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Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/11/12 - 03:22 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Respect his decision? I don't exactly like the sound of that. It doesn't sound too, well, good. Does that mean he'll refuse? How could you just leave it at that? T_T Not fair, Itoko-san. Not fair whatsoever.

I really did enjoy this chapter. Shikamaru and Sai, huh? I wonder how Sai will act now without ever meeting team 7. Oh, and I loved seeing Hayai's weakened state. It shows he is still affected by what happened, and for that I am happy. It just shows he really is human, and it makes me love him more. Sheesh, I don't know who I like more - Gatsuuga or Hayai.

Great chapter, Itoko-san. I loved it.

Author's Response: You'll have to see :P. Yeah, Hazard and I decided that Shika and Sai were best fit for this type of work. Yes Hayai is still affected by this. Who do you like more? That's up for you to decide. Thanks for the review! Glad you liked.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/12 - 12:54 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
"Hopefully they respect my decision..." It sounds like he's declining o_O Can he do that?! That would mean that there's no story, right?! I'm so confused~

This was an interesting update, I liked seeing how scarred and broken Hayai still was. Things like that never really heal.

Nice work, Shizake-san! I really liked this chapter!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/10/12 - 02:37 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
For some reason I kept imagining Naruto making a shadow clone to leave with his team and then running back. Bet he wishes he had now. Poor Naruto got his behind kicked. I wonder how he's going to take it. Naruto is the most stubborn anime dude I've ever seen. And that's saying something, because I've seen some stubborn dudes. This was an interesting update, and I cannot wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks for the update, and we'll be sure to keep it interesting in the future! This story will be going into a much deeper arc after this, rest assured.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/10/12 - 02:05 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Oh sarcasm. You gotta love it =P.

Meditation? Interesting. I wonder how this new and very useful skill will work for Naruto...... Yeah, possibly save him from more Sakura-induced brain damage. I'm surprised he caught on so quickly. Then again, this is Naruto.

They have a lead?!? Yeah! The mission may just succeed. Gatsuuga, shush it! They may save Sasuke if they find him and have your help. After all, he hasn't been completely consumed yet. Save him! Man, now I really wanna see how this goes. Great update, Itoko-san.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/12 - 04:43 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Wha~ So they're not going to see Orochimaru or Sasuke?! But... but... that's just so un-storyline like T_T When Gatsuuga had offered to fight Naruto for the opportunity to go, I thought perhaps Naruto would miraculously win just so we would continue with the original manga / anime plot (even though I know there's a slim chance of him winning against Gatsuuga), but I guess not t.t

Well, since that mission isn't going to happen, I wonder what's going to happen next. Nice work on this you guys.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/12 - 05:53 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Haha, I like how the first thing Hayai teaches Naruto is meditation :P Quite ironic for our overly exuberant and loud friend.

Oh my gosh, they finally found a lead! I was so worried they wouldn't and this whole mission arc would be ruined, that's awesome that things are continuing now. So excited for some more battles and whatnot :D

Good job on this update, Shizake-san, keep up the awesome work you guys!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/09/12 - 02:38 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Haha. Sakura was sniffed by the dog. The reason I find this funny is I've been dealing with it a lot whenever I go down to my friend's house. I just found it funny she was smelled =P. though it didn't work, which is disappointing see as Gatsuuga worked so hard on that idea.

I'm not sure Gatsuuga teaching Sakura how to make that chakra of hers stronger is a good thing or not. I can see that ending badly if someone doesn't paralyze her before waking her up =P. And Gatsuuga deserves a treat! He's been such a good boy today. Though I doubt he'll get it.....

I wonder if this mission is really as hopeless as you're making it seem. I guess I'll find out next chapter.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/09/12 - 01:07 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
I really liked the way you had it happen a lot like the original version, and yet changed it, too. I am, though, a bit surprised that you didn't have Sakura already heal his wounds even if he had fainted and how fast they arrived at the bridge. Then again, I can't remember how many times they stopped for training or planning.

Overall I really enjoyed it and still really love Hayai!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/12 - 01:18 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Gah - three chapters behind T_T. I blame school and something else I'm not mentioning.

Anyway, I love Gatsuuga. He is so sarcastic and scary - I love it! I can't wait to see how he and Hayai interact with team 7. I'm also eager to see how they deal with this mission.

Sheesh. That's one heck of a jutsu Gatsuuga has developed. It actually reminds me a bit of something I thought of before, though I can't remember what.

Great chapter, Hazard-san! Off to read more.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/12 - 07:09 am · For: Relapse into Illusion
Wow, Gatsuuga actually makes a decent teacher. That surprises me somehow, I didn't think he was patient enough to tolerate anyone. Good for him :D

That's actually quite evil, to have Hayai's dog sniff Sakura and then not have it work T_T I really thought that was gonna go somewhere. Darn...

Well, awesome job on this chapter, Hazard-san. With this seemingly failure of a mission, it makes me wonder if Naruto and Sakura are even gonna see Sasuke. Looking forward to more, keep up the amazing work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/12 - 11:18 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
I hated this arc in the actual Naruto series because of Sai betraying them and everything. It seriously ticked me off. I like it so much better with Gatsuuga and Hayai there instead. At least they're loyal -_-

Good job on this chapter, Shizake-san! I'm looking forward to seeing how our two main characters react in the rest of this arc. Keep up the good work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/12 - 05:28 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
“ Well that’s what happens when I have spare time and nothing to do, and living around people that constantly piss me off.”

“ Good, now lead the way team, because I don’t remember where Tenshi Bridge is…”

Best lines in the whole chapter :D Both made me chuckle, makes me appreciate Gatsuuga just a little bit more.

I'm really looking forward to this mission, it oughta be interesting with Gatsuuga and Hayai on board instead.

Good job on this chapter, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work you guys!

Author's Response: Glad you like the subtle comedy, it's just what pops into my head and seems natural for him to say :p The mission will be very interesting for sure and Shizake will have the next chapter up soon enough!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/08/12 - 07:45 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Joining team seven, huh? This sure is an interesting twist. I'm eager to see where this goes. I'm loving Gatsuuga's sarcasm, and it's so nice to see Hayai's PoV again. He's a nice contrast to his partner.

I'm curious - what time line is this in? I mean, of course this is Shippuden. It seems like right after the Gaara Rescue arc. Am I right? Are they taking the places of Sai and Yaamamoto? Because if so, I'm very eager to see their part in the mission. So far the fight was really fun. What more can they do, I wonder.

Great chapter, Itoko-san! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Yes, that's where we are picking up I do believe, unless Shizake says otherwise. Thanks for the review, Hazard out.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/12 - 08:42 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Ooh, Gatsuuga and Hayai join Team 7, huh? That's an interesting twist. I wonder how that will turn out, what with those two coming back into society and all. I'm also curious as to what this mission will be. I'm sure it'll be really epic. The fight was also really well written. Nice job on this chapter, Shizake-san!

Author's Response: Yup! Who knows lol. Thanks for the review :)


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 11:10 am · For: Relapse into Illusion
I forgot how much I loved these two. It's a great start, adding in humor and setting things up. I liked how you gave us a quick explanation of Hayai and Gatsuuga's time and release. And he only killed nine? Come on, if you're going to joke, at least make it realistic. Gatsuuga would have killed at least 15. * rolls eyes at self*. Don't ask - weird review moods come very randomly.

Anyway, again, great start, and I can't wait for Hayai's PoV.

Author's Response: Thanks for the input, and I agree he would have killed more if he wasn't put in solitary :D Glad you like the mild humor, and I'm looking forward to Hayai's P.O.V as well!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/12 - 05:24 pm · For: Relapse into Illusion
Ooh the sequel! If this is anything like the first one, this should be really good. I'm so excited to see how this goes. Off to a really interesting start with Gatsuuga being released from prison and bunking with Hayai. I'm looking forward to more. Nice beginning guys!

Author's Response: Thanks for being our first reviewer! I don't want to spoil anything yet, but if you liked the first one you'll like this!

Author's Response: Thanks for being our first reviewer! I don't want to spoil anything yet, but if you liked the first one you'll like this!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/06/12 - 08:02 am · For: Abysmal
Ryu: Uh, please give Sasaui a second. She's off in the corner crying. *five minutes later*. Now she sharpening her scy- No! Sasaui, put it down! You cannot kill Danzo!

*ten minutes of fighting later*

Okay, apparently I am not allowed to kill Danzo, or poke out every last one of his eyes. So, I'll just settle with a review.

The overall story was great. I really enjoyed it. The second I saw there might be a sequel I wanted to tell Ryu to go break them out for it. It was a great story, and it definitely deserves a sequel. Though that is all up to you guys.

I am really sad that both Hayai and Gatsuuga met bad endings. I hope like crazy that things will work out for them somehow. I had really bonded with these characters.

All I have left to say is you two did a fantastic job and definitely deserve all the love and reviews this story has gotten.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and sorry (maybe we're not) for pulling on your emotions, but it's what this story is. Just crazy. Anyways, as far as a sequel goes it will probably take some time, but it very well may happen. Who knows. Thanks for reading!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/06/12 - 07:47 am · For: Abysmal
Wow. Just wow........

THEY ARE FINALLY DEAD!!!!!!!

That was a great battle. I can't believe Hoshi would pull such a trick. Well, I guess I can, but you know what I mean. That was just wrong. But in the end, Hayai killed her. And Gatsuuga had an epic fight of his own. Shira so deserved what she got.

Wait wait wait. He's still going crazy? Nuh Uh! That's not allowed either! No no no! I already had to deal with Shizake dying. I don't want to see Hayai go insane.

Is it bad that I laughed at the title? Your really stuck on the four horseman thing, huh?

Author's Response: Epic fights huh? Hope it wasn't too gruesome for ya. Thought he would be getting better? Nope haha Haha sure? I'm lovin the four horsemen right now Thanks for the review :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story and it's entirety.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 06:14 pm · For: Abysmal
T_T Oh my god... What the heck?! Nothing worked out for them! Gatsuuga is in prison, and Hayai is labeled as insane! This sucks! T_T Not the story, I mean the way things happened in the end....

*sigh* I mean, I know there aren't always happy endings. It was great that they completed the mission, but still, I guess it would have been great to know that those two had a somewhat happy ending after the mission.

You both did really great with this story. Everything was completely original and you made a great story. I enjoyed reading this from beginning to end. I'm sad to see it's over, but it was a really good read nonetheless. Great job guys! You both work really well together.

Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying our story!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 06:01 pm · For: Abysmal
Are you kidding me?! Hayai and Gatsuuga kill those monsters, and Hayai is still losing his mind?! This is terrible! Omg T_T

The fight was so epic though! I loved how both parts went. I really enjoyed the intense epicness of it all XD I'm still really upset about Hayai though... Hopefully, the last chapter will tie it all up for me.

Good job on this, Shizake-san! This was a great and epic installment. The final battle was great.

Author's Response: It was a pretty messed up battle in terms of emotion Haha I hope it wasn't too gruesome for you ;) Thanks for the review :)


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 06:42 am · For: Abysmal
No. No no no no no. They are not allowed to die. I refuse. I will come in there and kick their butts if they die. No martyrs allowed on here!

Okay, now that my panic attack is out of the way, this was a really good chapter that has me on the edge for the conclusion. I must know what's going to happen. I want to see the fight!

The fact they made Kakashi and Asuma leave is probably one of my favorite things here. It shows just how noble the two of them are. I love it! Great job on this. I can't wait for Itoko-san's update.

Author's Response: Ahh, so you a little tense for what's going to happen? Up next will be a great fight, so get ready!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/12 - 05:06 am · For: Abysmal
Omg, it is almost over O_O This is crazy! Those two are both suicidal! They can't die! I don't want them to! Oh my gosh T_T

I am really looking forward to the fight. I don't want anyone to get hurt, but I still want epicness :D

Good setup for the showdown, Hazard-san! I'm looking forward to seeing how this story ends!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and it's supposed to bother you a bit, haha.Glad you like the setup, and the battle will be great as well!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 12:41 pm · For: Abysmal
I feel worse for Hayai the more I read about him. The poor guy is being tortured by this. I hope that after a while he'll be okay.

Sheesh. Those blackouts are going to be a real pain and I have a bad feeling it's going to screw things up for them.

I can't wait to read more of this. I'm so very excited. And sorry, but no-can-do on the banner. Think you could ask Yuumai or DDTD? They're both great artists.

Author's Response: It comes with the business you know? Blackouts are indeed bad...haha I asked DDTD so maybe she'll come through. Hopefully. haha Thanks for the review!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 12:13 pm · For: Abysmal
Darn it! More things making my imagination go wild. Now I'm thinking he's under that puppet jutsu spell. Stop fueling my imagination!

Anyway, great chapter. It was rather twisted, but I enjoyed it. Poor old man. I feel bad for him, being the one to die like that.

Oh man! Where is Hayai? Great, more wood in the flame of my imagination. I just told you to stop that! *sigh* Now I have to go read more before my brain explodes.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 06:09 pm · For: Abysmal
Hayai should have just gotten rid of the rogue gang's boss for good. Would have knocked one thing off their list.

Hmm, now that they're getting ready to strike... I wonder how it will all go O_O I'm kinda scared for all of them...

Nice update, Shizake-nii-san! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: True. But with the place loaded with other rogue's that wouldn't of gone down well. Plus with his shoulder and all :P Hopefully you'll like the final confrontation Thanks for the review :)


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