_^ yeah, I thought Shikamaru would make a good leader and Chouji would definetely be great under his command


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 05:49 pm · For: Mobolize
Yeah, it was short. But it was very informative. Well done. You really showed the stress that the soldiers were going through. And that is important during a war story.

If you still need help, you know how to reach me. And if I come up with any other ideas, I'll alert you immediately. Keep up the good work with your writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, yeah i think that the only issue i have right now is what/who i should write about next. thanks for reviewing oh wondeful reader


Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 28/03/11 - 04:52 pm · For: Planning and Contreversies
Interesting, Plot development, introduction of the General staff...... And Shikamaru on the battlefield, plus Kiba probably in that family home..... awesome! Keep writing.

Author's Response: Yes the plot continues to thicken. Well I thought that Shikamaru would make a good soldier.... a LAZY one, but still good. Yes you guessed it, next comes the introduction of the Inuzuka clan just because i want to bring dogs into the war and well Kiba and Akamaru fighting in world war 2, what could be better?


Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 28/03/11 - 04:47 pm · For: Keeps the Doctor Away
Very creepy. Extremely so. Shino fits right in as the sadistic insane doctor performing experiments on live humans though. Good job capturing the setting.Now the question is, who is the nurse?

Author's Response: Yes i always did picture Shino as the quiet crazy type and what better place to put him then as a German Doctor. The Nurse..... well i don't know to much about that, I was thinking of Ino as the nurse but then thought that it could be some random nurse. I don't know help me out here. ^_^.rnrnIf you would like to offer up any suggestions i would be glad to see what you have to say. Any and all help is welcomed and thanks again for the review


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