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Reviews For A Mother's Return

Name: Adelheid (Anonymous) · Date: 10/05/08 - 10:53 am · For: Promise
It was a great storyline keep going with it you got something.


Name: mike (Anonymous) · Date: 19/02/08 - 03:40 pm · For: Sweet Love
beutiful, love it! but what happens next, cant wait for the next chapter.


Name: Poketto Kunoichi (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 - 09:59 am · For: Saika
Hi!

Your character seems a bit on the Sui-ish side in my opinion, upper borderline, but not completely.

She is 4"10, 98 pounds, and about 22 years old. And Iruka is her younger brother, and Naruto is ex-lover. She can't be that short unless she has a medical problem. And she has that demon.

But the good part is that people aren't head over heels for her.

5/10


Name: Ryann (Anonymous) · Date: 10/02/08 - 09:57 am · For: Saika
she traveled with gypsies. Please, share where these gypsies are. I would like to earn how to make clones.

ripple gaze is practically like mangekyou sharingan.

Is she anorexic or something? 28 and 98 lbs? Woooooow.....

a midget or a dwarf? 4'10?

She has a demon. *gets a megaphone*RIP-OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay, the alchemist thing=original! Good for you!

Naruto is her ex-lover, and shes twenty eight?

oh, and one last thing......

she is stalking gaara. she likes gaara. but she is 15 years older then Gaara. That, my dear, is child-molestation.

mmmkiay bye!

Ryann-chan

Author's Response: The gypsies live off in the land of sand. They are just nomads that live there out of the control of the governemt and the ninja. They are very powerful with ninja arts, and they are excelent healers.rnrnI have never heard of the whachyamacallit jutsu. Sorry. thanks for telling me though. rnrnShe is actually 28 years old, but she has the body of a 13 year old. hence the shortness and the lack of weight. rnrnSorry about the demon. Gomenosai! *bows*rnrnNo. Naruto is in love with her because the fox demon inside of him is very protective of her. The foxs feelings are displayed through Naruto in violent outburst of passionate affection. Dont ask how it works. It just happens, and everyone as learned to deal with it. rnrnThank you for liking the alchemist portion. I like chemistry, so i had to put that in there. plus i'm an herbalist/ medicine woman. rnrnShe deeply sympathizes with Gaara #1: Because their childhoods were very close, #2: She believes that her son would have turned out just like Gaara had he lived. you'd need to read some other stories to get it, but yea...thats why.rnrnThank you for reading my charrys bio, even though she's kinda weird. Thanks and take care!


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 - 07:07 pm · For: A Love in Hate
omg! that was so great! i loved the whole thing! one of THE best short stories ever! it was so cute and funny and sexy all at the same time! well off to read more! thanx for the awsome read!
~lemon


Name: Alesia (Anonymous) · Date: 04/11/07 - 02:33 pm · For: Demon's Lament
EEEEEEeeeekkkkKKKKK!!!!!!!! *fangirls* I totally didn't see that coming! I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!!!!!!!!!! Please put a new chappie on!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: ^_^ I'm so glad you reviewed!! YAY! I will post some more as soon as I revise it. Right now, I'm taking all my chapters and fixing them so they flow better and are more like a story, not some random kid junk. Take care, thank you! *hug* YAY! *squeal!*


Name: Alesia (Anonymous) · Date: 04/11/07 - 02:29 pm · For: Demon's Lament
Ooooohhhh...Does Tamo like Mitsu? Aww.. And she just sees him as a kid brother. Poor Tamo


Name: Alesia (Anonymous) · Date: 04/11/07 - 02:26 pm · For: Demon's Lament
Awwww...Poor Tamo. Having to wait for 5 months for his Sissy, and then getting smacked upside the head. Tisk tisk


Name: Alesia (Anonymous) · Date: 04/11/07 - 02:23 pm · For: Demon's Lament
Awwww...she has a soft side!


Name: Alesia (Anonymous) · Date: 04/11/07 - 02:20 pm · For: Demon's Lament
Mwhahaha....She's so hard-core. I love her!


Name: Alesia (Anonymous) · Date: 04/11/07 - 02:15 pm · For: Demon's Lament
Love it! Nice descriptive words, good suspense. The visual image I got was really cool.


Name: ... (Anonymous) · Date: 16/10/07 - 03:36 pm · For: In Lucifer's Way
is that how it ends? weird...

Author's Response: I have been weighed down with school work so I have not been able to finish this story, or any of my stories. I'm sorry for this, but I have to focus on my last few months of school. I'm a senior and I need to pass all my classes or I wont graduate. I'm sure you understand. Again, I'm sorry and I thank you for taking the time to read my work, however bad or good it is.rn-Zoey


Name: ... (Anonymous) · Date: 16/10/07 - 03:36 pm · For: In Lucifer's Way
is that how it ends? weird...


Name: chieko (Anonymous) · Date: 27/09/07 - 02:46 pm · For: A Love in Hate
that was really good u should write more


Name: Animaniagirl (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 - 01:14 am · For: A Love in Hate
hahaha awesome =]

Author's Response: Thank you for reading^_^! It's always loved and appreciated!rn-Zoey Sohma


Name: Star Princess (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 - 07:00 pm · For: A Love in Hate
Ooh, tempting! I love the ending! That was great! I really enjoyed reading this.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reading my story. A good author always loves the praise of his/her readers. Thank you very very very very much! Hope to hear more from you!rn-Zoey Sohma


Name: Verzida99 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 - 04:54 pm · For: Battles at the Ball
Nice story, except for the messing up my OC character's name!!!
It's ZEREK not Zeruk.
(smacks self on forehead)
but very good writing, i could visualize everything in here
:)

Author's Response: HOORAY! YAY! *glomps the little brother!* I fuve you!


Name: Skittles (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 - 04:34 pm · For: A Love in Hate
I lurve this a ton sissy! But I gotta know, how the heck was this like me when my boyfriend came over?

Author's Response: Don't ask me. What was all that crap in your note about poo pies and whatnot. You little freak. Don't talk to me like you know my a**. (said with much sisterly love an affection). Now go away. I need to do some more writing. Luv ya, Sissy-chan!rnrn-Zoey Sohma (yor sister!)


Name: owner of Gaara (Anonymous) · Date: 28/08/07 - 02:12 pm · For: In Lucifer's Way
wow, this is hot so far... i can't wait to read the rest of it, when it comes out. you could amke a Naruto yaoi fanfic book thing

Author's Response: lol. I doubt that, but I will finish the rest of the chapter later. I couldn't do it earlier since I was in school and the librarians can monitor the computers. I didn't want them reading SasuNeji yaoi and freezing my comp so they could find out it was me. Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it. rn-Zoey


Name: Nicola258 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 - 04:53 am · For: A Love in Hate
Aww sooo cute!! I thought this was a great chapter heehee Xxx

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I'm going to make this story second in a series with Sasuke, Naruto, Neji and possibly Lee and Sakura. But I dont know yet. We'll see how it goes. Thanks for reading!rn-Zoey


Name: owner of Gaara (Anonymous) · Date: 27/08/07 - 06:25 pm · For: A Love in Hate
O_O HOT FUCKIND DAMN!!! That was, how do you put it... arouseing! wow. just wow! that was bad-ass-tastic. i need to glomp you for that.

Author's Response: Well I'm certainly glad you enjoyed it^_^. If you wish, glomp away. I do it all the time myself to good authors. I really thank you for reviewing and for reading my work. Many thanks!rn-Zoey


Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 - 02:52 pm · For: A Love in Hate
Oh more, more, more, please? This story is amazing. But if you decide to end it here I love the way to did it (:

Author's Response: If you don't mind an OC butting in, I was going to have her randomly come in on the two of them. I'll see what I can do, but I have school and everything. Wait for me and I'll see what I can come up with! Thanks a million for reviewing. It means alot!rn-Zoey


Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 - 02:33 pm · For: A Love in Hate
OMG!OMG!OMG! What will happen with Sasuke?! Gah! Need to find out, must read next chapter...


Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 - 02:11 pm · For: A Love in Hate
Man that was funny.I wonder how will they survive together for two days?


Name: Hinagirl326 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 - 01:11 am · For: A Love in Hate
wow, naru-chan puts out when he's drunk. teehee. hope you continue =^-^=
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-- Zoey Sohma : oh I'll continue alright^_^! Just give me about a week to type out the rest of chapter three.


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