Reviews For The Lost Wolf
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/02/11 - 03:36 pm · For: Sokuru vs Sayomi
Hurray! Such a good chapter! I'm glad you updated. As for the fight scenes, you did really well! I don't understand why you thought it was bad. I wish my fight scenes were that good! You did an excellent job. And I love Sayomi hanging with the Uchiha family! It's just so fun to read about her and them together! And I laughed at Sasuke's last line. It's so Sasuke-ish, and I can only imagine him spanking one of his children.
Just a heads up, somewhere after the fight, you called Sayomi the wrong name. You called her Kiyomi. Just thought you should know so you can change it.
Thanks so much for updating! I love this story so much, and it really makes me happy to keep reading this! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/11 - 04:54 pm · For: Hidden Leaf Village
Yay! Update! I'm very pleased with this chapter. You described Sayomi's reactions to the village really well. Your writing really showed how Sayomi is socially-deficient, and this chapter was very good with showing Sayomi's attempts at adjusting to society. I love the new characters! Everyone's kids are so cool! And that way to end it was hilarious! Overall, good job! I look forward to the next chapter. Hooray for battle scenes!
Author's Response: Lol thanks a lot i tried to make her seem as out there as possible... im glad you liked the ending i wasnt sure about it but i was like wth why not XD
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/11 - 11:38 am · For: What's in a Name?
Aww... I really wanted those cookies.
But this story is so good that I just had to review!
I really love this. Like full on, love this! It's so awesome that I don't even know what I want to say. I just love the whole thing. It might be the plot... it might be Sayomi... it might be the storyline... it might be the fact that this story is based on wolves (I love wolves ;D) but I don't know! I just love everything. Please please pretty please update this soon! I really really like this!
Author's Response: Aww thanks I much appreciate it. I'll update as soon as I finish up the next chapter. :)