Reviews For The Lost Missions Of Neji Hyuuga
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/11 - 03:16 pm · For: The Start of Something New
I like! It's different to see what is going on in Neji's world. And your writing is really good for a first fanfic. That's a real accomplishment! Just a little advice: spacing. My eyes totally crossed when I was reading it. Just space your paragraphs/sentences, and all will be good! Please continue with this because you have just earned yourself an interested fan!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review! I should have more chapters coming out very soon so just watch for them. And I originally spaced it in the program when I first typed it but it didn't translate well for some reason. Though I will try and improve on formatting in the future.