Reviews For Children of Magic
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 - 03:31 am · For: Chapter 3
Haha, I love everyone's reactions to Amanda. Priceless.... I'm glad you came back to update. This was very good. Can't wait to see what awaits Amanda in the meeting! Keep up the good work, and I hope you update sooner this time! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks.I really love where this is going. Next chapter is the staff meeting, that will be fun to write. =)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/11 - 08:43 pm · For: Chapter 2
Haha, I should have seen that coming. It figures there would be a Hatake daughter in this story. Nice job on this. I liked how you made all the other students completely and utterly afraid of the Progeny of Chakra. It's so typical of Harry and his friends, yet it's so believable. I'm a little worried about Gaara... in that last line, he smiled... smiled?! Usually, it means something bad. I'm kinda scared. Anyways, good job on this, and I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Me and my sister share similar views on characters. Yea i guesss it's always kakashi, but hey. He's kakashi. He has...spunk. You are totally right in thinking garra smiling is a bad sign. It usually means he's going to enjoy watching someone suffer. I am going to have fun with the students and staff. They will never want to even here the word 'Shinobi' again... *mutters of into the distance plotting*
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/11 - 08:41 pm · For: Chapter 1
May I just say.... that was a freaking amazing entrance.
I'm so excited to see more of this! Just the way you introduced the shinobi makes everything seem so much more exciting!
Now, while I'm writing this, I figure I might as well tell you to tell your sister that she is an amazing writer. She should give herself a little more credit than that in terms of her stories. However, she is the writer, so I guess it is up to her what she wants to do with her stories.
Can I also ask.... how much younger are you than Fantasy Madeline? She's twelve... how old could you be that you are still such a good writer?
Anyways, off topic. Again, this is a really good intro. I expect to see an even better second chapter! Great job on this, and I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: OMG i published this two minutes ago, and I have 2 reads. you reviewed in less than 5 minutes. You Rule! Yea, she's sort of self concious about her writing, but I have seen her do amazing things with words, so much that she goes to a school for gifted children on a scholarship. Showoff.rnI am 11 years old, twelve in October. Thanks for saying I'm good, my sis has been giving me writing tips everyday after school for a year now. =) i will update super soon, but i think my sis is getting anoyed i'm using her good writing computer. (seriously. She has a different computer just for writing. Who does that?) Thanks again. Bye!