Reviews For Cursed Saint
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 - 07:31 pm · For: Kryptonite
Amazing! As I said, I love Ryu. He just seems like an awesome character. His past is something that I'd like to know more about. And I love how Ryu acts with Sakura, it's so cute. I'm so psyched to read more! I must be off now to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like my oc. I was afraid his personality or something would be bad. So far nobody has complained about how he acts, so I guess I've done him well. Hehehe. I see that I'm succeeding in making people wonder about Ryu's past. I love doing that, even if I hate when it happens to me........ I meant to make it seem cute between the two children. This is the part where they first bond, so I wanted something that would really make them bond, and this seemed like the perfect thing.
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 - 07:15 pm · For: Taken
Wow! This is awesome! I love Ryu, he's so adorable. And I'm pretty sure Sakura came from a non-ninja clan, so I don't see how her aunt could be a ninja.
But everything else was wonderful. Your writing is very good, it keeps me in suspense. Good work!
Author's Response: Yes! It wasn't crappy like I feared! I try my best to make my writing awesome. I'm just continuously afraid that I fail when I post it. Well, I doubt either her mom or dad was a ninja, but I don't remember them ever saying anything about none of her family being a ninja. Then again, I have such a bad memory it wouldn't surprise me if I just missed it =P. Either way, there's something that happens that motivated Hana to become a stronger person, therefore becoming a ninja to gain that strength. The suspense part is something I don't usually plan. It just seems to create itself as I type. I'll have a basic idea of a chapter, and it spirals into something that is over what used to be my usual 3000 word count.
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 - 07:02 pm · For: Prologue
Hmm, it sounds pretty good so far. I can't wait to read more, so I'm going to read more :D
Author's Response: Sweet. I achieved winning a new persons approval. It makes me so happy to see my writing enjoyed by another person. That, I think, is the greatest thing any writer can ask for. I hope you do read on and continue to enjoy. But, if it turns crappy after this, sorry.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/11 - 05:14 am · For: Superman
*raises hand excitedly while jumping up and down* YES! I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT RYU ZENJIN'S PAST!!!!
Ahem, anyways....I loved the long chapter, but then you left it at such a huge cliffhanger that I, as greedy as I am, was pleading for more. And I still am: please update soon!
All the scenes were brilliantly constructed. They flowed right into the next. I loved the character insight, as you touched upon each person a bit, even if it was through dialogue. You wrote each character amazingly. I also loved how you had character development for the ANBU member as he thought about his mom. Not many people go into a random character's past, but I like that you did. It made the readers feel heartbroken as we also felt the ANBU's feelings and emotions. And that scene also hinted at Daichi's powers and abilities.
The description of Ryu throughout this chapter was amazing. It went from his struggle to stay strong to his other side as it took over to defeat Shiro to the destroyed ten-year-old boy. You led us through his emotions so easily, it was wonderful.
I loved this chapter, it's a personal favorite by you now :D Great job. Keep up the phenomenal work!
Author's Response: Well, you already know about when you'll find out, and I really hope you like it when it comes around. As for the cliffhanger, I feel like that was one of my favorite just because it's so..... cliffhanger-y? Yeah, can't find the right word =P. To tell the truth, this was my favorite chapter because I felt like I did them better than I usually do. The part about the Anbu was something I just felt was right to add, and yeah, it was mostly to give some insight on Daichi's power. I find it fun to come up with things like that =D. I may actually use it for something later on in a different story. As for Ryu: YES!!!! I did his transitions (I think that's the right word.....) well. Or, as you say, amazingly. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter that is so far one of my favorites of all mine.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 - 07:44 am · For: Kryptonite
What's wrong with length? Most of us count that as a good thing.
That was an adorable chapter or at least Ryu and Sakura were adorable. Shiro obviously less so. That was really action packed and interesting. I loved every minute.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, but I still always feel compelled to apologize in case someone doesn't like length. I'm glad you liked the children's scenes. I feel bad for what I'm doing to them, to tell the truth. I kind of dislike Shiro myself. I always have either a dislike toward my actual bad bad guys. I'm glad that it was good enough to earn your love as well. You're really making me happy today with all these reviews.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 - 07:28 am · For: Taken
Quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes here. Otherwise this was quite good. I found your description of the action a little hard to follow (not that I blame you. Action scenes are my worst nightmere too) - but the children were enthralling. Loved it.
Author's Response: Usually I can write writing scenes pretty well, but other times I end up even confusing myself when I read my fighting scenes. *sigh*. Oh well. Sweet. I achieved your love in this story as well. *happy dance*. I'm doing a lot of happy dances today...... You rock, BigSis. I never expected you to read through all these. I'm surprised you're able to without getting bored of my writing.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 - 07:09 am · For: Prologue
Not bad. As you say: rushed, but it was still enjoyable. It was certainly an unusual start to a story.
Author's Response: Well, it's me. You'll have to expect unusualness. I'm glad it was enjoyable despite rushed.
Name: StawberryVixen (Signed) · Date: 01/02/11 - 02:48 am · For: Prologue
Wow, this is a really good story. I like a few chapters that are long, cause it show's more description and more of the story, which I am loving by the minute. I hope to see more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm really glad you liked the story. I'll try to update as soon as I can, but I'm not sure how long that will be. And I never try to make my chapters too long, but they always seem to be a lot longer than I expect.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/01/11 - 08:46 pm · For: Kryptonite
This chapter was so good! This entire story is incredible. I love the way this story is headed, and I really want to continue reading this! And I can't believe you're apologizing for making this chapter long! There is no need to apologize! I love long chapters :) You're an amazing writer, and I can't wait for the next update. Please continue with this, and I hope you post the next chapter soon. Thanks for posting this! This story is awesome!
Author's Response: First of all, it may take me a little while to update again because I'm going to write a chapter for Sasaui Uchiha and Never Too Late before I start this. Secondly, I know I shouldn't apologize. Rowanrose told me the same thing, but for some reason I feel the need to say sorry. Anyway, I'm really glad you liked this chapter. I was a little scared no one would. Thanks for the review, Wolf-chan. And as soon as I get the chance, I'll read the chapter of Pirates of the Mist.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 07/11/10 - 08:50 pm · For: Taken
Ok, so you are the only person who has actually APOLOGIZED for making a chapter big. Probably in the planet. IT IS AWESOME to make a chap big. At least to me.
I LOVED IT. LOVEd it. LOved it. loved it. (echoes) Seriously. Half way through i had to stop and i was really sad. This chapter, when i was feeling glum, it brought a ginormous smile to my face! I loved it. The relation ship between Ryu and Sakura and Sakura and Ino. And in the end, when he said, HANA HARUNO'S NIECE? I was like, omg! This chapter... Well, i can only say it over and over again. I LOVED IT.
^^
If it was possible i'd give this 10 stars out of 5. And you know, all this going on, i don't usually do it! So you MUST know that i loved this.
Author's Response: =D I'm really glad you LOVED it so much. I'm sorry for making you sad. I didn't mean to, honestly. Yeah, I'd meant to surprise everyone with the whole Hana's niece thing. And you're going to get sadder and love the bond more as the next two chapters come out. Shiro is definitely not a forgiving man, and he's not just going to take..... I better shut my mouth before I give anything away. You'll also find out who Shiro is in the next chapter, along with some of Ryu's history. I'll try to get it out soon, but the desktop crashed, and it had this story's most recent chapter. I'm going to finish the next chapter of Never Too Late and then type the next chapter to this.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 07/11/10 - 08:46 pm · For: Prologue
It's nice. Although i found it odd that the anbu would bother to chase after a common thief...? Well, anyways, GOOD JOB!!!
Author's Response: The only reason that he chased after Ryu was because he was around when Ryu took the food. I'm glad you like it.
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 10/10/10 - 12:59 pm · For: Taken
Wow. Just wow. That's all I can say at this moment.
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Poor Sakura!!! What does he want with her? Aww, but I liked how Ryu started defending Sakura, it was really cute!♥ This was absolutely fantastic! Great work in writing it! I soooo can't wait for the next update!!!
P.S. Just wondering, but will Sakura and Ino stay best friends or start the whole rivalry over Sasuke? Great story!
Author's Response: Sadly, yes, they'll still have their rivalry. And you're really going to say poor Sakura after you read the next chapter. Let's just say Shiro is a twisted jerk, if you hadn't already realized. And I'm going to try to update Never Too Late before I update on this, but I may become so focused on this I work on it. I'm soooooo glad you liked it.
Name: luna45 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/10 - 09:38 pm · For: Taken
It's good, I like it. I personally can't stand Sakura but I can make very few exceptions.
Author's Response: Yeah, well, the only times Sakura is seen is through Ryu's eyes or she's by Ryu, so she'll be a bit different then she normally is. I didn't really like her at first either, but after her battle with the sound-nin, she got better.
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 08/10/10 - 08:25 am · For: Prologue
This was really good and worth reading! Between you and me, I think it's pretty cool that we both have just-now-starting stories with our own OC character! ^_^
But this is definitely interesting - I wonder what Ryu's past is? And loved the fight sequence, Ryu's pretty good! Hmm... I wonder... will he be attending the academy?
I can't wait to read more Sasaui! Great writing too:P
Author's Response: Chapter one is almost done and starts out with some action. You won't learn about his past, though, until around the time Itachi comes into the story. And yeah, he'll go to the Academy.