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Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 11/08/10 - 06:47 pm · For: The Unknown Misery of Umino Iruka
Wow, that was truly depressing. I found it very confounding that Kakashi would be such a perplexing and infuriating man here to go and do that to the seemingly innocent Iruka. I must say I feel very morbid after reading this story. It was a very insightful story in such to show that there could be people that need help and are desperate to find a foothold, a grasp on a reality that may not be shared.
Now I’m not saying that people should nose in others’ lives on upon reading this story in the frantic idea that they are next. My brain just sees this as a good wakeup call; reminder on things in life. Kakashi and Iruka…I really don’t have a problem with these two guys; I personally love the pairing. It’s usually cute and affectionate along with making it feel like a toasty blanket.
I don’t have a problem with grammar or spelling; the plot was a good one. Not original but, the story is unique to what would usually happen; Iruka/Kakashi doing something like that would be nearly saved from death, etc. Your version is well better in most part in that it teaches a lesson and is reality.
I probably sound out of sorts or scatter brained in this review but, well that’s how my brain is right now. Amusing isn’t it? Mah, moving to a conclusion; I like your story and think it’s a good one. It was worth the time and effort to read and encourage you to keep writing for this work seems pretty well written. Keep your head and move along with your ideas.

CKL


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